My usual week

I wouldn't call this an CYOA though, as you have very limited options on what to do every turn, for example, you can snooze and snooze and snooze, but eventually you'll still have to go to school anyway, if would've been better if you could make options that drastically change the plot, rather than minor choices that add nothing to the overall game.

Plot issues aside, some of the endings haven't been completed yet, as if you were too lazy to make something worthwhile of killing time. The only redeeming factor of the adventure is no grammar mistakes, other than that, it's just boring.

If this was a product of laziness then I suggest taking down this story so others can play more seriously crafted adventures, instead of just wasting time on a poorly made unfinished product.

I would recommend making more choices, adding more detail, finish the pages, and add a plot-line. Try and write something to draw the reader in and want to play it again and again. Make the reader feel like they are the character with amazing details, even if they're tiny ones. Plot is something every story and every game needs to be interesting. Good luck!

BOOOOOORINNNNG!
Nothing to do. I like history and computers, NOOB. What's the point?

so basically im living some other dudes life and it's just like normal? no excitement, adventure, action... nothing? wow. sweet.

Pretty good!

The grammar and spelling was all good :) Although, at the end of the story/ near the end, the option to play Minecraft with your brother leads to two other options. If click the link to watch T.V with him, there's nothing written on it. I'd suggest unpublishing this, and fixing that issue. But apart from that, it was alright. 4/8

Soooooooooo boring I could fall asleeeep ??

Very good, really boring though.

The author warned us it was boring. Warning verified.

I agree though; if you yourself know it is boring why don't you change it?

There are so many pages that only have one link. I would recommend fixing that. And it really wasn't that good.