MrAce321, The Dramatist

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11/19/2020

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3/18/2026 2:13 AM

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Hey, I'm Ace. To do list: Escape triple shame Done: 7/5/22 Complete 25 well thought out reviews Progress: 17 Write a story with a rating above 5 Done: 5/1/25 Here is where I keep track of the stories I've reviewed. If I reviewed your story and you're curious as to the rating I gave it it's on there. Reviews

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Storygames

A Bird in a Cage
You're a man out for blood until it finally goes too far and you attract the wrong kind of attention. Now with only three days left to live, your powers stripped and your sanity restored, it's time to find out if you can redeem yourself in the short time you have left. Or even if you can perhaps find a way out from under the guillotine hanging over your head. Author's note: This is a story for EndMaster's Prompt Contest 4. The prompt was, "A story about redemption of past misdeeds. (As if it needs to be said, you can't redeem a pedo)" There are a total of four epilogues, with one being a "true" ending. It's not said which is the true ending, but it should be fairly obvious. Every choice is a new branch. There is no rebranching or stats, just a classic cave of time story. Comments are obviously the most treasured thing in the world, even if it's just a favorite part or just a list of why this is the worst story in the world.

A City Lost

This is a story about an artificer making his way through the world. Making choices who shape who he is and who he will become. With even his motives shifting based on his choices.

Authors Note:

This is an entry for EndMaster's prompt contest.

The prompt was, "This story’s protagonist is an artificer, magical blacksmith, or creator of magical weapons. You can translate this prompt to a sci-fi equivalent if you want."

I managed to make this story into a complete product with all the content I wanted in the time given, but I didn't have time to polish the prose much. Please leave any feedback you have. And just for fun make sure to include which of the nine epilogues you got or your favorite if you read multiple.


Bound by Light

This story is about a paladin who is on a quest to investigate an unkown evil out west, joined by a lighthearted mercanary.

Authors note: This story was made in a few days for Corgi's Lords of the land 2 contest. Not really proud of it, but it is what it is. Please leave any feedback you have in the reviews because while I know time could've improved the prose, the plot seems to be lacking something that I'm not sure of.


A Tale of Freedom and Chains
unpublished

Crime PG story
unpublished
dcas

ONE DAY ONE SHOT
unpublished
aseffesafeasfea

Placeholder for story about PG
unpublished

No


The Candy Man
unpublished
paper slingers but with kids selling candy in boarding school

The Devil is a STEM Major
unpublished
One Day Storygame Contest
Credit to RK for Question 3. And Ogre for one choice in particular.

Recent Posts

Death of a Serbian on 3/16/2026 10:00:48 PM
15 points and a toast to Cel's dishonor. Yahoo!

