Player Comments on Boys at School - For GIRLS

Well, the game wasn't bad exactly, I mean the grammar was good and I can tell you tried. But I guess one of the downfalls about writing a romance story is that the game will only have as much understanding of love as the person writing it. If the writer thinks that a boy sitting next to you and smiling = true love and happiness for the rest of your life, then that's as deep as the story's going to get. :p

It should be deeper and more complex. Love is.

Oh here... live happily ever after with the first guy you ever meet or die alone.

The Ending was a to little bit harsh.....LMFAO

Not too great, it needs a bit more story and choices along with more excitement. It also needs to be a little bit longer as well.

It's good, but not really understand-ish type. I could have seen something else

Not enough depth for any of the paths (even succeeding)

I LOVE IT

The good-the idea was good.
The bad- the only way to do anything right is to talk to someone at a bar or basically be a slut.... So not worth it. This has to be changed

Dressed like a slut and acted like one, became a super model and lived happily ever after.

I applaud your attention to realism.

that end was really dumb like for real

its good,idk,its just good,not trying to be rude :P

So boring and bad try something else. I hate it.

Why can't I get a good ending with wearing something comfortable?!? I mean, really. This game basically says that unless you act like a dumb fashionista, you become lonley and depressed. This is very upsetting. I played several time, and only dumb choices get me an okay ending. I don't want to be a model, I would rather be a scientist or a teacher. Please don't write stories like this.

It's really good but maybe add pictures or something to make it a bit more fun??

And the moral of the story is *drumroll* you only get noticed by guys who aren't assholes by dressing up! Remember ladies, dressing comfortable is for the single!

Kinda short..

Terrible

Why the hell do I only get to romance the stupid muscular dude who wants to get drunk. Nah.

So I choose the blue dress, because I have a fashion sense and I'm not a sl*t, then I choose not to be an under age drinker, and end up dead and alone. What kind of name is Cale? Someone asking you out for a drink doesn't affect your life that much! Just stay away this is stupid.

Love it

Is his name Cale, or is it Cane? Why does my outfit affect who I meet on the bus? Why do I have three fking gineua pigs after talking to Jon? What are everyone's interests? Why does nobody have a personality? Why does who I get with affect my job? I played all the paths, and one of them wasn't even finished! This story could have been better with a bit more effort and revision.

stay away, far away

It was ok... could have been better.

WAY TOO SHORT

This was absolutely terrible. Many grammatical mistakes, and if you choose maths, (Cale) you end up losing whatever you do, and that's not the point of CYS.
No good.

I like it

Its ok but it wasn't really lovey-dovey

cool

A little too simple for my liking. That grammar was ok though.

To much focus on what you choose for an outfit. It completely changed the story.

Meh

THIS SUCKED

What it just ended you really need to add more stuff to it and it's not completely finished

maybe i did this wrong but only a couple of choices and the game/story is over? Not what I came here for. play length was 3/8 but it lasted but a few pages. I would have loved to see this with some content

What...? It just ended...

OMYJELLYBEANS! if only life was so easy!

Haha my character had all the depth of a puddle :D Based on my choices in that game apparently if I'd been born a girl I'd haven been really easy... hmm. I found that game hilarious (if I cry every time I get a present then my birthday must be the most emotional day of the year) but I'm not sure if it was meant to be :)

Bram and Shrimble ARE CATS! I LOVE CATS! WHO NEEDS HUMAN COMPANY WHEN YOU HAVE CATS!

Okay, but predictable, cliche high school boy meets girl story. Well written but nothing special.

Sometimes short and sweet isn't true it was okay, but could be longer

So there's no way Sally could end up with her Best friend Mattie¿ seriously its obvios Thalía he lijes here¡

#ForeverAlone :D

It was very short and the endings was silly. I have one drink and we become drunk and die....

From the title, I thought this was going to be about boys at a girls' school. Too much manga, I guess.
Anyway, I got "try another path, this one has not yet been written." This story wasn't really ready to be published yet.

Really? Having 2 cats and 3 guinea pigs is a HAPPY ENDING?!

I feel like I'm twelve again. Not the good kind of nostalgia.

Hope you guys like this :3 Sorry, I didn't have much time and I don't know! Don't judge.

Well, apparently studying for science instead of talking to a flirtatious jerk [who moved on to another girl right after] makes you an unmarried, creepy cat lady :P