MrAce321, The Reader

Member Since

11/19/2020

Last Activity

8/30/2025 9:03 PM

EXP Points

28

Post Count

622

Storygame Count

3

Duel Stats

19 wins / 9 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

24
Hey, I'm Ace. To do list: Escape triple shame Done: 7/5/22 Complete 25 well thought out reviews Progress: 17 Write a story with a rating above 5 Here is where I keep track of the stories I've reviewed. If I reviewed your story and you're curious as to the rating I gave it it's on there. Reviews

Storygames

A Bird in a Cage
You're a man out for blood until it finally goes too far and you attract the wrong kind of attention. Now with only three days left to live, your powers stripped and your sanity restored, it's time to find out if you can redeem yourself in the short time you have left. Or even if you can perhaps find a way out from under the guillotine hanging over your head. Author's note: This is a story for EndMaster's Prompt Contest 4. The prompt was, "A story about redemption of past misdeeds. (As if it needs to be said, you can't redeem a pedo)" There are a total of four epilogues, with one being a "true" ending. It's not said which is the true ending, but it should be fairly obvious. Every choice is a new branch. There is no rebranching or stats, just a classic cave of time story. Comments are obviously the most treasured thing in the world, even if it's just a favorite part or just a list of why this is the worst story in the world.

A City Lost

This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.

Authors Note:

This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.

The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."

I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.


Bound by Light

This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.

Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.


A Tale of Freedom and Chains
unpublished

Crime PG story
unpublished
dcas

Placeholder for story about PG
unpublished

No


The Candy Man
unpublished
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school

Recent Posts

I just started, but now I’m stuck. ,_, on 8/27/2025 7:37:33 PM
I genuinely thought it'd go to boobs tbh.

Hatter's Cabaret on 8/20/2025 3:01:02 PM
Well in that case, assuming one is left, I'd like a 25 dollar commission then!

Hatter's Cabaret on 8/20/2025 1:59:47 AM
I would buy a commission, but I'm not in the discord, so I don't think I could. Would love to commission you sometime in the future though

Thunderdome on 8/12/2025 4:46:56 PM
I remember hearing from reading Stephen King's writing books/autobiography that when he was starting horror novels weren't really that much of thing, pretty much just short stories in magazines. I've barely read any short stories, but for my Creative Writing class I'm taking this fall one of the required books is "Best Short Stories 2023", and in the syllabus it has a bunch of readings from that book, so I think that's good exposure.

Thunderdome on 7/28/2025 10:17:14 PM
you're gonna loss? you can't even grammer bruh.

Do YOU like typing? on 7/27/2025 2:32:37 PM
If it's any consolation, I assumed as much. Though I did also wonder why you didn't just edit your original post lmao.

Thunderdome on 7/27/2025 12:42:07 PM
i mean i wrote 500 words last night... might be able to find another 1500 somewhere. Assuming the 2k word limit is still in place?

Do YOU like typing? on 7/26/2025 9:45:02 PM
That's fucking crazy. I've made like 30+ alts in my prime, and never considered that. I guess the kids these days are smarter. I do remember attempting SQL injection on the log in page to try and get an admin account lmao

Do YOU like typing? on 7/26/2025 9:33:14 PM
Dude I loved this shit back in 6th grade. I still never learned how to type correctly though. I use one finger on my right hand and three on left hand and don't look at my keyboard, so I think I technically touch type, I just don't do it correctly. Last time I checked my wpm years ago I was low 50s, but apparently now I'm like 88, which is pretty cool.

Thunderdome on 7/23/2025 8:44:18 PM
Yes, sounds great. This weekend or next is fine with me