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Im new here! (16 and from the uk! ) and planning to start my first story tommorow called "what's the point?" A story about a outcast to society who even now at the  end of his days aged 70 has still achieved nothing,has no friends and  his family doesn't even care.Can your change this? or is this pathetic little mans life predertermined by fate? Well what do you think? 

So is it like a time travel story?
 

I might need some more detail to judge this. It seems like a decent basic plot, but you would need to really expand to make it entertaining and exciting for players. You'll have to have a few endings as well, not just two or three. But it sound intriguing.

Haha yepp i knowww! :) anywayy ive decided to delay it and instead im working on a horror story which im hopefully publishing tonight :)?

Awesome! Tell me when you've published so I can play it! And don't rush your story, some of the best stories on this site were written over months, sometimes years.

Haha yepp i just wanted to do a few smaller and ultimately less ambitious games first  so ill learn some lessons and recieve  some good feedback so my more ambitious story's will live up to there potential! :)