EbonVasilis, The Reader

Member Since

3/9/2016

Last Activity

3/24/2019 12:42 PM

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62

Post Count

802

Storygame Count

4

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3 wins / 4 losses

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I'll be working on my own works, although those won't be done for awhile, if ever. PM me if you want, or not.

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Having 2 Storygame(s) Featured Given by EndMaster on 03/11/2018 - For righteous crusading against degeneracy (And stories)

Storygames

A Chosen Hero

A world on the cusp of disaster. Two sides on the verge of destroying each other, but there is hope. In the form of a hero. Now this will person..., will they be able to rise into the mantle of hero? 

Author's Note

There are links that lead to background information... I highly suggest reading those, as they contain fairly important information.

Criticism is very welcome. 

This is an entry for BerkaZerka's 2017 Summer Slam Contest

 


Featured Story Magno

A historical fiction based upon Alexander the Great and his rise to the throne. 

Note that not everything in this story is factually correct, but there is one path based upon true history.

Note: Nearly every choice has an effect on something, so make your choices carefully. There are four epilogues to be found. 

Criticism is very welcome.

This is an entry for Bucky's 2017 December Story Contest

 


Pride's Hunt

An intruder has entered your Kingdom. He sows seeds of rebellion in an attempt to turn your subjects against you, the greatest demon Hell has ever known, Pride. He must be stopped before he causes anymore damage.

There are two endings: One mediocre ending, and an epilogue. 

This is an Entry to BZ's Creatures of the Night Contest


Featured Story The Lost Realm

On the night of your marriage, your wife is captured and you are left for dead in an alley. When you come to, your wife is missing, and your once perfect life now in tatters. What else is there to do but to kill those who have wronged you, save your wife, and restore equilibrium to your life? Before you can do this, however, you must venture through The Lost Realm...

Author's Notes: Your choices matter, so choose carefully. There are 3 epilogues to be found.

This will likely be the first story in a series of five that I'm planning, so be sure to leave feedback, and please leave any criticisms you might have. 

Special Thanks:

I'd like to give a huge shout out to Mayana for beta testing for me. This story game would have loads more mistakes without her help. Thanks to Mizal as well for her help with scripting. 

This is an entry to EndMaster's 2018 Romance Story contest


Ascendant
unpublished

Born into slavery, you've never had much. You've never even hoped for much, but a stroke of luck frees you from the chains that kept you at the bottom. With freedom in your heart, and the world in your hands there is only one thing to do. Ascend.


Recent Posts

Corgi's Unofficial Contest: The Lords of the Land on 1/7/2019 8:13:07 AM

Of all the freaking contests to have my favorite genre, AND you have it due in April. Yeah that’s a double no. Maybe if it was due in February, then I might join, but I probably won’t be here for half the contest. 

Will elaborate in the discord.


Poll (Sort of): Firstest Story on 1/4/2019 6:36:41 PM

The first story that I remember writing involved a dragon and it’s rider fighting in a gladiatorial ring against various monsters. That was in kindergarten/ first grade. Later that same year I wrote a game about four bugs, (a spider, scorpion, grasshopper, and bumblebee) playing tag. My teacher, unbeknownst to me, sent the story on to the county contest wherein my story won among my age group. 

Yeah I’ve been involved in writing for pretty much all my life. 


EndMaster’s Fanfic Story Contest on 12/27/2018 2:06:45 PM

Hey, I look good in everything I wear. Not just a suit.


EndMaster’s Fanfic Story Contest on 12/26/2018 8:09:57 AM

Is it too late to ask for a Christmas present? This one being that Wibn gets the punishment they asked for and gets banned for her his failure. 

Only because they wanted to be of course.


EndMaster’s Fanfic Story Contest on 12/23/2018 9:30:48 PM

The SHAME pit is a dark, horrible place. I suggest rushing something instead of being thrown in there.


Skyrim (tiny) Fanfiction on 12/19/2018 8:16:11 AM

Not bad, but if I read one more aside inside parentheses I’m going to shoot myself. They’re incredibly annoying and rarely serve a purpose that can’t be achieved through regular writing. 

It got me a few chuckles, and overall it’s solid, but I have a couple of things I want to mention. 

1. That first paragraph was awful. The first sentence wasn’t bad, but you then followed it by two more sentences that started the exact way. Sometimes repetitive sentences work really well, but this one just leaves an awful taste in my mouth. Oh wait, now that I’ve reread it I know why it’s awful. That entire paragraph is a fragment. Each one of those sentences lack a verb, and well, ruins the mood for the rest of the story. 

2. My other criticism is just the “never the strongest...or the fastest... or the smartest,”” character structure. It’s so plain. It makes me wonder why I’m reading about a character who isn’t good at anything. The laughs were your strong suit, but you might want to touch up on a few other things. 

Good luck.


Recommend Me Games, Peasants on 12/18/2018 8:14:25 AM

I wouldn’t say this is a hidden gem exactly, but of the featured fantasy stories, The Lost Realm is probably the least played. Also the author has written a historical fiction as well, so you might be interested in that. 


50 words story thread. on 12/13/2018 11:11:44 PM

Go reread epilogue ten.


50 words story thread. on 12/13/2018 2:03:47 PM

Nah, Tanya is the best.


50 words story thread. on 12/11/2018 3:53:59 PM

I’m just going to assume this is canon now.