Avery M: Dead Man's Journal

This truly was one of the most unique and fascinating experiences that I had the pleasure of going through. This game immediately caught my attention upon the very first page, and it had me hooked on the humor and commentary of the very relatable and witty hero of this story, that is Avery.

The use of items were done rather well, and the game was challenging but in a fun, exciting way. This wasn't a case that I could just leave unfinished, and I felt a sense of accomplishment when certain facets of the case came together, until the conclusion in which all was unraveled and revealed.

It's quite obvious that there was much care and attention given towards the mystery of this game, which was definitely quite a unique and fun spin from the usual mystery game. This game is something that stands out from it's peers, but it stands out in a very positive way.

Awesome! One of my favorite games I've read so far and definitely my favorite mystery/puzzle game on the site. Loved the art, the video and the story. Only flaw I can think of is that it would've been cool if there were more suspects, but otherwise, this is a really awesome story game and I really admire all the effort you must've put into it. 8/8! Will come back some time to read the first 16 pages of the Hunger Games :p

Creative story with good writing and an engaging plot. These features went a long way to making the story stand out on the site. I would have liked to see some of my choices affect events more dynamically, such as a character behaving/reacting in a different way depending on wrong or right choices, and some plot twists. However, as it stands, the story is a very enjoyable read with a unique presentation, clever puzzles, and a nice implementation of the advanced editor. An embedded movie near the end was particularly striking. Definitely worth reading. Nice work.

Great work! Such a unique way to use the medium! Some of the plugins like the newspaper article no longer work, however

Good

OH WOW THIS IS BETTER THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE!

I looooooooooooooooooooooved it it’s kind of like granny except not scary & knock you unconscious or that sort of thing.

pretty good! it was an amazing time waster and i loved the story

Super cool!

I had a lot of fun playing this! I like puzzles that are challenging but not impossible, which this definitely was.