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Very overrated.

The length in terms of branching was fine, but the amount of words on each page wasn't. There was little detail describing things, leaving a vague feeling in the storygame itself. The branching was also a bit awkward at times since few of the end pages actually had end links, and not just a link to the first page.

I suppose it's a rather ok way to kill a few minutes, but it's hard to really enjoy it since the characters have little development and the linearity is really annoying.

I'll admit, I did chuckle from time to time, but probably not as much as you intended the reader to.

Grammar wasn't exactly your main focus while creating this, I see. I noticed multiple errors, which is a bit disappointing since it's pretty short. Short stories should be easy to proofread.

It's a lot better then many storygames on the site, but I don't understand how this almost has a 5/8. I'll give you a 3/8.

It's a very entertaining game with a lot of freedom in choices, I love it

THis is what a good game looks like

It is very realistic

It was a pretty good read. It wasn't my type of humor, personally.

My good deed paid off!

Very overrated.

The length in terms of branching was fine, but the amount of words on each page wasn't. There was little detail describing things, leaving a vague feeling in the storygame itself.

I suppose it's a rather ok way to kill a few minutes, but it's hard to really enjoy it since the characters have little development and the linearity is really annoying.

I'll admit, I did chuckle from time to time, but probably not as much as you intended the reader to.

It's a lot better then many storygames on the site, but I don't understand how this almost has a 5/8.

It's really fun it gives a great picture of what it will be like if you work at a restaurant

meh its okay

Felt like it was a poor rip off of inkeeper.