Appearance vs. Reality

First path was with Gil and the other person. The story started off great in the beginning with the introduction of the friends that you get to choose from. I knew Henry would obviously be the better choice since "besties 4 ever" is generally the better route. However party routes always intrigue me so I went down that path with the party and the undescriptive hookup that could have had a bit more added to it without mature content being needed.

The endings to the paths that I had received seemed a bit rushed but they were all the "bad" ones with him losing everyone so the good ones were probably more descriptive. Even so, you could have added some more deppresing aspects for more emotion since losing everything is pretty awful.

Still, this was a pretty good first story that had good plot structure but could have had a lot more description added. Hope to see more stories from you.

holy shit that is a lot to read

A nice story it turned out well, not very exciting but reality generally isn't.

It was pretty cool you can make your own out of the choices to plot twist your story which I never heard of before!

You said hom instead of home btw. :)

I liked it

not bad

excellent storyline! I loved it!

I liked how the book was nice and calm, nothing scary. But I wished it could be more involved with the Hamlet play assignment.

This game's good, you have efforts. Keep up the good work!