Friendship Forever

A family friendly storygame by khadijahzahra09

Player Rating2.42/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"

Based on 11 ratings since
Played times (finished )

Story Difficulty1/8

"No possible way to lose"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level1/8

"Appropriate for all ages"

Stories with this maturity level will not, by design, have any potentially objectionable content. An example of a type story with this rating would be a quiz on mathematics.

Player Comments

It was ok, it was really cute

— Darksonglove_4 on 10/26/2018 10:12:15 PM with a score of 0

This is so wholesome and sweet I wanted to like it more, but being rushed out with a bunch of errors and the lack of any real choices hurt what otherwise could've been a nice children's game.

Please proofread your work next time, there's no deadline for releasing these and no reason to miss so many errors with punctuation, grammar etc (and at one point Claire's name change's to Laura...) with a story this short.

More choices, and by that I mean choices that actually change the story would improve the experience too as well as adding some much needed content. At barely 1200 words this is pretty sparse. You click through five linear pages at the start and the few options you do have later are all cosmetic. The description says 'Explore this game' but there's not really much to it.

I think you really do have potential though and future stories could do well if you just put a little more attention into cleaning them up.