Player Comments on Cancel the Kirby cartoon!

There were an amount of spelling/grammar mistakes, such as "We'vce" instead of "We've." Closer proofreading would be great for this story.

It seems like this was written by a three year old. The childish humor didn't go well with the plot, and I don't know about everyone else, but I didn't find this funny.

It was insanely linear... it didn't even make sense at some points because it was so linear. Such as this:
"As you keep watching it, you hate it so much you want it cancelled."
That just doesn't make sense. This is a better way to write it:
"You continue watching it, and you really hate it. You decide you want it to be canceled."
Now that sounds better.

There were also screw ups in the logic. You don't "Sell" free things. You give away free things. That doesn't make any sense to sell free things, because sell means to make a profit.

It was also very random, and made absolutely no sense whatsoever. You can't stop a war with free donuts. If you were going for random humor, it didn't work. Not for me at least.

Then there was the suicide choice. It makes you lose on the first choice, and it just shouldn't be there, since it leads you to one sentence and makes you restart the game.

Overall, i'm gonna say 1/8. Try harder.

— MinnieKing on 1/18/2017 7:25:14 PM with a score of 0

I would have thought it was much better if you could have exited it at multiple points. Roaming the various branches of short text, similar sounding kirby related revenge was a little more intensive than I wanted. What I'm saying is please let us die and stay dead!
There were some grammatical and spelling errors as well. The story, however, while silly had some potential if it had been fleshed out a little more. Nothing wrong with silly as long as it's enjoyable and this was enjoyable to an extent.

— bilbo on 12/24/2019 10:23:06 PM with a score of 0

nitty

— ni on 6/22/2019 6:25:33 PM with a score of 0

It is O.K.

— SpaceDust on 3/16/2017 1:18:45 PM with a score of 0

I killed Satan and that somehow ended the Kirby cartoon. If only things were truly so simple.

— Orange on 1/21/2017 4:09:27 PM with a score of 0

Best Story ever. I wish there were more endings

— BossKat on 9/15/2016 3:28:59 PM with a score of 0

Love the endings

— Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:27:41 PM with a score of 0

Hahaha so fun to play

— Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:25:34 PM with a score of 0

It was funny and halarios
Can't wait to see how else you can win

— Crazycraft316 on 6/21/2016 9:22:10 PM with a score of 0

"The cops arrive and shoot the gun, and the man luckily drops it."
Luckily the notorious gun was killed :)

— MasonJarGuzzi on 3/3/2016 9:14:17 PM with a score of 0

Pretty good and funny. Keep on the good work.

— jacksingamer on 3/1/2016 8:03:26 PM with a score of 0

easy!
(COOL)

— robinsoul on 1/17/2016 10:52:53 PM with a score of 0

that was kinda fun love it would probably play again

— becky on 11/21/2015 12:15:02 PM with a score of 0

Yay I cancelled it ??

— KookieKat on 11/13/2015 6:52:09 AM with a score of 0

Love it!

— Isshyyyji on 10/28/2015 5:30:28 PM with a score of 0

Wtf is this shit

— Uolliac on 9/4/2015 12:32:54 PM with a score of 0

Very random. Okay in terms of spelling and grammar, but it wasn't too enjoyable. The more you are able to polish your work, the better and more entertaining you story games will be. Keep on writing! :3

— imagine13 on 7/9/2015 1:25:34 AM with a score of 0

game was pretty bad (and random) and you realize the kirby right back at ya show is meant for 3-7 year olds right? My little sister enjoys it a lot.

— SonicTurboTurtle on 7/8/2015 5:22:44 PM with a score of 0

Ok that was short, easy, and ok, but there can be better

— kawaii_kitty on 5/4/2015 5:02:48 PM with a score of 0

Well I completed it. But it was bad.

— Creature on 4/8/2015 4:01:23 AM with a score of 0

Yay,I stopped the war! May my family win the noble peace prize.

— NewPlayer555 on 2/22/2015 6:08:39 AM with a score of 0

it has a fun lttle game but do you really hibry carton that much

— the last of damon on 11/29/2014 8:57:38 PM with a score of 0

this was like five choices too short

— tapoica on 10/13/2014 4:21:36 PM with a score of 0

That was really good

— HelloThere on 8/21/2014 6:02:03 PM with a score of 0

So short...

— iEmberRainbow on 3/11/2014 6:27:30 PM with a score of 0

What the hell. only write literature if you are actually GOING to try and write something.

— EarthCollision on 2/27/2014 12:49:52 PM with a score of 0

Weird choices dont actually matter. Game is bland yet intresting

— Jhan48 on 12/19/2013 9:43:30 AM with a score of 0

BUT I LIKE KIRBY :<

— RabbitSeason on 12/5/2013 4:23:50 AM with a score of 0

Haha! I remember watching that with a Hebrew dub (back in Israel), I was like 5, so I was entertained, but I now realise (through re watching an episode online) what a piece of crap it is.
Funny ;)

— Tanstaafl on 10/13/2013 1:48:31 AM with a score of 0

Lol! Nice one!

