Color Your Own Adventure (webcomic)

Based on the title I expected a story game that 'colored' a drawing in with colors determined by the choices the player makes. While it wasn't what I expected, I'm not disappointed because I think the concept of this comic is interesting.

This feels more like a prologue than it does a season. There's severe bottlenecking at W2H and it's easy to get stuck in a loop. This is probably the most annoying thing about this comic. It's my personal preference, but I would have preferred a branch to get out of the loop, lose, or even be forced to move on. The W1B branch feels mostly pointless since the choices that don't go to W2A lead directly to the end.

At the end of the W2G page, there's a choice that isn't available. I feel like I've missed a choice somewhere or failed some kind of check. Assuming I didn't miss anything, this left me feeling frustrated since I have no clue if that will be revisited in a later 'season'.

I don't think a seasonal format (when they're this short) really works too well on CYS. I think this would work better with something like Twine that would better support this kind of format. Here, with the badges, I feel like you've only made more work than needed for yourself along with putting a burden on the reader to remember which badges they get.

At this point, I don't see how the badges really add anything of value other than save tokens that determine what beginning you get in the next installment. I have no idea if they'll be used in other ways, possibly better ways, or if that's all they're used for.

The art is cute, the concept of a CYOA comic is interesting, and I'm genuinely interested in the story. But, it's hard to really judge some of the stuff you have going on with this comic because it's so short and I don't know if you plan on finishing this. Unfortunately there's a handful of things that keep me from giving this a rating higher than five.

Good written! I like this, i guess, 'style' of webcomic. Its very nice that you can choose your own path.

Pretty sure this has been abandoned since 2020

Very good

Pretty decently drawn.

I really think that the idea you have a out coler is great.

Very entertaining characters, cute drawings, and an interesting storyline. Ready for season 2!

Pretty short, but this was a really cool story! I've played a few before, and nobody has used this kind of style. I'm intrigued to see what else you have in store.

Amazing! Cute pictures, great story... can't wait for the next one!

An unusual idea. Love the crazy world. I had some good fun with this.