Zombieland

Pretty good! There's many Zombie stories on this site, but I don't think that I've ever had the pleasure of reading one in the perspective of the Zombie. I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised by what I read, and only continued to be so as I read through each page.

The writing in this was certainly one of it's strong points, there was a subtle humor in the wittiness of the dialogue, so much so that I found myself genuinely chuckling and smiling to myself as I read.

How you were able to make becoming a zombie fun, I have no idea but I certainly found myself enjoying my new undead life in this story. Thanks in part to the excellent sentence structure and grammar that held this storygame together in a nice enjoyable package.

I really found myself wishing it was longer, so I could read this even more. This was really a rather interesting take on the typical zombie game, so kudos on that! :)

The only thing that holds this back in my opinion is that so many of the paths leads to the demise of the player, it really made me feel that there was more that could've been capitulated on in making this a more lengthier and enjoyable storygame.

So I suppose that it does make this a bit linear in a way.

Still, this was decently written and certainly a blast to read at the end of day.

bruh so short

I really enjoyed this, but so wish there was a versions without the unnecessary curse words so I could use it with my high school students! I know they hear worse, but I like having a job. :)

Not too bad!

This story was fairly enjoyable. The writing was decent, and provided a humorous tone. As compared to most zombie games that have one trying to kill or escape the zombies, this story has you trying to survive AS a zombie. For a short game, branching was ok. My main complaint would be that it is a bit short, and could have benefitted by being longer.

Overall, fun quick read.

Why do I die either which way? It was fun as it lasted, though. Can the author make a vampire story game?! THAT WOULD BE SO COOL!

Meh. It was funny but short and linear. 3/8.

too short and only ending that you dont die is anti climatic

did every ending

aw

yeah