Player Comments on Late night visit

I must say that I quite enjoyed the approach that this story took. It wasn't overly descriptive but I consider that as a plus rather than a negative in the way the story was approached and how it reached it's ending. It isn't a startling plot twist at the end, but life isn't always full of those like dramas and movies like to portray. This was rather beautiful and a nice little story to pass a bit of time with :)

This was pretty great

I like the concept and not the execution

Brilliant

very short not that meaningful. 2.

Great premise but a better story line might give more...exitement? idk what word I'm looking for but hey. Ladies? this is your chance to test ur mans ;)

Good job. It's interesting, but it could be longer.

This was actually interesting. I am somewhat disappointed that the author now seems to be inactive, because a second work from him would probably have been pretty good.
"Late Night Visit" was not a top-notch story-game, but I liked it.

The story is just a little thing with no plot beyond, "your girlfriend visits in the middle of the night," but the author did a very good job establishing the character of the girlfriend. I was engaged throughout even though it was largely just two people watching a movie together.

The branching was disappointing. Largely because there wasn't a whole lot. Some of the choices were meaningless, and there was a lot of rejoining of branches. This was disappointing.
I was disappointed.

Additionally, I do not think it was necessary to have as many one link pages as there were, considering they were so short.

Still, while this wasn't the best as a story-game, it did a much better job at getting me interested in a character in a much shorter time than most.

Your game is good and extraordinary so keep making more.

hate hate hate it

This was a pretty cool story! I loved every aspect. Please continue to make these awesome adventures!

Totally Would Come Back If There Was A Part 2

It was good

Uh. I had no idea what happened? It's a little confusing... Uh. It's short. Um. I like it a bit, but it's kinda... Hm... It's kinda sluggish and short. Not to offend or anything. But it needs a lot of improvement... Have a good night/Day.

10/10

The game was not clear on a goal.

XD I purposely chose "shut the door" for the heck of it! I just love the comments - "seriously dude?"

Short, but nice. Story was good, but make it longer?

even though a nice idea then no effort or commitment

Its a very nice one although it could use some more heart ?. We need the heard and inspiration to be able to participate much more to a better story. But its good!! You just need more inspiration ??

Gotta say the writing was kinda boring. It lacked important information like setting and character profile. At parts I was confused as to where I was and what time of the day it was. But still you managed to tell a short story at a nice and steady pace. 3/8

Eh, it was okay, pretty well written and the story was good and pretty romantic.

Cool but needs more added to it

Great story! :)

That was a huge plot twist......................sort of

Not a bad game.

I LOVE IT VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!

love it good job

awesome!but i wish there was more to it

Ita ok some of it didnt make sense or either i wasnt reading right but the plot is good

Not bad. The ending I ran across seemed a little abrupt

the story was quite beautiful, but if you're going to give them a borderline sociopathic option, and then ask "Dude, seriously!?" afterward, you should at least allow some small humor to be made in order to reward them for purposefully straying from the obviously good path to explore other options. Hell, the whole story could be about a chick relentlessly coping with a guy who's gone through every possible measure (other than murder, arson, and physical violence, of course) to be a total asshole towards her.

Ah, spare pajamas, why didn't I think of that?..

Great game! You have really done a great job with description. It would be a great movie, especially for a blind person like myself.

It is defenetly not bad, it is a bit to short, and there is a bit to less descriptions but, besides that it was really good. 5: Certainly Not Bad, but it could need some improvement on some few things

Sweet story maybe not the longest but hey i had fun playing it! ;)

I don't know why anyone would slam the door in front of their girlfriend. Even if the person is stressed and it's the middle of the night, someone seeking shelter should be given a place to stay as a form of respect and formality.

Anyways, a good story. I may rated a little harsh, a 5 but it's a little short.

Awesome Approves!
Now, I don't think this is an amazing game, but for a first, it's pretty good. It actually had a small storyline to the few pages, and although it only had a couple of links per page, I didn't feel the need to have more. For a future reference, try to make the story itself longer. Oh, and it doesn't need to have a Maturity of 5.
4/8

Very cute story. Loved it and scored you a 7

It's ok, but too short.

this is too short

Short, intimate, not vulgar for once (thank god)

It was a... rather sweet story. Though it was simple it had a very heartwarming feeling to it. I was smiling in the end. Thanks for an enjoyable story.

not bad, I just thought it was a bit short

You might want to fix the background colours of the text you copy and pasted from one page to another.
The story was fun nonetheless :)