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Chris decided to slag out another crapfest!

11 years ago

Okay, being known as a person who decides to slag out bad stories every few days, I will make another! This is a 'scary' horror story! Well, the premise is that you are playing a haunted game where the AI knows they're in a game. They escape and stalk the player until the player either kills themselves, tries to hunt down the AI, or dies from anything else (I.E. Gets shot by a gun-toting AI, crashes their car, etc.). It is under development and the tagline is still under works (The tagline is the biggest problem with me). Now come, feedback! Come with your share of trolls, critics, and people who might actually like the idea!

Chris decided to slag out another crapfest!

11 years ago

Don't write something shitty. :)

Chris decided to slag out another crapfest!

11 years ago

I won't... Or will I? *Maniacal laughter*

Nah, I'll do the best I can. But I can't guarantee most people will like it, since, well, it was written by me.

Chris decided to slag out another crapfest!

11 years ago

So it's an evil AI rather than an hunted house story?

Chris decided to slag out another crapfest!

11 years ago

Purty much. And it's more than one AI. And I must ask, your opinions, Mr. Madbrad?

Chris decided to slag out another crapfest!

11 years ago

The idea seems okay, you need to expand a bit for me to probably give you an opinion. Now it's just a sketch, I need a painting to rate it. I'll give you my opinions when you release it.