Player Comments on Little Red Riding Hood
This story was better than expected. Though much has been done with alternate stories/endings to classic tales. It was somewhat amusing to see the different endings that the author used here.
Admittedly though, I do not understand why this is an "edutainment" storygame unless it is trying to educate us on the dangers of stereotyping the wolf.
This story has decent branching and a variety of endings, especially for a shorter game.
Not much effort is put into characterization. This is presumably because most folks are familiar with the Red Riding Hood theme.
The story appears to be well written. No obvious grammar or structure errors distracted from the story. I felt that the dialogue was decently written.
Overall this was a decent game and better than I expected upon starting it. Since it is short, it is worth it to check out the alternate endings the author has come up with for this classic tale.
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DBNB
on 5/13/2022 12:43:21 PM with a score of 0
I made it
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Phoenixthe1st
on 8/16/2024 7:04:52 AM with a score of 0
she was a really fun story.
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— Mrkavionbethany on 10/27/2023 11:58:01 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed the endings very much! I especially enjoyed the endings that were unexpectedly wholesome!
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cherry
on 12/4/2022 11:42:51 AM with a score of 0
its so boring not worth it
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— urmom on 11/1/2021 10:33:50 AM with a score of 0
it was okay kinda boring
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— jayda on 8/26/2021 3:10:21 PM with a score of 0
The wolf has to eat too! Give grandma to the wolf for dinner.
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— fyuiyytyfyibjh on 8/25/2021 5:15:33 PM with a score of 0
Shorter than your grandma.
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— No on 8/25/2021 5:07:02 PM with a score of 0
it was pretty interesting
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— Emily Mendoza on 8/25/2021 1:58:41 PM with a score of 0
It was alright
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— Bob on 2/2/2021 5:52:27 AM with a score of 0
This is some story, but I should have gave grandma her medicine instead of running away
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— Ashlyn on 8/26/2020 12:29:13 PM with a score of 0
me bone
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— emily on 10/1/2019 3:22:36 PM with a score of 0
a very creative game at its better than homework
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— dany on 9/19/2018 3:15:02 AM with a score of 0
I love the twist on the classic fairytale. Such an adorable story!
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— Alexandra on 5/6/2018 7:06:26 PM with a score of 0
its good
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— remas on 12/12/2017 8:41:50 AM with a score of 0
I really must say that the options were pretty fun and more fun than normal homework !! Thanks love the story : )
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— Kanishka on 12/6/2017 12:41:44 PM with a score of 0
I got that we were best friends! Nice job with keeping originality but putting a few twists!
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— swimminnarwhals on 10/27/2017 9:47:18 PM with a score of 0
Wow, this game was incredible. It's a wonderful twist on the old fairytale with about a dozen different endings, all of which were really well-written in their own individual ways. I loved this!
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Saika
on 4/5/2017 4:38:45 AM with a score of 0
cool
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Voltage
on 12/12/2016 8:31:49 PM with a score of 0
Wow.
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— Tarbo134 on 10/28/2016 12:08:12 AM with a score of 0
It was fun and good
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— Louis on 10/20/2016 3:35:10 AM with a score of 0
Not bad.
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Raven47
on 10/12/2016 7:39:24 PM with a score of 0
Wow, I must say that I love the rather new twists that you made with such a recognizable fairytale. It certainly kept things fresh, and it didn't change things too dramatically to achieve that effect. Arguably so in the not changing things "too" much :)
Anyway, I found this to be quite imaginative, the humor and writing is definitely praiseworthy to say the least. I recommend that everyone give this a read, multiple ones in fact to get the full experience from this rather lovely story.
Bravo, kallykat :D
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TharaApples
on 10/12/2016 4:41:33 PM with a score of 0
i like it but rather go with the real storie i liked that you made it up though
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tinaraceeown
on 9/16/2016 10:44:42 AM with a score of 0
aw, it's so sweet and funny! thanks for making it!
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KrazyKat12
on 8/3/2016 8:09:16 PM with a score of 0
Cute!
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Seto
on 6/10/2016 11:10:36 PM with a score of 0
This was so funny! I really enjoyed this. I would like to see how you can interpret more fairy tales. This was fantastic.
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ThatOneAuthorGirl
on 5/15/2016 10:19:49 AM with a score of 0
I made the wolf into a nice wolf pie. Oh what a twisted child I am... :3
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CurseOfTime
on 3/26/2016 4:05:14 PM with a score of 0
Great writing, even the unlikly choses have a good ending, ;)
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Dmanxbox
on 12/3/2015 1:59:22 PM with a score of 0
it was quite good not the best but it is alot better than homework thats for sure but im glad they made the game
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— jack on 10/15/2015 10:39:27 AM with a score of 0
it was very funny thank you for publishing it :)
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— Cameron on 10/15/2015 10:34:24 AM with a score of 0
This was really good! I enjoyed playing on it!
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— Holly on 10/15/2015 10:28:16 AM with a score of 0
This story's moral: Grandmothers are badass.