Death of a Serbian on 3/16/2026 12:07:38 PM
Everything I'm going to talk about will be from 2 sections of this "book", titled Sex part 1 and Sex part 2, lessons 19 and 20. I have not read any other sections, the ones I have looked at seem to be more inline with just boring, sexist incel rhetoric, which is in line with what's expected of you. I'll try and provide context where it's warranted, but the purpose of this post is to highlight the most specific grievances filed against you in regards to this accusation. Yes context helps a little, but it's pretty damning all the same imo. The first glaring section is one titled LMR (Last Minute Resistance) I know he's going to reply with this, so this is a clarifying passage from this section
Note that when I say "beat" I actually mean "help her deal with it". If a woman sets a firm no, you should respect that. But a no doesn't always mean no, it can just mean "not yet". Re-read the "limits" section of lesson 13 and you'll see how a lot of what I say there can be applied to LMR. We're just going to help her make the choice she wants to make in the first place."
Anyway, here's some snippets, I've tried not to omit clarifying information.
"Recall back to lesson #17 and the emotional techniques I taught you. Specifically negation and confusing the conscious. Re-read those two and think about how we can apply them in this situation. Do it, because I gave examples back then. It'll go something like... "We're not doing that..." (as the two of you are kissing) "Of course we're not... that'd be very naughty... we're not going to do any of that... or this..." (you move on from just kissing her to full on making out and touching her, stripping her) "I don't think we should be doing this..." "It's okay, we can do this because it was raining yesterday..." [when it wasn't] "...and remember that midget we met... just relax..." I know this sounds fucking stupid and like there's no way it'll work, but I guarantee you that it does... oh it so wonderfully does. If you cannot make it "all the way" the first time, do not despair. Once you get a final "no", demonstrate that you understand. However I still want you to "get used to" cumming in the presence of the girl at the very least. If you can tell that she is turned on, but set a limit on sex for whatever reason, keep on kissing her, and tell her how much she turns you on. That you cannot control yourself, you cannot control the urge. Then whip it out while touching and kissing her, and start jerking it to her. It can just so happen that, after she sees that, she gets turned on and lets you go all the way. If not, at least she can help you out by hand. This last tip is obviously only applicable if you got reasonably far before getting LMR (she is nearly naked and you've groped her all over). If she's still fully clothed and you haven't touched her boobs yet, don't whip it out randomly.
This is one unbroken section. Cel will go onto to talk about how he says multiple times "obviously don't do this unless it's applicable!!" but the problem is it's never applicable. Even if she's nearly naked, but doesn't want to go all the way, you don't fucking "whip it out". And the emotional manipulation and confusion is honestly some of the worst shit I've ever seen. Here's a recounting of a sexual experience Cel admits to having, from his perspective, so in reality it's likely much worse.
Some girls you straight up will not be able to fuck as soon as you want. These will often, but not necessarily, be virgin girls. Don't think every, or even most virgins are like that, I fucked multiple virgins and almost all of them I fucked the very first time we ended up alone at my place or hers. Virgin or not, some will set a mental limit on themselves that "it's not going to happen". I will share one such example with you: The first time this girl spent the night, I obviously wanted to fuck her. The issue was that the girl grew up very conservative, and had no prior boyfriends. But she wasn't a virgin for that long because she was ugly or anything. No, she was a bombshell and I literally could not believe it all the way until I saw blood on my dick. It was because she had high standards and was conservative. And with those high standards, she also decided that she wasn't going to give it up that easily. She had it set in her head that not only were we not going to have sex that quickly, I wasn't even going to see her naked. She has confirmed this to me later, she said she knew I was going to try something, but that she planned not to let me get further than taking off her shirt. I started kissing her, then began fondling her. As I was about to strip her top she was all like "whoa there, what are you doing". I knew it wasn't going to last long. I backed off a bit and kept kissing her a minute or two and tried again, this time taking off her shirt. With the pants it was harder. She did not want to take those off. I had to kiss her a lot, and slide my hands under the pants to grab her ass. I did it a lot until at one point I slid her pants down slowly. She was relaxed and turned on by this point so she let it happen. But that was it in her mind. She was a virgin, this was "enough" for her. "You know we're not going to have sex, right?" "Sex? Of course not. Whoever mentioned that? You've got a dirty mind, girl" I teased with a smile. I heard that line plenty of times, and I wasn't discouraged in the slightest, as I knew in most cases it means nothing... However after trying to take her bra off, I could tell that she was pretty set on me not seeing her naked. Oh well, I was hoping to fuck, but can't win them all. I backed off for a while and we chatted... then I went at it again. This time after getting her hot and bothered again I started rubbing her pussy over her underwear, which she seemed to also be against. But I knew what to do. "Hey, what are you doing?" "Ssshhh, don't worry. I'm not doing anything..." "That doesn't seem like not doing anything to me..." "Well, yeah, but it's okay, because you know today is Wednesday?" (it was not Wednesday) "It's okay, you can just relax and enjoy this..." I repeated this "confusion of the conscious" once or twice, and she was soon completely relaxed and enjoying the rubbing. I started kissing her breast and grabbed it with my other hand. She said nothing. I dragged it upwards out of the bra and the nipple was free so I started sucking on it. And because the "threshold" was now crossed I simply undid her bra and she slipped it off, now letting me completely enjoy her breasts. If she was that resistant about the bra, I knew there was no way in hell taking off the underwear would be easy, so I did the next best thing: I maneuvered my finger around the underwear (she was very wet by this point) and slipped it in. I could see the shock on her face for a second, but when I started rubbing her g-spot she remained silent for several seconds, then started moaning and moving her hips... And then it was like she woke up from a trance. She ignored how good it felt and said "no, that's enough" and I could tell it was a final no, so I removed my finger and continued kissing her. But just because she doesn't want to get pleasured, doesn't mean I don't want to, so I pulled out my dick. I kept telling her how much she turns me on as I kept kissing her and touching her all over with one hand, while jerking it with the other. Slowly I took her hand and moved it down there. She was hesitant at first ("I'm not sure, I don't know how to do this") but I eased her into it ("don't worry, just relax, I'll tell you what to do"). It took her a while but she managed to finish me off, and I was satisfied with that, for now. We got dressed and went for a walk on the beach afterwards, lied down on some stretching chairs, and talked, really connecting to each other. She did not get apalled or insulted that we "went further than she intended" because I did not force her into anything. I just got her to relax and move the limits of acceptable on her own. The next time she came over, it was a done deal. What is the point of this story? Maybe there is no point and I just wanted to try out as a porn writer? Just kidding. The point is not to get discouraged when a girl gives you LMR because: #1 You can get much further than you or her think. If you do it right, you will go all the way with most (~90%) girls, even if it takes you the entire night. #2 Even if you don't go all the way, once you break through one limit, all the rest will fall into place soon. She was dead set on only going as far as taking her shirt off, but using the techniques I talked about I ended up fingering her and getting a handjob. The next time she spent the night, we had already "gone pretty far" so it was a lot easier for her to internalize going all the way. She later told me that "she planned on making me wait at least six months". Lmao, as if. This was a very extreme example, the average girl is not anywhere near this difficult, and you will be able to fuck most immediately as soon as you get them into bed. Just don't show that it bothers you or get angry. Chill out and try again. And again. As long as it takes (unless you get a firm no)
Yeah, that's awful. I don't really know what else to say about it honestly. That's the section, start to finish, straight from the man's mouth. The rest of the Sex part 1 section has a bunch of lol material, but nothing as bad as these two sections. I planned to cover both chapter 19 and 20 in this post, but honestly, that might be a little much for one post. For now, I'll leave the thread with these two snippets. I think Cel will agree that I haven't taken his words massively out of context and have been largely fair in my quoting.

