Player Comments on Zombieland > ChooseYourStory.com

Pretty good! There's many Zombie stories on this site, but I don't think that I've ever had the pleasure of reading one in the perspective of the Zombie. I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised by what I read, and only continued to be so as I read through each page.

The writing in this was certainly one of it's strong points, there was a subtle humor in the wittiness of the dialogue, so much so that I found myself genuinely chuckling and smiling to myself as I read.

How you were able to make becoming a zombie fun, I have no idea but I certainly found myself enjoying my new undead life in this story. Thanks in part to the excellent sentence structure and grammar that held this storygame together in a nice enjoyable package.

I really found myself wishing it was longer, so I could read this even more. This was really a rather interesting take on the typical zombie game, so kudos on that! :)

The only thing that holds this back in my opinion is that so many of the paths leads to the demise of the player, it really made me feel that there was more that could've been capitulated on in making this a more lengthier and enjoyable storygame.

So I suppose that it does make this a bit linear in a way.

Still, this was decently written and certainly a blast to read at the end of day.

— TharaApples on 1/15/2017 5:52:09 PM with a score of 0

bruh so short

— lolololo on 12/16/2024 12:16:27 AM with a score of 0

I really enjoyed this, but so wish there was a versions without the unnecessary curse words so I could use it with my high school students! I know they hear worse, but I like having a job. :)

— Ms. G on 10/13/2023 11:38:17 AM with a score of 0

Not too bad!

This story was fairly enjoyable. The writing was decent, and provided a humorous tone. As compared to most zombie games that have one trying to kill or escape the zombies, this story has you trying to survive AS a zombie. For a short game, branching was ok. My main complaint would be that it is a bit short, and could have benefitted by being longer.

Overall, fun quick read.

— DBNB on 11/17/2022 2:30:50 PM with a score of 0

Why do I die either which way? It was fun as it lasted, though. Can the author make a vampire story game?! THAT WOULD BE SO COOL!

— WWEQueen11 on 9/5/2021 9:49:19 PM with a score of 0

Meh. It was funny but short and linear. 3/8.

— 325boy on 10/27/2020 1:19:10 AM with a score of 0

too short and only ending that you dont die is anti climatic

— oompaloompa69 on 12/15/2019 11:47:53 PM with a score of 0

did every ending

— Zarlox on 9/13/2019 9:24:33 AM with a score of 0

aw

— Zarlox on 9/13/2019 9:23:15 AM with a score of 0

yeah

— Zarlox on 9/13/2019 9:22:17 AM with a score of 0

come on

— Zarlox on 9/13/2019 9:17:52 AM with a score of 0

rats again

— Zarlox on 9/13/2019 9:16:50 AM with a score of 0

rats

— Zarlox on 9/13/2019 9:16:31 AM with a score of 0

Engaging. Nice, simple zombie story.

— Quorrah on 9/15/2018 5:00:10 PM with a score of 0

it was good

— lgy,j on 7/17/2018 1:42:39 AM with a score of 0

Very enjoyable.

— UncreativeName on 3/26/2017 10:47:24 AM with a score of 0

It good

— BINGUS on 2/21/2017 7:26:32 AM with a score of 0

Cool, should be longer though

— Voltage on 11/29/2016 7:05:52 PM with a score of 0

zambie heaven... now shoo
XD

— Kiddy on 11/26/2016 4:44:22 PM with a score of 0

I FOUND ZOMBIE HAVEN!!!!!!!!!

— Stormfeather on 11/25/2016 4:16:45 PM with a score of 0

more trial and error than anything

— hideki on 6/6/2016 4:56:38 PM with a score of 0

cool idea- being the zombie!

— w on 5/31/2016 1:44:43 PM with a score of 0

It was great! Although, I just couldn't figure out where the other zombie went.

— Jonahan on 4/28/2016 10:37:18 AM with a score of 0

Nice.

— Shadow_Strider on 4/2/2016 3:58:53 PM with a score of 0

Not bad. Not bad, indeed.

— MasonJarGuzzi on 3/30/2016 2:46:39 PM with a score of 0

Decent.

— RimC on 10/17/2015 5:13:46 PM with a score of 0

I'm glad I'm still in full control as myself and I don't have to eat anyone.

— TheMonitor on 8/29/2015 9:44:35 PM with a score of 0

Its all right.

— KawaiiWriters on 6/18/2015 7:19:13 PM with a score of 0

It quite didn't capture my interest. For me, It also lacked story.

The grammar and almost everything else was alright though.

— Penworth on 6/7/2015 11:40:58 AM with a score of 0

I like the change in perspective. Definitely a rare point of view.. But, like almost every other comment states, it needs to be expanded/edited.

— DMnv12 on 5/25/2015 9:13:29 PM with a score of 0

This is not so much interesting ! it sucks !

— bevan1234 on 5/2/2015 3:41:41 AM with a score of 0

It's way too short.