— Il_Maestro on 8/31/2013 7:55:02 PM with a score of 0

I'm not quite sure what just happened. Had a little bit of fun, though.

— ChronoStrike on 5/13/2013 1:23:12 PM with a score of 0

very good and simple!

— mr_baggins on 5/7/2013 6:51:57 PM with a score of 0

It had 'meh' content, but I think it could've been better.

— Psychotikitty on 4/23/2013 9:10:50 PM with a score of 0

I won I canceled it!

— 60guy4 on 3/13/2013 2:31:17 PM with a score of 0

Vvery.... amusing.

— Darkbound on 1/26/2013 5:36:05 PM with a score of 0

I'm a big kirby fan, though I hated the show (what was with King Dedede's mouth?!). Pretty amusing, but why would I waste a magic lamp on cancelling a TV show?! Either way, light hearted and amusing, but still lacking.

— rae38 on 10/25/2012 11:27:05 AM with a score of 0

HAHAHAHA in your face kirby you just got canceled.

— tigerxii on 10/17/2012 7:14:40 AM with a score of 0

It was really short, random, and there was a lot to be explained. Why do I hate Kirby? Why is there all of a sudden people trying to kill me? Also, the way you had written the story was confusing and a spell check I feel was needed.

On the other hand, you did have a good amount of options.

2/8

— JMgskills on 4/11/2012 8:49:39 AM with a score of 0

I like how you made this story but you could change somethings to make it better

— ZenUndead on 3/23/2012 8:24:18 AM with a score of 0

Haters gonna hate, but what if haters hated haters who hate?

— ThisisnotBo on 2/25/2012 11:37:17 PM with a score of 0

Lame.

— awesomeness1242 on 2/17/2012 6:15:53 PM with a score of 0

The way I took was really short.

— awesomeness1242 on 2/17/2012 6:12:52 PM with a score of 0

NO MORE KIRBY

— masterelf on 2/14/2012 1:18:59 PM with a score of 0

lame

— DarkentityOni on 10/29/2011 11:40:53 PM with a score of 0

Just like to say that the ESRB might not like your description's image. Just saying.

— bucket on 9/17/2011 8:37:00 PM with a score of 0

OH this was just awesome

— Socho on 9/8/2011 6:31:03 PM with a score of 0

Bo dissaproves, let the shame wash over you

— ThisisBo on 5/11/2011 10:14:14 PM with a score of 0

This stuff is as bad as your "Let the Red Sox Win!" games. Seriously, make something worth playing!

— fergie14233 on 11/11/2010 5:00:05 PM with a score of 0

It was good, but if I'm not mistaken, isn't it illegal to use their images without permission? Or is that something else?

— Jeff on 8/11/2010 8:28:07 PM with a score of 0

too easy to win...

but still kinda funny.......... KIRBY CARTOON WOOO!!!!

I love canceling it

— choosesheep on 5/23/2010 10:39:00 PM with a score of 0

Itäs an excelent story. i like the difference.

— Sabrina Fagerheim on 12/14/2007 5:28:59 AM with a score of 0

You should make a , keep the 10,000,000 and not cancel kirby link

— tylerm13 on 12/11/2007 8:56:48 PM with a score of 0

I killed all them beaches!

— harrypotterfan17 on 11/24/2007 11:10:43 PM with a score of 0

this was really pointless but i liked the whole girlfriend thing because it was the only semi-interesting thing about this game.

— deadly_sinner66 on 10/14/2007 3:08:43 PM with a score of 0

Dude! it's best to blame 4kids, not the anime itself, if you saw the original version, trust me, you'll like it better than you think you will

— misterian on 9/21/2007 2:59:39 PM with a score of 0

Someeone should make a "Cancel the Cancel the Kirby th Cartoon Game!" and get this off the site.

— DarthVader_13 on 9/4/2007 12:46:47 AM with a score of 0

While I support the cancellation of that series, I can't say this game was all that challenging. Interesting, yes, but...

— cyberguybri on 6/19/2007 12:47:12 PM with a score of 0

hehehe everybody hates kirby. really, anything small that sings too much should be killed immediately.. :D

— quadcam on 4/14/2007 6:18:42 AM with a score of 0

Woo! Down with the Kirby Show!

— Miccy2000 on 1/6/2007 6:14:24 AM with a score of 0

Haha!!! I hate dumb video game cartoons!!! That was great!!!

— PrinceOProvidence on 12/23/2006 6:48:23 PM with a score of 0

It's okay.. could make a little more sense. Good grammar, and decent options. There was only one pointless fight scene I had to do to win, which involved killing a bunch of security guards. A 4 out of 8 for me.

— October on 10/13/2006 9:22:44 PM with a score of 0

Hey- I got Kirby cancelled! Thank god. . .

— Sethaniel on 10/10/2006 6:20:41 AM with a score of 0

Kinda cool.

— Nooguhnier on 8/26/2006 9:54:53 PM with a score of 0

Pretty short and slightly dumb, but it was okay. Plus, Kirby is cool. I know the show was dumb, but come on.

