EbonVasilis, The Contributor

Member Since

3/9/2016

Last Activity

11/21/2017 1:58 PM

EXP Points

138

Post Count

327

Storygame Count

1

Duel Stats

1 win / 2 losses

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Architect

Commendations

2

I'll be working on my own works, although those won't be done for awhile, if ever. PM me if you want, or not.

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Earning 100 Points

Storygames

A Chosen Hero

A world on the cusp of disaster. Two sides on the verge of destroying each other, but there is hope. In the form of a hero. Now this will person..., will they be able to rise into the mantle of hero? 

Author's Note

There are links that lead to background information... I highly suggest reading those, as they contain fairly important information.

Criticism is very welcome. 

This is an entry for BerkaZerka's 2017 Summer Slam Contest

 


Recent Posts

The Orders: A Possible Story Launch on 11/21/2017 11:27:48 AM

As the title suggests, I’m thinking about doing a storygame featuring the Orders. Before I commit myself, however, I have a few questions to the general public of Cystia. 

If I were to do this, would it better to go full tilt and make it not just about the Orders, but also about sit members? 

If not, then would the complete opposite be preferable? Meaning I would be taking the Orders and putting them in their own fantasy world that has no relationship to the site at all. (Although, I’m sure I’d find a few spots for cameos)

What about allowing for the reader to choose to be in any of the Orders as a would be “new member?” 

All in all, what would all of you Cystians like to see for an Order storygame? 


Interesting comments 2 on 11/21/2017 9:55:54 AM

hahaha... you have no idea about what is like to be cursed. You think life would end so easily for one who is cursed? If one dies young I would say that person is blessed. Live through life with all your loved ones dead and a hopeless life with no future. Maybe then you'll know how it is to grow old as a cursed old man. ;)

-- cursed on 11/18/2017 3:32:58 AM

I’m glad some cursed old man decided my storygame was worth his time.


First Game on 11/21/2017 9:36:27 AM

Sweet. mizal’s approval. Now I just need the rest of the council’s approval and I can join in as an apprentice. 

I was gonna continue to blast her for a little bit, but I was typing on a phone and that takes a lot of the fun out of insulting people. Well it appears she fled, so it worked out either way.


First Game on 11/20/2017 10:06:43 PM

Well alrighty then. I don’t post that often, and when I do I’m not ever here to insult people.

Congrats. You’ve changed my mind on things.

Look here. If you wrote that story and published it because you like it, and NOT because you wanted feedback...your existence on this site is virtually pointless. There is pretty much zero reason to post any story on this site unless you want feedback, and if you REALLY didn’t want feedback, then why’d you post it in the first place. Obviously people are going to comment on it. That’s something fairly unavoidable. ESPECIALLY SINCE YOU POSTED IT IN THE FORUMS. I really cannot hope to understand the idiocy that exudes from you in this forum alone.

It’s like giving  extra credit to a teacher and expecting them not to comment or give a grade on it. Either way, you played yourself. Now everyone who’s read this thread knows you, and will associate you with a kid that cries at the slightest provocation. 

And for the comment I’m actually responding to, who cares? If you don’t want to be a part of a community that actively gives comments and feedback, then leave. I mean, you should feel grateful. You’ve probably gotten more comments on your story game in one day, than I have on mine in the couple of months that it’s been up. 

Go. No one is keeping you here.


New Prompt on 11/20/2017 9:35:13 AM

Edit lock 


noob looking for a coauthor cause I NEED HELP on 11/5/2017 7:47:38 PM

Maybe if this site was composed of kids, then sure, making it PG might be a viable option. However, I would say the high majority of people that frequent this site aren't particularly interested in reading PG writing. Look at the site's top stories for example. Eternal is pretty much rated R. As is pretty much all of EndMaster's stories, yet for some reason it's still the second best rated story on the site. 

I'm not saying that you should put mountains of sex and grotesque violence in it, but if it were more mature, then I think it would do better.


Rogues on 11/4/2017 1:13:04 PM

Oh, so the Eliza ship is canon. I'm glad you picked this best option for that the rogues' parents. I'm hype to play this. Will it be out by Christmas, or are we looking at a 2018 story here?


Morgan's All Purpose Argument Thread on 11/3/2017 1:51:19 PM

Eh. If anything I'm surprised you didn't already hate me. So I suppose this newfound hatred won't really affect much of anything at all. 


Morgan's All Purpose Argument Thread on 11/3/2017 1:18:08 PM

Oh well. I guess I'm factually incorrect then.


Morgan's All Purpose Argument Thread on 11/3/2017 10:46:38 AM

What would it be?

Are we finally gonna get that tournament contest where everyone duels each other? 

Edit: I see my folly.