Exploding Alarm Clock - Sabotage!

This was certainly a nice prequel. Sure, you don’t have to read the other story first, but I would suggest that anyone who is considering this story should go ahead and read the other one, this one will make a lot more sense and be even funnier if you read that one first. You also won’t really know what you’re supposed to do unless you read the other one first.

That said, this is a nice little story. It illustrates a nice use of items. I like that there are options, though it is a little bit of a puzzle game: it’s not that there aren’t paths, but there is clearly one path that leads to a better ending (that takes a little to find). It is excellent that there are different endings, and I do like that you can at least attempt to use items whenever you want, even if they don’t always have the effects you might think they will have.

I also liked the way at least one of the ending tied into the other story! This is another nice little story that is good fun. This also has some good examples of how to use items and how to branch into different endings based on decisions made by the reader. Good job with this one!

I love this. Wish you added more visuals though.

This game is so fun. had so much fun playing it hope you like it to.

It's actually pretty good. Short, yes, but I kinda like it.

Like most games, there are one or two grammatical mistakes, and the pages are quite short, but I think it was probably worth it.

But really, where did the 'lesbian' thing come from? that was a bit annoying.

I gave this 5/8.

Cute, humorous story! Fun prequel!

Good Job!
Again the humor put into this game is wonderful.
I can't help but say the original is better though.
Keep up the good work!

An interesting prequel. Though not as good as the original.

5/8

Not as good as the alarm clock-return that item! But still okay.

A very interesting prequel.

Well... this is one of those games where you have no idea how the author came up with the idea. It's pretty funny, and I liked it. On my first try, I got ending three (the best, according to the story). If you're on this site because you are bored, than this story is for you.