The Surprise!

A horror storygame by oraclemache

Player Rating3.42/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
Based on 28 ratings since 06/07/2021
Played 236 times (finished 30)

Story Difficulty4/8

"March in the swamp"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level5/8

"Aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

High school student Scott Hendrick, has a secret that could ruin his life. He is fifteen years old and afraid of the dark.  He is invited to the party of the year and by the most popular girl in school. The party promises many moments in the dark with a hot girl, if he can face it.  Scott faces down his fear and gets more than he bargained for. 


I am republishing this story after making it a bit longer and giving it more branches.  Please let me know if I overlooked a page not linking correct or it does not flow cohesively.  Thanks guys.  Hope you like the story. 


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