Will's Stand on 3/15/2026 9:16:24 PM
Will, I am the retarded child. I joined this site 9 years ago, when I was 11. I made some awful games, one was 200 words. My profile had over 10 spelling and grammar mistakes every sentence. If you don't believe me, this is the profile link. https://chooseyourstory.com/Member/?Username=jeff21turtle I got banned almost immediately. I made multiple alts, joined MinnieKing's server, eventually was able to sneak back in as MrAce. I was mediocre on the forums for a while, before I became the first person to get triple shammed, and got banned for it. (Take that lazy kids, back in my day triple shame meant BAN!) I snuck back in as Serpent. I might've been 14 by this point. I managed to get into the discord, since it was public at the time. I was very annoying on discord, and ended up leaving of my own volition, revealing myself as both jeff21turtle and MrAce, causing me to be banned in the process. I made MicroPen, and at the age of 15 or so managed to write enough reviews to get back into the discord. I was very retarded, looking back at those messages makes me wonder how anyone had the patience to interact with me at all.Eventually I started alt spamming again, and was banned for it. I then spent 4 and a half years in effective exile. Eventually I was allowed back on the forums, but it wasn't the same. I improved myself as both a writer and a person, and eventually made it back inside. Having layed out the 9 year span throughout the whole time I was looked down upon, ridiculed, told to kill myself multiple times, why do you think I kept coming back? Why didn't I just go to another site? Because this site and the community attached to it is amazing. Even when they all hated me, I knew it was a problem with me, not them, and I worked to fix myself and improve as a writer so that I could be a part of it. I was ridiculed as a 15 year old in the discord server, but I was also helped with numerous issues, and given so many tips and so much advice I didn't frankly deserve. Mizal sent me a fucking cookbook for gods sake, which I never used ( sorry mizal :( ). Without this community, I wouldn't be interested in writing. A big part of my drive to improve as a writer was so that I could be a better member of this community. That's the point of the ridicule, any kid is welcome to leave at any time. Hell, we allow so much leeway with younger kids, even when they're spamming up and down the forums. Think about how everyone loves Avo. The alt spammers and rude children are older teenagers, 15+ usually. As an educator, I find it hard to believe you think these older teenagers aren't capable of handling a little mocking, especially with the behavior they demonstrate. Anyway, this is off topic. My point is simply that you don't understand the community. In my time being here, you've never been a part of it. You've been invited, but you've never really sat down and ate with us and seen how we treat each other and even how we treat the retarded children. You just see pieces of the mocking out of context. Which is fine, you don't need to engage with us, but you don't get to pass judgement on how things should be on a small forum of less than 100 active people, when you don't interact with the most active of them. You encourage productive behavior, that's commendable. If that's all you're interested in, the storygames and reviews, then that's fine! But other people call CYS their home instead of just a collection of storygames, and you don't get to dictate what is and isn't "proper" behavior.

Books You Could Not Put Down on 3/3/2026 2:56:46 PM
Will of the many is the best book I've read in years, I listened to the 25 hour audio book is a week while also having uni classes the whole time. When I'd pick it up I'd listen to it for hours at a time. It's about a magic academy story, very roman inspired and it's just the best thing ever. A lot of themes about the morality of revolution and the like. The second book came out like 5 months ago if you get really into it too.

Wardens, lmao on 3/3/2026 2:14:41 AM
Yeah they really upset the apple cart, huh?

Wardens, lmao on 3/2/2026 1:12:50 PM
Thara best mod. I'm coming for you SU, don't worry.

The 24 Hour Storygame Comp on 2/23/2026 12:33:23 AM

CYS HOT TAKES on 2/8/2026 9:12:53 PM
I'm not even going to venture to guess anyone else because this is so obviously Chris coded

CYS HOT TAKES on 2/3/2026 1:56:48 PM
Flux

CYS HOT TAKES on 2/1/2026 2:25:52 PM
Based on Mizal's reasoning about security risks, I think Cavus might be anal enough for this take.