You're the Bachelor
A
fan fiction
storygame by
janemcg
Player Rating
4.52/8
"#342
overall
, #13 for
2001
"
Based on
931 ratings
since 12/14/2004
Played 21,801 times (finished 1,432)
Story Difficulty
2/8
"Walk in the park"
Play Length
2/8
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
Maturity Level
6/8
"I'll need to see some identification"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 16. If this were a movie, it would probably be between PG-13 and R.
Tags
Previously Featured
Puzzle
Sure, you love the single life, but every man has to settle down sometime. What better way to find your soulmate than to pick from dozens of beautiful, friendly and eager (if somewhat desperate) young women on national television? It's YOUR turn to be the Bachelor! Eliminate the losers, court your favorites and decide if you'll pop the big question.
Player Comments
I have admittedly never seen any Bachelor show, but that didn't pose any problem for me in enjoying the subject matter of this storygame. It had humor, which was sometimes hit or miss, but I don't believe that the writing was bad. Actually, I found certain scenes quite humorous as I read them.
Also, I liked the pictures that were used in this storygame. They never felt out of place and served well in enhancing certain scenes with some rather interesting visuals. These pictures were used sparingly, but utilized well.
I did notice that no matter the choice that you pick, you always do end up with the same three woman at the end. So that fact did damper my enjoyment in my other playthroughs somewhat. But if there are some positives, it's the many nonstandard gameovers or how choosing on whether to propose or simply ask a contestant out changed the ending as well.
The women themselves felt bland character wise, static even. But I suppose that is something to be expected when there's dozens of other maidens vying for the bachelor's attention. Such a scenario did provide for some interesting dialogue, even if the characters themselves didn't exactly appeal to me all that much.
For a quick read and maybe a laugh or two, this storygame does rather well. It does lack depth in many areas, such as the writing and characters. However, at the end of the day it's an adequate storygame and one that was enjoyable.
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TharaApples
on 2/6/2017 6:27:45 PM with a score of 0
gosh y was this actually cute lol
I LOVE U SARA
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— wowzers on 5/23/2024 11:54:41 PM with a score of 0
WOOF WOOF!! AWROOOOO!!!
("I was looking for a place to stay while my dog house was being fumigated and ")
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— Alpha Bachelor on 5/21/2023 1:30:31 AM with a score of 0
it ok
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21workmanma
on 1/17/2023 12:35:28 PM with a score of 0
LOVE THIS!!! Going to try to get other endings now.
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CakeyPop
on 12/23/2022 7:56:43 PM with a score of 0
not the best, certainly not the worst.
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— sya on 10/28/2022 12:09:04 PM with a score of 0
not the best, certainly not the worst.
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— Tasya Nada Salsabila on 10/28/2022 11:55:08 AM with a score of 0
I have to admit that this is pretty good. I usually don't like these kinds of things, but this was decently written and I liked taking the high road.
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Yummyfood
on 9/19/2022 9:40:54 AM with a score of 0
I don't know but this story just didn't really hit home with me. The writing was decent enough, just felt like it was missing something.
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tmanaking
on 11/18/2020 11:24:22 PM with a score of 0
Welp, that was a violent end... but it was pretty good, I guess. Enjoyable!
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GeniusFangirl
on 11/17/2020 9:07:14 PM with a score of 0
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