Player Comments on Little Red Riding Hood

This story was better than expected. Though much has been done with alternate stories/endings to classic tales. It was somewhat amusing to see the different endings that the author used here.

Admittedly though, I do not understand why this is an "edutainment" storygame unless it is trying to educate us on the dangers of stereotyping the wolf.

This story has decent branching and a variety of endings, especially for a shorter game.

Not much effort is put into characterization. This is presumably because most folks are familiar with the Red Riding Hood theme.

The story appears to be well written. No obvious grammar or structure errors distracted from the story. I felt that the dialogue was decently written.

Overall this was a decent game and better than I expected upon starting it. Since it is short, it is worth it to check out the alternate endings the author has come up with for this classic tale.

she was a really fun story.

I enjoyed the endings very much! I especially enjoyed the endings that were unexpectedly wholesome!

its so boring not worth it

it was okay kinda boring

The wolf has to eat too! Give grandma to the wolf for dinner.

Shorter than your grandma.

it was pretty interesting

It was alright

This is some story, but I should have gave grandma her medicine instead of running away

me bone

a very creative game at its better than homework

I love the twist on the classic fairytale. Such an adorable story!

its good

I really must say that the options were pretty fun and more fun than normal homework !! Thanks love the story : )

I got that we were best friends! Nice job with keeping originality but putting a few twists!

Wow, this game was incredible. It's a wonderful twist on the old fairytale with about a dozen different endings, all of which were really well-written in their own individual ways. I loved this!

cool

Wow.

It was fun and good

Not bad.

Wow, I must say that I love the rather new twists that you made with such a recognizable fairytale. It certainly kept things fresh, and it didn't change things too dramatically to achieve that effect. Arguably so in the not changing things "too" much :)

Anyway, I found this to be quite imaginative, the humor and writing is definitely praiseworthy to say the least. I recommend that everyone give this a read, multiple ones in fact to get the full experience from this rather lovely story.

Bravo, kallykat :D

i like it but rather go with the real storie i liked that you made it up though

aw, it's so sweet and funny! thanks for making it!

Cute!

This was so funny! I really enjoyed this. I would like to see how you can interpret more fairy tales. This was fantastic.

I made the wolf into a nice wolf pie. Oh what a twisted child I am... :3

Great writing, even the unlikly choses have a good ending, ;)

it was quite good not the best but it is alot better than homework thats for sure but im glad they made the game

it was very funny thank you for publishing it :)

This was really good! I enjoyed playing on it!

This story's moral: Grandmothers are badass.

it was a very funny tale by me trying to tell a lie and then i pull a knife out of my basket.it was just my liking

A nice take on a traditional tale though Little Red hacking wolves to death for food seems a bit of a stretch. The writing was good though and I'd be interested to see how you interpret other fairy tales :)

"The Wolf forces some silvery liquid down her throat."

Hm.

This is good I enjoyed this.

GOOD

I think that it was good.I ALSO THOUGHT THAT IT WAS COMICAL.

This game is a good game I liked it alot,it was exicting choosing wich way to go.

I think that it was good.

I had fun playing the, though a-lot of the "reasonable and logic" choices led to the game ending which annoyed me a bit, but I enjoyed playing this. Poor Wolfie though, seemed nice enough.

the Grandma has rabies but wait who gave them to her?

It's fun how you can change the endings of the fairy tale :). But it was a little short...

I enjoyed the surprise twists.

ooooh! It's cool! However, I'm kinda iffy about how the wolf's intentions will change. Gotta say, though, that i liked it when he tackles the gramma and says "i'm a doctor!"
hahahahaha

woah cool ending

The Wolf's bestfriend. awwww. I thought he's about to eat me or something.

Pretty cool. I have always wanted to be best friends with a wolf. ;-)

It was amazing; after listening to the same thing a billion times I found it was really refreshing.

Not bad, good writing and interesting choices. I also liked the twists to each ending.

Well, I really liked it! Very nicely written version of a brilliant children's story. Only problem I have with it is that different choices lead to completely different situations, like sometimes the wolf is the good guy and sometimes he's the bad guy, and sometimes the grandmother is the wolf in disguise and sometimes she's just the grandmother, so that didn't make sense, but it's a kid's story so I wasn't that bothered. :)

Wolf pie yum. 6/8

it was awesome i liked it alot i always liked little red riding hood.

FUNNY! LOL

I love little red riding hood because I like that she is responsible enough to go through the woods to go and visit her grandmother.B)

this is realy fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It'd be nice if you developed this further, but it was very good for two hours' work. I hope your students liked it!

Fun. I made a wolf-pie on the first try!

You made the wolf... A GOOD GUY?! That was awesome. Even better than recees cups.

Quite fun, but you should really make the alternative paths longer if you want a great rating.

Good! It is an ok story but the original is better! This is the same at the beggining but ends weird. why is one of the comments, good... to poop on? Your bestfran:)

I loved the different endings, keep up the good work!

XD I wasn't sure what you were going for at first (traditional, realistic, what-if, etc), but this turned out to be pretty entertaining.

Short and strange, but I thought it was entertaining enough =)

this is a good story but crazy! from your bestfriends <3