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This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.
Authors Note:
This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.
The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."
I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.
This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.
Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.
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Note that when I say "beat" I actually mean "help her deal with it". If a woman sets a firm no, you should respect that. But a no doesn't always mean no, it can just mean "not yet". Re-read the "limits" section of lesson 13 and you'll see how a lot of what I say there can be applied to LMR. We're just going to help her make the choice she wants to make in the first place."Anyway, here's some snippets, I've tried not to omit clarifying information.
"Recall back to lesson #17 and the emotional techniques I taught you. Specifically negation and confusing the conscious. Re-read those two and think about how we can apply them in this situation. Do it, because I gave examples back then. It'll go something like... "We're not doing that..." (as the two of you are kissing) "Of course we're not... that'd be very naughty... we're not going to do any of that... or this..." (you move on from just kissing her to full on making out and touching her, stripping her) "I don't think we should be doing this..." "It's okay, we can do this because it was raining yesterday..." [when it wasn't] "...and remember that midget we met... just relax..." I know this sounds fucking stupid and like there's no way it'll work, but I guarantee you that it does... oh it so wonderfully does. If you cannot make it "all the way" the first time, do not despair. Once you get a final "no", demonstrate that you understand. However I still want you to "get used to" cumming in the presence of the girl at the very least. If you can tell that she is turned on, but set a limit on sex for whatever reason, keep on kissing her, and tell her how much she turns you on. That you cannot control yourself, you cannot control the urge. Then whip it out while touching and kissing her, and start jerking it to her. It can just so happen that, after she sees that, she gets turned on and lets you go all the way. If not, at least she can help you out by hand. This last tip is obviously only applicable if you got reasonably far before getting LMR (she is nearly naked and you've groped her all over). If she's still fully clothed and you haven't touched her boobs yet, don't whip it out randomly.This is one unbroken section. Cel will go onto to talk about how he says multiple times "obviously don't do this unless it's applicable!!" but the problem is it's never applicable. Even if she's nearly naked, but doesn't want to go all the way, you don't fucking "whip it out". And the emotional manipulation and confusion is honestly some of the worst shit I've ever seen. Here's a recounting of a sexual experience Cel admits to having, from his perspective, so in reality it's likely much worse.
Some girls you straight up will not be able to fuck as soon as you want. These will often, but not necessarily, be virgin girls. Don't think every, or even most virgins are like that, I fucked multiple virgins and almost all of them I fucked the very first time we ended up alone at my place or hers. Virgin or not, some will set a mental limit on themselves that "it's not going to happen". I will share one such example with you: The first time this girl spent the night, I obviously wanted to fuck her. The issue was that the girl grew up very conservative, and had no prior boyfriends. But she wasn't a virgin for that long because she was ugly or anything. No, she was a bombshell and I literally could not believe it all the way until I saw blood on my dick. It was because she had high standards and was conservative. And with those high standards, she also decided that she wasn't going to give it up that easily. She had it set in her head that not only were we not going to have sex that quickly, I wasn't even going to see her naked. She has confirmed this to me later, she said she knew I was going to try something, but that she planned not to let me get further than taking off her shirt. I started kissing her, then began fondling her. As I was about to strip her top she was all like "whoa there, what are you doing". I knew it wasn't going to last long. I backed off a bit and kept kissing her a minute or two and tried again, this time taking off her shirt. With the pants it was harder. She did not want to take those off. I had to kiss her a lot, and slide my hands under the pants to grab her ass. I did it a lot until at one point I slid her pants down slowly. She was relaxed and turned on by this point so she let it happen. But that was it in her mind. She was a virgin, this was "enough" for her. "You know we're not going to have sex, right?" "Sex? Of course not. Whoever mentioned that? You've got a dirty mind, girl" I teased with a smile. I heard that line plenty of times, and I wasn't discouraged in the slightest, as I knew in most cases it means nothing... However after trying to take her bra off, I could tell that she was pretty set on me not seeing her naked. Oh well, I was hoping to fuck, but can't win them all. I backed off for a while and we chatted... then I went at it again. This time after getting her hot and bothered again I started rubbing her pussy over her underwear, which she seemed to also be against. But I knew what to do. "Hey, what are you doing?" "Ssshhh, don't worry. I'm not doing anything..." "That doesn't seem like not doing anything to me..." "Well, yeah, but it's okay, because you know today is Wednesday?" (it was not Wednesday) "It's okay, you can just relax and enjoy this..." I repeated this "confusion of the conscious" once or twice, and she was soon completely relaxed and enjoying the rubbing. I started kissing her breast and grabbed it with my other hand. She said nothing. I dragged it upwards out of the bra and the nipple was free so I started sucking on it. And because the "threshold" was now crossed I simply undid her bra and she slipped it off, now letting me completely enjoy her breasts. If she was that resistant about the bra, I knew there was no way in hell taking off the underwear would be easy, so I did the next best thing: I maneuvered my finger around the underwear (she was very wet by this point) and slipped it in. I could see the shock on her face for a second, but when I started rubbing her g-spot she remained silent for several seconds, then started moaning and moving her hips... And then it was like she woke up from a trance. She ignored how good it felt and said "no, that's enough" and I could tell it was a final no, so I removed my finger and continued kissing her. But just because she doesn't want to get pleasured, doesn't mean I don't want to, so I pulled out my dick. I kept telling her how much she turns me on as I kept kissing her and touching her all over with one hand, while jerking it with the other. Slowly I took her hand and moved it down there. She was hesitant at first ("I'm not sure, I don't know how to do this") but I eased her into it ("don't worry, just relax, I'll tell you what to do"). It took her a while but she managed to finish me off, and I was satisfied with that, for now. We got dressed and went for a walk on the beach afterwards, lied down on some stretching chairs, and talked, really connecting to each other. She did not get apalled or insulted that we "went further than she intended" because I did not force her into anything. I just got her to relax and move the limits of acceptable on her own. The next time she came over, it was a done deal. What is the point of this story? Maybe there is no point and I just wanted to try out as a porn writer? Just kidding. The point is not to get discouraged when a girl gives you LMR because: #1 You can get much further than you or her think. If you do it right, you will go all the way with most (~90%) girls, even if it takes you the entire night. #2 Even if you don't go all the way, once you break through one limit, all the rest will fall into place soon. She was dead set on only going as far as taking her shirt off, but using the techniques I talked about I ended up fingering her and getting a handjob. The next time she spent the night, we had already "gone pretty far" so it was a lot easier for her to internalize going all the way. She later told me that "she planned on making me wait at least six months". Lmao, as if. This was a very extreme example, the average girl is not anywhere near this difficult, and you will be able to fuck most immediately as soon as you get them into bed. Just don't show that it bothers you or get angry. Chill out and try again. And again. As long as it takes (unless you get a firm no)Yeah, that's awful. I don't really know what else to say about it honestly. That's the section, start to finish, straight from the man's mouth. The rest of the Sex part 1 section has a bunch of lol material, but nothing as bad as these two sections. I planned to cover both chapter 19 and 20 in this post, but honestly, that might be a little much for one post. For now, I'll leave the thread with these two snippets. I think Cel will agree that I haven't taken his words massively out of context and have been largely fair in my quoting.
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