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okay so here's the link--

chooseyourstory.com/story/you-can't-control-love

   so it's a romance story,i've changed the plot up a bit >:) you won't know yet no demon, no were wolf, no ghost...something else...right?

i need some tips and personal ratings before i continue or publish it. thankzzz! 

I recommend a good spelling check, bit longer paragraphs, and maybe.....longer story?

Oh, and http://chooseyourstory.com/story/you-can't-control-love (link)

yeah, i'm not done writing it yet

and will do the other suggestions!