EbonVasilis, The Novelist
I'll be working on my own works, although those won't be done for awhile, if ever. PM me if you want, or not.
A world on the cusp of disaster. Two sides on the verge of destroying each other, but there is hope. In the form of a hero. Now this will person..., will they be able to rise into the mantle of hero?
There are links that lead to background information... I highly suggest reading those, as they contain fairly important information.
Criticism is very welcome.
This is an entry for BerkaZerka's 2017 Summer Slam Contest
A historical fiction based upon Alexander the Great and his rise to the throne.
Note that not everything in this story is factually correct, but there is one path based upon true history.
Note: Nearly every choice has an effect on something, so make your choices carefully. There are four epilogues to be found.
Criticism is very welcome.
This is an entry for Bucky's 2017 December Story Contest
On the night of your marriage, your wife is captured and you are left for dead in an alley. When you come to, your wife is missing, and your once perfect life now in tatters. What else is there to do but to kill those who have wronged you, save your wife, and restore equilibrium to your life? Before you can do this, however, you must venture through The Lost Realm...
Author's Notes: Your choices matter, so choose carefully. There are 3 epilogues to be found.
This will likely be the first story in a series of five that I'm planning, so be sure to leave feedback, and please leave any criticisms you might have.
I'd like to give a huge shout out to Mayana for beta testing for me. This story game would have loads more mistakes without her help. Thanks to Mizal as well for her help with scripting.
This is an entry to EndMaster's 2018 Romance Story contest
Recent PostsAtlas on 5/21/2018 8:58:53 AM
I don’t see how C is a realistic choice at all. Maybe I’m missing something, but I’m my experience most people aren’t unreasonably angry for people doing their job.
Atlas on 5/20/2018 11:54:40 PM
Clearly we have two different kinds of people here. A group and C group. A group is clearly the most logical choice if we’re picking based on what the events would likely be. Most people, I imagine, wouldn’t care a lick if we were awaken early. They’d likely even be happy that there is somewhat of a base camp and cursory reconnaissance already underway. That makes sense.
What doesn’t make sense is them being outraged, or even angry at our being taken out of cryo-sleep early. Now there might be those that are jealous that they didn’t get woken up instead, but I think you’ll find that most people would agree that a preliminary group is absolutely necessary.
Also, the only group that was incompetent was the sailing group. Blame them for that. Everyone else did their jobs just fine. Except Dom. Dom is dumb.
Anyhow A is clearly the best, most obvious choice. That’s where my vote goes.
Project Hyrax (a sci-fi interactive story) on 5/14/2018 12:36:25 PM
It’s not free on the AppStore. It’s charging me a dollar for it.
Atlas on 5/9/2018 7:39:22 PM
A. Send the land team back out to retrieve the corpses. Arm them and whatnot. I’d rather not lose one of our tool guys and mercenaries.
Atlas on 5/4/2018 11:10:09 PM
Conquering the alien lifeforms can come later. For now we should just play it safe and avoid them, until we have more knowledge of them, the world, and the beasts that inhabit it. Therefore, B.
BE INSPIRED MEATBAGS on 5/3/2018 6:44:26 PM
Ha! Those fools know nothing of the human psyche, Cowbell thought as he gazed at the appallingly bright screen before him. Of course I'm acting like a retarded faggot! How else am I supposed to figure out if rage in an individual is affected by the levels of faggotry in the air? And now for the next part of my plan...
A slightly evil laugh filled the stale air of his filthy room before he began to type in earnest. In just a few moments he'd drafted a short paragraph or two about dreams; that was the easy part. The next, slightly more difficult part came next, but even that fell before the the mighty mind of the great MoreCowbell! A few more moments passed before the opening post was ready to be made. It went a little like this:
"MoreCowbell: lol i had a dream about my mommy last night. you guyz shud talk about ur dreamz 2. also I'm a brilliant white knight and can protect all of you pretty little newbs from the overbearing handz of the ugly adminz."
Pure brilliance! Not even the great endMaster would dare oppose him now! MoreCowbell rocked back and forth in his computer chair whilst eagerly awaiting the first reply in his utterly brilliant thread. Several minutes passed before such a reply came, but when it did, it came from the reaper himself.
"endMaster: Ha, you're a faggot."
Needless to say, Cowbell was simply astounded. Surely endMaster realized what he'd just done, right? Did he really dare insult the great Cowbell again? He almost gave into temptation of immediately responding with the best comeback ever, 'no u,' but he stopped himself just in time. It was too early in his social experiment to stop now. I'll just wait for another re-, before Cowbell could even finish his thought the next reply came.
"Mayana: I think you meant a retarded faggot End."
endMaster responded almost immediately.
"endMaster: No Medusa. Calling him retarded would've been complimenting him too much. he's clearly much dumber than a retard lol."
Then Cowbell could take it no longer. His hands and fingers moved with blinding speed across his keyboard until a defiant response to make even the gods fear was posted.
"MoreCowbell: U fools! im clearly just being assertive!"
Ha, Cowbell thought, let them try and respond to that. Not too long after Cowbell's brilliant reply, someone new to the thread posted.
"EbonVasilis: If you were really assertive, then you'd tag endMaster three times."
Did this...fool really think he could challenge Cowbell's top notch assertiveness? If he did he was dead wrong. Cowbell would show this Valleysis person the power of a psyche major!
"MoreCowbell: @endMaster @endMaster @endMaster"
Another laugh filled Cowbell's room. This would show them. This would show them all, yet no one replied to that post. Finally, after several hours passed, Cowbell deigned to post again, but when he tried to, it would automatically log him out. To him this was a simple glitch in the site, for they wouldn't dare ban him.
To everyone else, however, the trolling of MoreCowbell had come to an end.
Leaving Earth - Part II on 5/2/2018 9:39:37 AM
Huzzah! The best planet clearly won. I’ve been looking forward to this Sunday for the next choice, so if it turns out the first choice is two weeks from Sunday...ngl I’m gonna be kinda disappointed.
Leaving Earth - Part II on 5/1/2018 10:43:56 PM
I talked about mountains, but when you replied to me you didn’t bring them up, so I can only assume you didn’t have a rebuttal,
Interest Thread on 5/1/2018 3:08:19 PM
Agreed, this thread has my pity.
Leaving Earth - Part II on 5/1/2018 7:24:26 AM
I blame Mizal mostly. She has several people on her own team that she could've called upon, and then it would've been simple, but she decided to allow her people free will. Oh well I guess.
At least we're going to Atlas.