Player Comments on The Quest

I played through it just for my point

Lacks end game links. Not terribly written, but not very interesting either

Pretty cool, except I do not understand when the time period is.

I FOLLOWED THE GOOD THOUGHT AND LET THE GRIFFINS BE FREE.

It's pretty good. Though short, it's pretty immersive and generally not bad. Though I have no idea who Reeves or whatever his name was it's a bit to easy, I thought it was pretty decent.

Mediocre already, I'm deducting the remaining points because you forgot an End Game link at the end of the other endings.

You should've had an End Game and Leave Comments at the end of every death page, not just at the end. Also, it could've been loads longer and had longer pages. 2/8

It's not bad, but I didn't really seem to care about my character so it was all a bit meh

The griffin put the clues ;)

Not nearly as bad as it seems to be rated. The pages are a bit short and there are some problems with the links, but all in all, the adventure stayed coherent with plenty of choices throughout.

This actually wasn't as bad as it was rated. It was a fun distraction and was good enough for a basic-editor game, although unpolished. 4/8.

That was pretty cool

The idea has potential, but you need to put in more detail.

Kind of cute but I think you might've over promised a bit when you described the game as daring, bold and thrilling.

"Socially important"? *snort* ... yeah, sure.

... And what the hell was with all the broken pages, dude?

needs end game links, not pages with no links when i lose. More background info needed

Not sure I'd call it "socially important."

stay away........

Hell!

The story's plot didn't keep me interested and none of the choices had logical consequences. Well done on your first storygame but there's definitely room for improvement.

short

GOOD GAME could be better

Too short needs to be longer

I lowered my rating due to the lack of End Game and Restart links. Also, it's incredibly linear and very easy to beat.

well that was kinda weird...

It was linear, the choices were obvious, and there were no end links. I NEED END LINKS!

This game was extremely linear, missing links, and the outcomes of choices made no sense.

Has potential, but I found a lot of incomplete pages with no links or text on them.

- Underdeveloped
- Obvious choices
- One paragraph long pages or less
- Blank pages
- Pages with no links (every bad end page....)

3/8 try again.

This was kind of boring. The choices were extremely obvious, it was to short, and it was underdeveloped. There was barely any good detail and things just felt rushed and incomplete(There was even a broken link) I think you should have put in more effort and tried to make it longer. The only good thing I liked was there was very little spelling error.

3/8

This was done for a class presentation. We can understand if some of you may not have liked it. Thank you for your time and enjoy the erst of your day!

-bobandgeorge