halloween night

You click on a link and nothing really happens. Meh.

Ver poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation. But please don't let this hurt you, instead build upon it for a better story.

Very short and lame. not much detail or time went in to this and it shows. Even for a first time attempt this is pretty bad but not completely hopeless. If you want to keep writing then try and develop a solid plot first then work off of that. Random wandering around with very little detail is boring.

Ur english is of bad, just liek other people say. Story is very bad. I am of unsure if u bad english or just very bad when write story.

"part it is scary"

OMG TERRIFYING I DIDNT NO THAT PLZ HIDE ME FROM DA MANSTERS!!!11!!1

Wow, this is one of the worst ones I've seen in a while. I never knew that "dusent" is another way of spelling doesn't. I believe this... erm, twister of the English language (to use his own style of writing) nevur paied mutch attentun inn Inglitch clasz.

I don't know if this is a troll game or just really, really bad (on this site it's always so hard to tell..) but either way it's hilarious. End, please leave it up a little while.

If it's a real attempt, uh...https://www.grammarly.com/handbook/ is your friend, my child. And you need more details, to show all these things your one line descriptions tell about actually happening.

1 sentence per page, nonsensical choices and story progression, poor grammar and spelling, boring concept, no detail whatsoever, and finally the author rating their own game. Just your average masterpiece you can find on this site.

LOL my im my own grama

good job