squatter, The Wordsmith
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The dead man's search for light, a lost man's search for hope, but in a world of darkness, not all is pleasant...
This is for the 90 minute story writing challenge! So it will be short...
In the future, humans are just one of many races in the galaxy, they have lived with the SilverRoid, Apox and many minor civilizations for centuries, occasionally there were wars, but nothing like this. Slight hostilities have escalated dramatically to a fully fledged war of the races. Only one civilization can survive in this galaxy now...
This is NOT a story, I repeat, THIS IS NOT A STORY. This is a working script made for nmelssx's challenge. Here you bet on horses and see if you can make a fortune!
The fate of the world is in your hands because winning the war wont be easy, nor will it be a fair fight without you. The two groups of people known as Psykers and Norms have come a long way, head to head in the battle for territory. Figuring out the humans labeled Norms along the way, you must become the one and only greatest Psyker warrior you can because the Humanity of Psykers depends on it.
Your Character Background:
Full Name: Todd Cyrus Mason
Ethnicity: African-American, Caucasian, Cherokee
Power: Control Fire Element, Manipulate it mentally and physically.
Skin color Olive , Blue eyes with grey mist, button nose, red curly hair, thick cinnamon lips, thin eyebrows.
Strengths: Adapt to situations, computer whiz, Blends in, Social when need to be, and energetic.
Weakness: Over-Confident, Lack of power (Due to getting powers until 14 years of age), Not very experienced being trained at Power Academy for only 5 years.
Should I finish it or trash it : this is not a finish story ! I need feedback once again this story is not finish I want to know if you guys would like it or not drop comments but this is story is not finish !
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Recent PostsScotland on 9/19/2014 8:21:27 PM
Scotland on 9/19/2014 8:20:22 PM
I get that, but it is still going to make a massive commotion in the economy for a few days after (and I was exaggerating a bit on my last post).
Point Ladder! on 9/19/2014 8:18:15 PM
Yeah... We don't want the MAG point gods ruining the fun of a point ladder. ;-)
Point Ladder! on 9/19/2014 8:16:47 PM
Maybe, not all of this has to be exact, top 10 or 20 does sound more reasonable, but what about the 'my stuff point ladder' to compare you to other members around your point level...
Point Ladder! on 9/19/2014 3:44:01 AM
I was thinking about how to make points on the site more interesting and 'suspenseful'
or maybe just playing minecraft, when I thought of having a 'point ladder' with maybe the top 50 on the front page, and others closest to your point level shown on your points section of the my stuff section, just to add a bit of suspense. After all, stories are suspenseful (sometimes), and this site is about stories...
Scotland on 9/19/2014 2:52:05 AM
Yep, if the yes votes wins, everyone in Europe is going to drop dead when they see the world economy and the stock markets the day after (and all the yes voters will go 'ah... whoops?'). Personally I don't like the idea of a monarchy, but I hate the idea of a global crisis even more.
Hey guys on 9/15/2014 5:59:51 AM
Google translate... That is a BAD SITE! Idioms (bits of text that cannot be directly translated to, or that have a completely different meaning in another language) are a big problem with google translate, other ideas would be much better. PS, I'm writing this from personal experience.
Scripting problems on 9/9/2014 2:06:40 AM
New it was just some silly mistake (typical of me), thanks all!
Scripting problems on 9/8/2014 4:52:18 AM
Ok, so this seemed like a basic task but something has obviously gone wrong (knowing me it's most like just a tiny little silly mistake) and I can't seem to fix it. Ok, so I am making a last page link with a map (item). In the map item scripting section, I have put the code %LASTPAGE := $PAGEID. When this map is selected, you go to a different chapter where you can get information about different places around the game. On the starting page of this map I have a back link (for when you have finished going through the links and looking at different areas, these other pages have back links going to the page that comes before them) that has the link script $DEST := "@P" + "%LASTPAGE". But for some reason this script doesn't seem to work, the first one works fine at setting the variable, but the link to go back doesn't work! Have I done something wrong in the scripting, is it something about it being a different chapter or is this a bug?
Galactic Rampage on 9/5/2014 3:31:26 AM
Both, you will have opportunities to complete one on one fights with opponents as well as sending your forces to attack certain planets.