— Anubis on 8/25/2006 1:28:10 PM with a score of 0

I don't know who Kirby is, but that's a product of my age. He sounds irritating. Needs a little more description, particularly in fight scenes.

— madglee on 7/29/2006 7:48:11 PM with a score of 0

it sucks so bad.

— Hells bell on 6/25/2006 1:01:47 PM with a score of 0

I quess I won using the quickest path. Cool! Anyways, I'm sure there are longer paths. This game is most probably replayable. Great job Devin.

— Havacoman on 6/3/2006 4:40:52 PM with a score of 0

This game is okay... Because its not like the game forces you to not like Kirby. Just the show. It was fun but to easy.

— silverman on 4/18/2006 6:58:07 PM with a score of 0

Not bad, lots of options, but need pictures. I like this game. Good work.

— GodsSlayer on 4/8/2006 3:47:57 PM with a score of 0

good!

— noname on 2/17/2006 8:51:22 PM with a score of 0

Well, that was a special game. I dislike Kirby, its an immature show. I however found that the links can go in permanent loops, and some parts were inconsistent. Magic lamps rock! You have rated a 5/8 on the Assasin chart. You have almost but not quite qualified for the round robin.

— TheAssasin on 1/8/2006 10:56:38 PM with a score of 0

mmmmmmm...
fun...
but...
I still like Kirby.

— Adam666 on 12/6/2005 7:31:50 PM with a score of 0

LOL! Great Game!

— da Ravemaster on 11/27/2005 5:27:53 PM with a score of 0

it is the best

— penut on 11/27/2005 12:46:38 PM with a score of 0

How dare you make fun of Kirby!
Kirby rulez!

— Adam666 on 11/10/2005 3:56:33 PM with a score of 0

it was wicked

— Cradboy on 11/5/2005 3:18:00 AM with a score of 0

Really 3/8.

— JJJ on 9/30/2005 1:13:54 AM with a score of 0

You suck. You're a moron. This game sucks. Plain and simple, loser.

— Fizz on 7/21/2005 11:01:41 PM with a score of 0

good game... i like September the 14th I-VIII better though...

— Logan on 7/5/2005 2:25:12 PM with a score of 0

Really boring 2.5/10

— JJJ on 6/21/2005 7:25:04 PM with a score of 0

I cancelled the cartoon. Did I win?

— Havaco on 6/17/2005 5:15:02 PM with a score of 0

That game was pure shit. Sure, I hate the Kirby cartoon, and I'd like to have it cancelled, but I want to do it in a shooter type game. Or maybe I'm just saying that because I hate Deven.

— Lord Lonic on 6/10/2005 7:36:27 PM with a score of 0

YES!! I got it cancelled! :D

— Arnie on 6/6/2005 11:36:50 PM with a score of 0

that was too easy. I won the stupid robot competition on the first try.

— jamestkirk on 6/3/2005 6:57:58 PM with a score of 0

I finished it too fast!

— labr10golden on 6/3/2005 4:38:04 PM with a score of 0

silly game

— Tidus on 5/31/2005 4:57:21 PM with a score of 0

Truly, an awesome game!

— Badger on 5/26/2005 8:20:01 AM with a score of 0

This game is, no offence, a little too east. I picked the shortest route possible, you know.

— J Dog on 4/16/2005 12:56:56 PM with a score of 0

this game was better than time machine games. still not your best.

— march5th00 on 2/8/2005 3:59:00 PM with a score of 0

Kibry stupid and a @$$!-!()!_!=

— dave on 2/7/2005 9:48:50 PM with a score of 0

VERY FUN LETS CANCEL THE DUMB CIRBBY GAME!!!!!!!

— on 1/26/2005 8:52:48 PM with a score of 0

thats an almost full length game? i clicked 4 links and won!

— 1234567654321 on 12/27/2004 9:30:04 AM with a score of 0

it was ok, but it needs more violence. violence is good for you!

— justin on 9/2/2004 9:19:14 PM with a score of 0

hah! i beat it a different way this time.

— leon101 on 8/29/2004 4:03:37 PM with a score of 0

well, that was fun, ill play again.

— leon101 on 8/29/2004 3:59:57 PM with a score of 0

Very.. um ingenius

— rpgman on 8/27/2004 9:26:55 PM with a score of 0

I hate Kirby!

— Brandon on 7/10/2004 6:25:58 PM with a score of 0

Ummm...okay.

— Joshua on 6/22/2004 11:03:07 AM with a score of 0

YOU SAID H. WORD!!!!!!!

— Ari on 6/13/2004 12:53:43 AM with a score of 0

it was good

— mike on 5/9/2004 12:36:43 PM with a score of 0

cool concept. but if you are going to give the option of punching someone then you might want to say before hand that they are wearing a helmut. but other than that make it a bit longer and it should work out fine.

— nate on 5/2/2004 11:47:21 AM with a score of 0

I hope you enjoyed cancelling Kirby! This is my first game!

— Deven711 on 5/2/2004 10:51:23 AM with a score of 0

I hope you enjoyed cancelling Kirby!

— Deven711 on 5/2/2004 10:50:55 AM with a score of 0