MrAce321, The Reader

Member Since

11/19/2020

Last Activity

4/1/2023 12:59 PM

EXP Points

15

Post Count

223

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

19 wins / 6 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

14
Hey, I'm Ace. To do list: Escape triple shame Done: 7/5/22 Complete 25 well thought out reviews Progress: 15 Write a story with a rating above 5 Here is where I keep track of the stories I've reviewed. If I reviewed your story and you're curious as to the rating I gave it it's on there. Reviews

Storygames

A City Lost

This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.

Authors Note:

This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.

The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."

I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.

Bound by Light

This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.

Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.

Crime PG story
unpublished
dcas
Placeholder for story about PG
unpublished

No

The Candy Man
unpublished
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school

Recent Posts

Coronation Thread on 3/29/2023 1:38:48 PM
If you have to ask, you don't need to know.
CoG staff pissing off their base AGAIN on 3/20/2023 11:30:38 PM
I did the html image tag with an imgur link. I assume that's because I need to upload it to the site or something to do it that way.
CoG staff pissing off their base AGAIN on 3/17/2023 7:19:05 PM
Looked into it hoping to throw him a couple bucks, but it seems he doesn't at least as of now. E: Fucking images, here's a link to the imgur.
EndMaster's Prompt Contest 2 on 3/12/2023 12:22:03 PM
Thank you so much
Tools for writing CYOAs to be uploaded online on 3/11/2023 6:57:55 PM
Could you send those links to me as well? Or just post them in the thread?
Prompt Contest Progress Thread on 3/10/2023 11:50:39 AM
You're sure about crystalpeng? That sounds like cope.
How do you feel about Zodiac signs? on 3/10/2023 9:29:40 AM
I think people who actually believe in them are dumb, but that there are fun.
CYS Media Archive on 3/8/2023 9:26:29 PM
They read my review, I call that a win all around.
All these noob stories on 3/5/2023 12:16:20 AM
Yours was the only one I clicked through a little, it looked really impressive.
All these noob stories on 3/3/2023 5:46:02 PM
Some of those stories were really too good to be school stories. I mean damn, there were multiple 10k+ stories. I've had 5 page term papers for college classes and 5 pages is like 1300 words. That's like writing a 50 page story for your middle school english class.