Project Origin: The Unraveling (part 1)
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Played 9 times (finished 3)
"Walk in the park"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Part of Series
Bringing back this little slice of fan-fiction by Mizal's request. It's old and was written before I really understood how to do a CYOA and it's stupidly linear lol, but enjoy it anyway.
I'd like to give this a better rating but it's intolerably linear. Your writing is excellent (feature-worthy even!) but this isn't interactive fiction.
on 3/24/2014 7:38:03 PM with a score of 0
The suspense is thick and the plot is interesting. I've never played the game this was based on, but <i>this</i> game's pretty great. I can't say much that other comments haven't said before me, so good luck on all of your future storygames!
on 7/30/2012 6:02:20 PM with a score of 0
Cool origin story to a game I played a while back. Very linear but still well written.
on 8/15/2016 12:34:00 PM with a score of 0
Creepy but entertaining.
on 4/2/2016 1:14:38 PM with a score of 0
on 3/20/2016 12:07:41 AM with a score of 0
excellently written. Sadly it's very linear but I still enjoyed it. :)
on 10/23/2015 7:14:30 AM with a score of 0
on 8/15/2015 11:55:01 PM with a score of 0
So freaking intense! I should have read the maturity level. Btw FANTASTIC writing!
on 7/17/2015 12:13:57 AM with a score of 0
took a little to get into the story, but it was quite good. I was disappointed when it ended. Cant wait to read part 2
on 5/25/2015 6:49:48 PM with a score of 0
Awesome game. :)
on 6/16/2014 1:25:48 AM with a score of 0
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