Island Attack: Raid
, #58 for
played 1,002 times (finished 122)
"march in the swamp"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
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Sci Fi, Serious, Distant Planet Adventure
Kudos for working with variables and publishing a story within your first three days as a member. You seem to understand the basics of what makes a storygame good, which does show. However, the "You Died" pages appear without any explanation of why. This seems to be a result of inexperience with the system. If you revise and proofread your future stories, as well as fiddle a bit more with the system, your story-games might turn out to be pretty good! For now, however, it is only mildly enjoyable, and could use serious work.
on 2/23/2012 8:37:47 PM with a score of 0
I won!! I won I won I won, and with 14 health left!!!
-- Hi on 2/16/2020 6:01:16 PM with a score of 0
Too short and has no plot...
on 5/17/2018 9:51:20 PM with a score of 0
yaboi said ok its pretty good man :)
-- yaboi Jeff on 2/4/2018 5:11:55 PM with a score of 0
Fun but short.
on 6/25/2016 2:54:09 PM with a score of 0
Death pays for death.
-- walker. on 5/26/2016 12:47:15 AM with a score of 0
Short but should definitely get a 7 or 8. There should be more like this.
on 4/1/2016 1:25:54 AM with a score of 0
Certainly not bad, but pretty short. There needs to be more storygames like this.
on 7/15/2015 4:28:40 PM with a score of 0
A little bit boring, not very exciting. Also, the pages could've been slightly longer.
on 3/24/2015 2:20:13 PM with a score of 0
I completed it without needing to click "Go Back" once!
on 3/12/2015 3:07:43 AM with a score of 0
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