— LedinFX on 3/5/2015 11:00:29 AM with a score of 0

it was great

— Anime_Fan on 2/12/2015 9:56:33 AM with a score of 0

A brilliant take on the cliche zombie survival story. It would be amazing if you stretched this out a bit more and gave the reader more choices.

— insanebutvain on 9/8/2014 7:47:24 PM with a score of 0

Not horrible. It still needs a bit of work though.

— Kitsumaru on 6/27/2014 11:44:53 AM with a score of 0

that was short

— required on 6/25/2014 8:48:19 PM with a score of 0

4/8 its ok but extremely short and only one surviving ending

— hunter on 6/24/2014 1:52:57 AM with a score of 0

I love your style! I was audibly laughing at many parts!

— Kalefice on 6/12/2014 12:02:59 AM with a score of 0

It was really cool. Even the wrong ways were well thought out. But is the moral really "always eat people"? Because I died.

— SamIAm on 6/11/2014 3:07:38 PM with a score of 0

I wish the story was longer but it was fun playing the role of a zombie instead of a normal survivor.

— Arya_Stormborn on 5/22/2014 3:09:52 PM with a score of 0

A linear horror story with hardly any effort.

— TheRelicMaster on 3/18/2014 11:26:08 AM with a score of 0

Nice?

— jns08 on 2/11/2014 1:52:01 PM with a score of 0

Kinda fun, its a bit short though

— JourneyMaster_ on 1/16/2014 4:10:32 AM with a score of 0

linear

— alab on 12/23/2013 5:30:42 AM with a score of 0

Good story, I can't say that it was very interesting but it did it's job just fine.

— GinMerric on 11/21/2013 9:07:59 AM with a score of 0

His was a good short story. I enjoyed it a lot. I got killed by a bounty hunter.

— Rockdude11 on 10/20/2013 8:52:01 PM with a score of 0

Sucks.

— Frog on 10/14/2013 8:35:37 PM with a score of 0

Good, but short

— betaband on 9/11/2013 8:33:14 PM with a score of 0

Okay, this was different.

— Il_Maestro on 9/2/2013 4:13:58 PM with a score of 0

Such a nice game. NO, NO, NO. People do not, unfortunately, enjoy playing as demented zombies.

— ck23838 on 8/12/2013 9:06:22 AM with a score of 0

...u always die?!?!

— linkgamer on 7/24/2013 4:36:52 AM with a score of 0

Is it possible to win this? I kept going back and trying different options until I felt like a zombie had eaten my brain. Fun game

— Skysworne on 7/23/2013 3:05:12 PM with a score of 0

It was fun being a zombie

— paterson on 7/9/2013 2:02:35 AM with a score of 0

needs a longer story line and less dumb deaths and also a better ending but all in all its good

— jason46661 on 5/9/2013 1:43:58 AM with a score of 0

A good idea to do a zombie game from the perspective of a zombie (who can still think) since this site dosnt have any yet but still very short and liner.

— FeanorOnForge on 4/15/2013 11:13:48 AM with a score of 0

why would somebody make a zombie game when you start out as a zombie

— conner on 3/3/2013 6:18:12 PM with a score of 0

Ok could use some work

— ringo98 on 2/1/2013 5:42:55 PM with a score of 0

This is not good

— Meghan on 12/2/2012 8:18:36 PM with a score of 0

yes i am crazy want to hear my evil luagh?

— hugo23 on 11/26/2012 12:35:43 AM with a score of 0

is there a pert 2?

— alter on 7/30/2012 11:56:53 PM with a score of 0

Malo!

— RobustSporadic on 6/22/2012 7:07:10 AM with a score of 0

Not bad!!!

— Wasteland on 6/22/2012 5:17:45 AM with a score of 0

zombies dont feel pain.

— haledakota on 6/12/2012 2:48:10 PM with a score of 0

short but good

— jjmason on 6/11/2012 1:42:14 AM with a score of 0

A pretty short game. I wanted to see more...

— dealdknakdsvfn on 4/14/2012 1:31:51 AM with a score of 0

fun!

— betaband on 3/4/2012 8:45:35 PM with a score of 0

Not bad! I liked it.

— Indiana on 1/11/2012 8:32:15 PM with a score of 0

Couldnt survive no matter what

— radicalthor on 10/30/2011 10:39:13 PM with a score of 0

It was alright.. I wish it were longer. I found the haven, but yeah. You could've done alot more with this. I wanted more.

— ChaiHai on 9/15/2011 6:57:09 PM with a score of 0

Lol, I found a zombie haven.

— Killa_Robot on 6/9/2011 4:54:48 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good.

— Killer999 on 6/7/2011 11:56:14 AM with a score of 0

lol moral: always eat people

— doodoodude on 9/13/2010 6:13:38 PM with a score of 0

One of the better zombie games. Could use a bit of improvement, but it's not that bad.

