Player Comments on Destroy Cartoon Network!

Why the heck does a piano land on me

Boring, short, and terrible grammar and spelling

Pretty simple and short, but funny too! Loved it. If you added in more silly options it would be better, but it was still pretty funny!

I DO hate Cartoon Network, but this wasn't any better.

This story tried (and failed) at being funny.

Ò_Ó

-_-

It's so short and don't think I'm tryin to be mean I'm not but it's stupid unless it's the first game you've done then........what was I gonna say??? Anyway not so good

This was awful, thank goodness it was short

This story was so annoying, I would rather shoot myself than go through the torture of this hunk of garbage again. 1/8

The only thing this adventure tries to be is funny... And it fails, the end.

Nonsenically story. Terrible spelling and grammer. My 14 month old daughter tells better stories.

...I think that the following passage, taken directly from this story, will help explain wheter or not you should play this CYS:

"You trie to but you forgot that they are at school!
You're mom comes home, early and sees that you skiped school. She gets angry and she kicks you butt.
When she does, you're brains fly out of you're head."

See, this is one of those CYSs that are kind of weird, made by someone with 12 years of age-like grammar (maybe they are 12), and utterly make no sense (the story is literally about you taking over Cartoon Network, wtf?). Some revision with a Merriams Webster dictionary at close hand would be great.

Gave it a 2/8 because, although it is by far terrible, I don't think it should be removed. It could be better.

I only rated for the points. But I didn't like it on account o' grammar.

Well, first off, the game punishes you for making a choice it didn't want you to make. The game has some grammar problems. There could have been better delivery for the jokes the game was trying to make. And what's with the hate for cartoon network? Sure, not all the shows on the network are necessarily "good". However, haven't there been some good cartoons aired on it in the past? Hey, wasn't the original Tom and Jerry aired on it too? How can you hate a show that has perfected slapstick? Also, adult swim and toonami are apart of cartoon network.

It's okay to not like something other people like. However, if the majority of people don't hate cartoon network, then how are they possibly going to be able to identify with your story!?

Bad one, I Swear it's a very bad one

Yeah... about the only thing I can say is that a revision would do you some good. It might have some potential, but at the same time, it's over in a snap, and there's no real incentive to play again.

stay very very away from this D:

What just happened?

it made no sense

Fun fun fun!

How did I jump on someones head to kill them? And why did a piano fall on my head when I tried to go to school?! This story is under developed.

Slightly more fun than HW has never been more true, as I sit down at this desk and avoid doing my HW.

NO!!! I killed Johnny Bravo! ... He was so pretty!

Sort of funny, could have been a lot better.

Awesome Does Not Approve!
I think you didn't put much effort into this. I actually LIKE Cartoon Network, and I assume other readers do too, but I won't count off for that. Grammar, UHH! Spelling. I really didn't enjoy it as much as I wanted to, and it made no sense at all. Really? Jumping on someones' head? This isn't Super Mario.
2/8

ok, could do with some editing

loved it

It wasn't good for me to poop about!

Not that fun... Good enough, but really short. Needed more creativity. 2/8

I don't think that a lot was working for this game. You said over and over why you hated Cartoon Network but never explained the reason. The spelling was off at times and the pages were really short. Also, pictures would have been nice to have. The two things I did like was that there was a little humor in it and the decent amount of choices.

2/8

a piano falls on my head. Lame

I think its okay.

I should have known from the horrible grammar in the description I would hate it. Bo dissaproves, feel the shame wash over you

um. not much good stuff.

Well, it's well not so bad but it's not good.

It was a bit short, and I don't know why a piano would fall on your head by going to school, but I agree with not liking C.N. that much. They used to have such good funny shows, but now, each show is just about the same thing: some sort of idiot kid who does dumb stuff. It's like they took out everything good! The one show I do like on there is Total Drama Island, and that's it.

For the sake of it, this was an OK idea. Maybe make it more intricate and it would've been much better. Unfortunately, it wasn't.

I LIKE cartoon network. They were legends, and they still are. You've probably had a crap childhood pal.

It was Ok

1. "Stay Home And Plan You're Day"
2. "forth: ..."
3. "you don't know there phone #."
4. "Call you're friends."
5. "Pretty mach a more happy life until you realize that you forgot that taking over a cartoon station will cost some money!"
6. "Someone hates you're channel and you got to protect youreself!"

Just the top of a list of errors.

I'm sorry, but I didn't like that game.

That is a really fun game! Make another!

That was a good game!

I don't particularly have anything against CN; they have some decent shows at night, like Adult Swim. But if I DID hate them, I would think this game was okay. A little too short and linear, but amusing nonetheless.

Good game. I like it.

Sweet game! I loved lying to the police and killing the operator. It made me feel like calling the police!

Wow... this is good!'There are a few spelling mistakes and the game was kinda linear but good job!

It was an okay game.

Great Game! LOL Though I like Cartoon Network. More accuretly, the other "sections" of it, like Toonami, Miguzi--although, I dont really like Miguzi--and Adult Swim--but only like three: Neon Genisus Evangelion, Inuyasha, and FullMetal Alchemist.

Regrettabley annoying. It had numerous spelling mistakes and a foolish immature plot. At least it had a plot though. Its possible to die so early on, and it seems so well, rushed. It scored a 2/8 on the Assasin scale, you did not qualify for the round robins.

This game rocks

Okay... linear but okay. Why did you only put one picture and that pic is at the end?

If i could id rate this infinity.

Er heh.
Could be funnier (and the final school choice should not link to the beginning, and the fight thing is stupid, since this isn't mario) but I guess it was ok. Write a bit slower next time

I LOVE THIS GAME!

Couldn't win!

For what this was it was pretty interesting. Glad to play another fun game on here. I'll play the sequel.

Too linear, way too linear. But hte game wasn't half bad.

What is up with the lienar stuff!

Hey! I'm fear. Nice game. Not too nice though...
Ummm... too linear. Cartooon Network is cool, but it was still a fun game

Enjot this fun game!
Oh. and Ravemaster?
Don't think of putting a bad post on here!
This is a good game!

ok, atleast you got the concept, advancement, and plot down. now you still need more adventure. put more than a few minutes into a game and it will be ten times better.

O.k.
I misspelled some words but...
don't worry about it!