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If it was better

10 years ago

I have an idea for a series of storygames where I take bad/troll stories and make them better, like how James made 'A Stuck Up GAme' better as 'A Very Conceited Storygame'. So, what do you guys think? I'll probably start off with 'Dont die', one of the more recent stories.

If it was better

10 years ago

No, we got enough bad stories and attempting to "fix" them doesn't work.

Focus on making some good ones or at least better than the Warriorcats crap, which still shouldn't be that hard.

If it was better

10 years ago

Not really fixing them, but taking the same concept and remaking it.

If it was better

10 years ago

^^Can't stress this enough.

If it was better

10 years ago

I did that with a game called Paladin. Not that I finished my version, but yeah. I think it's a fun exercise. ^_^

If it was better

10 years ago

It's strange that you have a game called Paladin, I made a game with the same name, though I doubt they were similar in any way other than the name.

If it was better

10 years ago

Might've been the one that 'inspired' me, though... was there a gender option that ended the game if you chose to be a girl? XD

If it was better

10 years ago

I never published it. in fact, I was going to make it on my account 11302, but then I got banned and now I can't continue it unless I make a sub-title for it. But can you send me a link to that game? It would be nice to read something bad that ISN'T intentionally bad.

If it was better

10 years ago

...oops. Apparently I missed some drama. XD

Anyway, it's unfinished and frankly kind of 'meh,' but here you go:

 http://www.philome.la/MorganRille/paladin/play

 

If it was better

10 years ago

Wow, my story and that story are similar, with the place where the character stays and the age was exactly the same. Very strange... Besides, I'm probably gonna make that Paladin story again, but in a different manner.

If it was better

10 years ago

When did you get banned?

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10 years ago

I forgot. I think it was a day or two before I made my 2nd account Chris11302.

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10 years ago

Why? 

If it was better

10 years ago

Maybe an admin was sick of me being a little shit.