Player Comments on Alien Abduction

The premise of this game is very straightforward, you are abducted by aliens and have to escape to get back home. I thought the writing did a reasonable job of setting the scene, and trying to figure out how to find useful items and then use them helped keep the game engaging. It took me a little bit of time to work out how to actually use the cards to escape! The character was developed just enough to make you care about them. Purely for fun, I checked some of the ‘bad’ endings and I thought they were kind of amusing.

The game was very simple, but what was written was executed well, although I would have liked there to be some more puzzles, e.g. to get each of the cards. The brevity of the game and simplicity of the challenge and plot mean I can only give it a 5/8, but all in all it was a good storygame.

I loved this. The puzzle itself was a little simplistic, but the way it's designed, the way the player actually moves around the game world made it feel more like interactive fiction than a CYOA. One of my WIPs is in that style so it's interesting seeing it in practice.

The writing was good and funny, and most of the actions that led to death were clued in well enough. (Though I was clicking them anyway just to read the endings! The 'didn't you read the sign' one was short but got a laugh out of me.)

It was short, straightforward, and fun with a touch of silliness. I really enjoyed the narration, and the puzzle was both original and interesting.

I also enjoyed the pretty colors. The blue background really added to the alien atmosphere, although your writing alone was enough to set the tone.

And most of the death scenes made me laugh, which is always a plus.

This was an interesting game, but not the most fun. It was fairly straightforward, and felt more like just going through rooms until I found what I needed than a game. I honestly wouldn't call it a puzzle, but a good time-killer. 5/8

Not that bad, not bad at all.

Perfect

What I really liked about this game was that I cold tell the author had a lot of fun writing it. The description were great and I enjoyed the constant sarcastic and witty little jokes (most of them at my expense after doing something stupid to get me killed!) which I found entertaining.
I found it to be quite a maze to complete this game, though, which I'm guessing was sort of the point. It also took me about 25 attempts to get the end bit to work. I thought it was very creative though and I liked it a lot!

:) This is awesome! [Though I wish there was no rear references...]

It is awesome this is the goat!

(greatest of all time)

Nice work…

Fun little story. I was entertained!

This was quite fun and it had an interesting premise as well :)

It was short but it just was to confusing. But your writeing is good just keep practicing. ;). Also I gave it a 4/8 srry keep practicing.

that was so much fun! good job!

I have to say, even though it only had a 10 day time limit, the story could have been a bit longer. I was actually disappointed in the story game. It was ok...but it had too much backtracking to the point where it did not feel like a story anymore. However, the plot was great! I enjoyed it. I feel like someone of your writing capability could remake this story into something even better. However, for now I am sorry to give you a rating of a...

4/8

neet. short but funny

If I still wound up at Aunt Mary's did I really win?

Another fun story, Ogre. I just couldn't keep my curiosity in check, though, and had to try and befriend the critter the first time through. He would have made a good pet and livened up Aunt Mary's humble abode.

I enjoyed the game. Seemed to be entirely too fixated on butts, though. Lol. Well-written. I hope you make the game longer and more challenging after the contest. Would be a pretty good game. :)

I liked it! The narration was sassy. It had a straightforward puzzle and good writing mechanics.

The airplane was filled with airplane noises LOL.

Another great Ogre11 story :) I really enjoyed the puzzle/maze aspect of this and I wish I could do the things you do with the nice writing and background :D Another excellent story