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Would anyone mind beta-testing and proofreading one of my games?
Also, telling me whether it should be continued or trashed?
Thank you :)

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/wakening

That was actually the first game I made on this site e.e
And the first I published as well
After publishing it, I wanted to add more to it but...I'm not sure if anyone will like it xD
And really, I'm not sure whether it belongs in Horror or Puzzle/Mystery and also I'm not sure about the difficulty and maturity rating for it. I'm still fairly new >.>

Hey Seto,

I'm also fairly new. Newbies unite! No, seriously. 

As a newbie, I have not beta tested a storygame before, but I'd be happy to try. As a former teacher, I'm a stickler for grammar, therefore pretty good with editing. I'll tackle it tomorrow.

Newbies unite!
Let's help each other! X3
And that'd be good, as I'm sure I've probably missed a lot of stuff e.e

And just finished, commented, and sent a PM. My grammatical edits were about 17 pages long in my Word doc, just to try and incorporate everything. I must say I'm impressed. It's long and twisty!

Yes x3
I have a plot. A creepy little plot for it and a huge mystery.