hello guys ! i'm new and i seriously need some help . i would really love it if someone would show me how to add choices/ decisions in my story cause i seriously don't know how
omg!!!! thank you so much <3
thank you !! but i actually still need to add a lot more before publishing it
thank you for the support <3
and yeah ofcourse i still got a long way to finish it perfectly !
how did you conclude that ?
and to answer your question , English is indeed my first language so you guessed wrong .
i agree !
rest assured hon ! :)
at least all i need to fix is my English but you .....
you need to fix that attitude of yours. you know , this being a writing site and all .
He called you “hon” Lol.
no one will win -_-
just chill dude ,
btw I'm still trying to figure out how to attach a photo to my story as a cover
i wasn't arguing i was just stating my opinion :)
and thanks again for your help !
Sweetie, you must first cross the seven seas and engage in a voyage for knowledge.
Hey, Aster. Your English is crap, as well as your future here if you can’t learn to use basic capitalization and punctuation. It’s really, really quite simple. Go open a book up. Read it. Then compare it to what you’ve written down already. You will see an undeniable differences. Such as capitalization, and the correct placement of periods.
My advice: Fix your grammar, learn English, THEN come back and try again. Until then, try not to use up our time with dumb questions that can be answered on your own.
If you’re a troll, then congrats. You’ve wasted less than two minutes of my time.
I wasn't a troll , I really was just trying to get help .
although your words kinda hurt me , I will try my best to write a story worth reading for you guys .
I admit I did get hurt a little , but I'm not gonna give up just because someone criticized me . I'm actually thankful for the harsh critique cause that will motivate me, and help me improve my writing skills to not disappoint you guys . <3
For the love all things grammatical. You don't put a space BOTH sides of a full stop or comma, the punctuation follows directly after the word, with a single space AFTER it.
Also: My money's on Mizal winning any kind of mean-girl contest/bitch fight, etc. At least until Steve turns up.