EbonVasilis, The Contributor

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3/9/2016

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9/22/2017 11:14 PM

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I'll be working on my own works, although those won't be done for awhile, if ever. PM me if you want, or not.

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A Chosen Hero

A world on the cusp of disaster. Two sides on the verge of destroying each other, but there is hope. In the form of a hero. Now this will person..., will they be able to rise into the mantle of hero? 

Author's Note

There are links that lead to background information... I highly suggest reading those, as they contain fairly important information.

Criticism is very welcome. 

This is an entry for BerkaZerka's 2017 Summer Slam Contest

 


Recent Posts

Saddest storygames out there? on 9/17/2017 7:53:26 PM

Death song was pretty sad, and probably one of the saddest on the site.

This is gonna sound a little odd, but Eternal was pretty sad to me. After I went through nearly every epilogue, I finally get to Eternal Harbinger, and then I have no hope. All of my goals and aspirations (as the eternal, of course) went down the drain. 

EDIT: The Other World (its no longer on this site) was pretty darn sad as well.


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 7:59:01 PM

Do you have a first estimate on when the results are going to be out?


Summer Slam Contest Predictions/Polling Thread on 9/16/2017 3:47:12 PM

Alright then. Now that the contest is over, and we've had time to browse around the stories, who do y'all think will win.


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 11:22:38 AM

Did I fall into one of those? 

Let me rephrase.

Which one of those did I fall under?


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 9:17:52 AM

I'm on my phone rn, but I will keep that in mind.


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/16/2017 8:16:49 AM

I think that's a total of 11 entries. Decently solid I guess. Well among us that have finished...

What did your guy's word count end up at? And how many pages was your total? And how did your stories' go? Did you add more than you previously thought you might? Or maybe you were like me, and wrote less? In general how did your stories go? Of course you don't have to answer my barage of questions, but you know.

My story was originally planned for 6 full drawn out epilogues, but I got super caught up in the writing (and I didn't have access to a computer the first month, and then some) and I was really only able to finish half of one. That came came up to 33,000 words, and 45 pages. If I managed to complete every epilogue to the extent that I wanted, well I'd probably top off 400,000 words. 

 

 


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/15/2017 11:40:15 PM

Thanks Orange.


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/15/2017 11:39:56 PM

I didn't get nearly as much as I wanted to done, but I suppose this will do for now. Here's hoping that my story isn't complete trash. And to any one who reads it, it's my first story, so please don't criticize m- Nah, I don't care if you criticize me at all. In fact I prefer it, so please go right ahead.


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/15/2017 11:37:01 PM

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/a-chosen-hero

I'm not very text savvy at all. If someone would hyper link that for me, it would be much appreciated. 


BZ's Summer Slam Link Thread on 9/15/2017 3:32:56 PM

Over thirty contestants in total, yet only two submissions. I'll be submitting something later today, so there's that, but aside from me...it looks like they're is going to be a lot of shaming for EndMaster to do after today.