The Thief and the Crown Puzzle

This is a puzzle game rather then a regular story, for who are asking.

I have liked your puzzle (Solved at first attempt when the time was 10!) and the little story you got there.

For me, it is a easy-medium puzzle, and I think that puzzle will be great, if you just increase the length of the story, before you get to the chest.

I suggest to keep that puzzle nearly at the end of the story and write the beginning-before chest of the story.

Overall, It's a good puzzle, and I would like to see you add more pages to the story, because it's not actually a story for me, it's just a puzzle game.

My final rating: 4 out of 8 with a smile! :)

Fun game great riddle it was pretty good. Just wish bit longer more of a solitary puzzle than story.

To be quite honest too ez

fun little puzzle!

Not a bad puzzle, but lacking in narrative support. I solved it in 2 moves on the first try, but figure I just made a lucky first guess before I figured out what each knob does.

The small amount of writing is not bad, but it provides merely a glimpse into what could be a story. It would have been nice to have the story surrounding why this item is desired more than all the other treasure. What does it do? Also, there is not much insight into the character.

Overall, very very short. Fun puzzle and scene that has the potential to be a story with a little work.

It's a cute little puzzle. I know you said that you made it mostly as a test, and I definitely do think it could work well as part of a larger game. The writing could benefit from a bit of proofreading.

I did it in two moves.....
im proud of myself

The puzzle was easy once you figured out how all the locks worked, and it had a neat little story. I look forward to seeing it as part of a larger game, as I think this puzzle was too simple to be a story unto itself, but should have been part of a collection of puzzles.

"Today the wheels of fate have been set in motion. Today the revolution begins" .

All you have to do is click lock 2 and 4 to win Plz Fix!!!