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Okay, some of you may have seen my first story game, a warriors fanfiction. I just would like to have your opinions on it. Am I going in the right direction or the 'cliche' direction? Please tell me. If I am, I'll either fix the current one or incorporate it into the second part (there are only two parts)

Also, I might look for a co-author soon, so if you're interested, tell me somehow. Thank you!

As tempted as I am of the coauthor spot, I don't want to spoil the story for myself, and am also coauthoring two other stories.

As for my opinion, I've filled out a large comment and two PMs with it.

I appreciate your opinion and comments  I just wanted to know if there's anything I should improve upon (more options, longer, etc)

Rosetail is a good authority on what makes a decent WC story, Will11 is a good authority on what makes a decent story, period. They both liked it, so you're doing something right.

Okay thanks :)

You're welcome. Sorry I can't offer more of an opinion than that right now, I don't really feel up to critiquing anything today.