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DerpBacon
on 3/21/2015 2:19:06 PM with a score of 0
it was a very funny tale by me trying to tell a lie and then i pull a knife out of my basket.it was just my liking
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— jacob on 12/2/2014 4:57:48 PM with a score of 0
A nice take on a traditional tale though Little Red hacking wolves to death for food seems a bit of a stretch. The writing was good though and I'd be interested to see how you interpret other fairy tales :)
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Will11
on 11/10/2014 4:11:58 AM with a score of 0
"The Wolf forces some silvery liquid down her throat."
Hm.
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FazzTheMan
on 10/25/2014 11:34:16 PM with a score of 0
This is good I enjoyed this.
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— Andrew on 10/2/2014 9:31:15 AM with a score of 0
GOOD
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— TYLER on 10/2/2014 9:30:29 AM with a score of 0
I think that it was good.I ALSO THOUGHT THAT IT WAS COMICAL.
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— jamie brooker on 10/2/2014 9:29:24 AM with a score of 0
This game is a good game I liked it alot,it was exicting choosing wich way to go.
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— charlie on 10/2/2014 9:29:10 AM with a score of 0
I think that it was good.
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— abi heaton on 10/2/2014 9:28:40 AM with a score of 0
I had fun playing the, though a-lot of the "reasonable and logic" choices led to the game ending which annoyed me a bit, but I enjoyed playing this. Poor Wolfie though, seemed nice enough.
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— Kitt on 8/7/2014 2:33:35 PM with a score of 0
the Grandma has rabies but wait who gave them to her?
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— jelly on 7/25/2014 10:10:43 PM with a score of 0
It's fun how you can change the endings of the fairy tale :). But it was a little short...
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Zephyrme2847
on 4/8/2014 6:56:38 AM with a score of 0
I enjoyed the surprise twists.
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twonkykitty
on 9/5/2013 11:22:21 AM with a score of 0
ooooh! It's cool! However, I'm kinda iffy about how the wolf's intentions will change. Gotta say, though, that i liked it when he tackles the gramma and says "i'm a doctor!"
hahahahaha
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puddlebunni
on 5/18/2013 5:23:11 PM with a score of 0
woah cool ending
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missyworld
on 3/17/2013 7:32:36 PM with a score of 0
The Wolf's bestfriend. awwww. I thought he's about to eat me or something.
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toni
on 2/19/2013 4:33:00 AM with a score of 0
Pretty cool. I have always wanted to be best friends with a wolf. ;-)
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miss_natalo
on 2/8/2013 9:42:44 PM with a score of 0
It was amazing; after listening to the same thing a billion times I found it was really refreshing.
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Darkbound
on 2/2/2013 5:41:28 PM with a score of 0
Not bad, good writing and interesting choices. I also liked the twists to each ending.
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ThePuzzleMaster
on 12/31/2012 10:36:22 PM with a score of 0
Well, I really liked it! Very nicely written version of a brilliant children's story. Only problem I have with it is that different choices lead to completely different situations, like sometimes the wolf is the good guy and sometimes he's the bad guy, and sometimes the grandmother is the wolf in disguise and sometimes she's just the grandmother, so that didn't make sense, but it's a kid's story so I wasn't that bothered. :)
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Briar_Rose
on 11/23/2012 6:10:53 PM with a score of 0
Wolf pie yum. 6/8
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Zane
on 11/18/2012 11:25:22 PM with a score of 0
it was awesome i liked it alot i always liked little red riding hood.
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— shane carden on 11/7/2012 3:57:13 PM with a score of 0
FUNNY! LOL
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— Jenna on 11/7/2012 3:44:11 PM with a score of 0
I love little red riding hood because I like that she is responsible enough to go through the woods to go and visit her grandmother.B)
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— Maddox on 11/7/2012 3:15:30 PM with a score of 0
this is realy fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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— cooper on 11/7/2012 2:50:28 PM with a score of 0
It'd be nice if you developed this further, but it was very good for two hours' work. I hope your students liked it!
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— Sarah on 11/4/2012 12:00:33 AM with a score of 0
Fun. I made a wolf-pie on the first try!
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— MrsBrown on 11/3/2012 11:54:57 PM with a score of 0
You made the wolf... A GOOD GUY?! That was awesome. Even better than recees cups.
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rae38
on 11/2/2012 5:48:32 PM with a score of 0
Quite fun, but you should really make the alternative paths longer if you want a great rating.
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Evagirl
on 11/2/2012 10:31:10 AM with a score of 0
Good! It is an ok story but the original is better! This is the same at the beggining but ends weird. why is one of the comments, good... to poop on? Your bestfran:)
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kallykat
on 11/2/2012 10:09:42 AM with a score of 0
I loved the different endings, keep up the good work!
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Xt1000305
on 11/2/2012 4:27:59 AM with a score of 0
XD I wasn't sure what you were going for at first (traditional, realistic, what-if, etc), but this turned out to be pretty entertaining.
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Mrkoolis13
on 11/1/2012 11:53:37 PM with a score of 0
Short and strange, but I thought it was entertaining enough =)
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BerkaZerka
on 11/1/2012 12:49:17 PM with a score of 0
this is a good story but crazy! from your bestfriends <3
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kallykat
on 11/1/2012 10:46:22 AM with a score of 0
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