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this is hard ;-;

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-hallway

Hmmm. 

Ooh, the expanse of the void is kind of impressive. But, you'll have to try harder than that.

Okay that's either an amazing coincidence or we already know who this guy is.

Unless she has a new IP, it's not Swedishlemon.

Doesn't appear to be anyone else's alt either. (Yet)

>Write what's on your mind, and don't edit anything yet. Just let it flow from your mind and onto the canvas (whatever that may be).

>Edit out the stuff you don't like, or is not helpful to the story, and delete it or save it for later insertion down the line.

>Take a break once in a while to regain your precious creative juices.

>Rinse and repeat until finished.

Make a new thread in the writing workshop.

Give specifics and details of what you need help with. Step one of writing is communicating clearly using the written word.

Just write whatever comes to mind. If it ends up bad or nonsensical, that's okay, just try again. The more you write, the better you get and the better you'll become at story telling. For now, just write about the first thing in your head. Good luck!

I would suggest you start here.