Wolf's Love

This is an unpublished story by an author who hasn't even logged in in six years, why are people playing it still?

Pretty good, could be better

i like thise

It's not very good. Punctuation and grammatical errors litter this thing like trash on the side of a road.

I liked it, it was sweet, but it could definitely use some work!

It was nice and all but no matter what path you picked its just the same thing but a different wolf and different environment. It's a great story and has lots of potential but it needs different things to happen and needs to be longer. I'm not saying that I want it to be 10,000 pages long though. Its just that I can probably finish in about 5 or 6 clicks. I'm not too much of a good writer myself but even I think that this has plenty of room for improvement.
Wow! You actually bothered to read this? Good job!

l like wolf

Its a really sweet game

I love this! Please add more! Also you should make one were there are horses!

It was certainly short and sweet. I got Snow as my mate. I wish you could actualy raise your pups, and their were more defined choices, but over-all very well done. Please make it longer, or at least make a sequel.

Okay, there were many, MANY errors in this story. I saw many words that weren't even capitalized, and spots where there should've been some kind of punctuation. Also, this story was awfully short. I got through it in maybe five clicks, and that's not a good thing.
The writing does have potential. Add more description to each page, maybe. And go through your story to find mistakes before you publish it, because there were a lot. 1/8.