— Jeff on 9/10/2010 5:29:45 PM with a score of 0

fun but I wish for a bit more i finished it easy in 10 choices... I like the new view on zombies though. do you explore why they bite people in other choices?

— photo-ninja on 1/26/2010 11:36:21 PM with a score of 0

Just as it got good... over. Oh well, it was pretty cool.

— Juranas on 8/28/2009 12:50:20 PM with a score of 0

Damn- just as the story was getting good, it was over.

Really gave me an experience of what it was like to be a zombie. That alone makes it a good, original story. It was also creatively written. I just wish it was longer- this felt more like Act I than a complete story.

— urnam0 on 7/28/2009 12:43:37 AM with a score of 0

its alright pretty good i got to zombie haven

— donnydude on 3/14/2009 9:54:52 PM with a score of 0

Alright, I won now. Just for ****s and giggles, I went back and check out all the fun ways to die. Always a nice pass time. Anyway, good story. Will there be a sequel? 5/8

— Leon101 on 7/8/2008 2:29:41 PM with a score of 0

I like this. All though I have already played one game for PC that involves being a zombie, "Stubs the Zombie" this was interesting none the less. One little detail though, "And the moral of the story is: always eat people." that moral for this game is wrong. If you eat the bum's brain, you end up being killed by bounty hunters. I don't mind dying from wrong choices, I have read the Zork books, just try not to make mistakes such as that.

— Leon101 on 7/8/2008 2:16:26 PM with a score of 0

Interesting concept, but I don't feel that it was used the way it should have been. The zombies acted too human, and there weren't enough common zombie cliches referred to in this game (Like super zombies by night). Overall, I felt a bit trapped, it feels a bit claustrophobic. I would love to see you expand on this idea with a day/night system, a few more touches, and more area in which to explore.

— Melike on 4/4/2008 11:57:11 PM with a score of 0

6/8 i died fast

— rezy on 12/10/2007 6:25:17 PM with a score of 0

Oh, Cazmanian Devil, when are you not awesome? (Hint: Never.)

— Pythnik on 11/29/2007 12:42:36 PM with a score of 0

6/8 not bad

— Agent_47 on 10/18/2007 9:29:44 PM with a score of 0

This game is really not bad - it's well written, it's a neat idea, but it ends rather abruptly at times without reason. Had you put a bit more time into this game, it would really have been a winner.

— march5th00 on 7/2/2007 4:04:15 PM with a score of 0

it was cool to end up in zombie heavin

— doraiscrap777 on 4/6/2007 3:02:22 PM with a score of 0

Moral of the story is to always eat people!? I died like that as well, I think the moral of the story is to not become a zombie.

Well, other than a weird fake moral that will kill you in this story, it's not that bad. I like the idea of taking over a zombie counter part (I love Stubbs the zombie for PC). So, I give you rep for that.

— Leon101 on 1/22/2007 1:41:23 PM with a score of 0

twiggy didnt really right thet i did, and i will keep making comments until she is the best

— fgnbvl on 11/15/2006 10:16:07 AM with a score of 0

any1 who didnt like this game is jelous of your wonderful talents as yours is the best eva on this sight and you lot all suck like mad.

— twiggy on 11/15/2006 10:14:24 AM with a score of 0

Nice game! Not too linear, and a good amount of words!

— Anubis on 11/7/2006 4:13:14 PM with a score of 0

wow ive neva read sumin quite like it

— me again on 10/30/2006 10:07:49 AM with a score of 0

caroloine this was the bestest story that i have eva read congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

— jennie on 10/30/2006 10:07:01 AM with a score of 0

Good writing, neat idea.

— Sethaniel on 10/29/2006 8:28:21 PM with a score of 0

This was pretty terrible

— CaptainBalls on 10/4/2006 6:35:44 PM with a score of 0

Written very well.

— primates on 10/3/2006 6:30:22 PM with a score of 0

It was written brilliantly, and it's a shame it had to end so early in, but it was a good game. Well done.

— October on 9/25/2006 8:24:48 AM with a score of 0

A pleasure reading this. Without question, some of the best writing on the site. Particularly like the reference to 28 days later, though you left out the "f*cking." Lol. The story isn't long enough, and there are not enough choices, or I would've given this an 8. I'm sure you have it in you - please write more for this site!

— madglee on 9/6/2006 2:46:42 AM with a score of 0

Hey! Not bad! I like your writing! Plus, your grammar and spelling is excellent! Lookin' forward for ZombieLand 2, but make sure not to have too much bloody death.

— GodsSlayer on 6/10/2006 10:06:18 PM with a score of 0

Weird but good. You die a lot though.

— Nargoshmite on 3/7/2006 11:07:24 AM with a score of 0

Nice writing, but needs more choices. And no offence, but I really don't like the whole talking thing. Geez, you ARE a zombie ya know...