A Walk in'a Park
A
modern
storygame by
kingjoecatmcdlxiv
Player Rating
?/8
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Based on 6 ratings so far
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
3/8
"Must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
Tags
Action Adventure
Humor
You're a dude. Taking a walk in the park. Oh and, of course, it goes spiraling out of control. It's my first story, so it's not incredible. I'm just trying to learn the system while making something weird and goofy.
Player Comments
It's another one of these.
I'm surprised with the amount of branching, but the overall quality is just sad. A good sign that a storygame isn't so nice is the line counter(that usually doesn't apply to longer pieces), when you have an average of 4 lines in each page, we've really got nothing to work with.
I understand this is a test, but don't publish it if so. Effort is required for a storygame to stay up, you know.
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PerforatedPenguin
on 9/22/2021 11:24:23 AM with a score of 0
If you don't have any plot and any exciting thing to write about. Don't write. Seriously, this is far more boring than reading the instructions on a cereals package.
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poison_mara
on 9/22/2021 11:16:07 AM with a score of 0
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