American Outlaws: The James Gang

a Edutainment by Will11

Commended by EndMaster on 9/20/2019 7:00:31 PM

Player Rating6.77/8

"#28 overall, #2 for 2016"
based on 380 ratings since 07/20/2016
played 5,541 times (finished 426)

Story Difficulty5/8

"run through the jungle"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level4/8

"need to be accompanied by an adult"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG.

Jesse James was a lad that killed many a man / he robbed the Glendale train / he stole from the rich and he gave to the poor / he had a hand and a heart and a brain.

It was on a Saturday night and the moon was shining bright / they robbed the Glendale train / and people did say over many miles away / it was those outlaws Frank and Jesse James!

Now the people held their breath when they heard of Jesse's death / and wondered how he'd ever come to fall / Robert Ford, it was a fact, he shot Jesse in the back / While Jesse hung a picture on the wall...

In this story your name is Bill Grey and you are an outlaw, one of a desperate gang who have chosen to live outside the law. By robbing Yankee banks you can make more money in one day than you could make in ten years of work but at the cost that thousands of lawmen and law-abiding citizens everywhere will hunt you relentlessly, not stopping until you are brought to justice Dead or Alive! By surviving deadly gunfights and eluding pursuit with the help of your fellow outlaws your objective is to escape with your ill-gotten gains and live a life of luxury!

Author's Note: This is a little gift to the site to make up for the fact that The CYS Challenge isn't even a quarter finished yet and Magellan 5 is still in the planning stage. As always with my Edutainment stories it's about 90% true but events have been edited or simplified to make the story flow more easily and be more enjoyable. Incidentally my personal feelings about Jesse James and his companions is that history has been incredibly kind to men who shot defenseless people, stole the money of their countrymen and kept it all for themselves but the things he and others like Billy the Kid, John Dillinger et al did are so remarkable it's hard to keep from admiring their pure nerve :)

Player Comments

KILLED is 1.
SCORE is 13500.

My score before I got the 100k bonus for surviving! This was a lot of fun, even if my view of most of the infamous outlaws from that period is that they were assholes murdering unarmed people who just lucked out when history decided to heavily romanticize them.

I'm sure I could've racked up a higher score, but I was roleplaying a bit and actively trying to avoid robberies and shootouts after the train crash. Seems like the original big score was the first bank robbery and they might as well have quit while they were ahead. (Hell, that original 8,500 share would've almost been enough to retire on in a time you could buy an acre of land for $5 and laborers made a dollar a day....)

Interesting how most of the others (other than Cole the action hero badass) seemed like pretty regular people while Jesse was a bit of a lunatic addicted to the thrill of it all, realistically I don't think think the others did themselves any favors hooking up with him. They didn't even get to go down in history, comparatively speaking--Jesse James is the only name most people know.

The incident with John shooting the pipe out of the man's mouth...that was real? Holy shit, I really do need to read up on these guys. Can you recommend some good resources for readers who want more details on the gang?

Anyway, I'm amazed you had time to write this in the middle of everything else with how busy you've been at work. You're putting us all to shame, man. :D

-- mizal on 7/21/2016 9:49:57 AM with a score of 113500
The idea of Edutainment is to both teach people and to entertain them, in a way that makes learning enjoyable. This game strikes a great balance between both. Not only does it teach the reader about a lot of interesting outlaws, it does it in a way that's both fun and exciting.

It has good usage of variables. I played around with it to see what would happen and I liked the approach. Spelling and grammar seemed clean. If there were any issues, it wasn't enough to distract me from the story.

The minor problem I had, which you yourself pointed out in the "Author's Perspective" section, is that getting a higher score requires you to kill more people. That's subjective though, especially since this is a game about being an outlaw. If you made a sequel, maybe offer two routes: a high positive score for killing, or a low negative score for taking a "peaceful" outlaw approach. That'd give two different goals to reach for.

Overall I was most impressed by your knowledge, research and devotion to representing all of the outlaws in a fair and engaging way. This could easily be fiction and be just as fun, which goes to show how well the source material was used. With all that said, this is now my favorite Edutainment game on the site.
-- IronPanther on 7/20/2016 11:35:44 PM with a score of 116800
KILLED is 5.
SCORE is 26800 (before the bonus)

It was quite satisfying. Descriptions were brief enough to keep you focused, but not so much that they'd make you not care about the story and the characters. I chose to follow Jesse James a great deal of the way and only tried going to California before hitting the "back" button. I mean you're an outlaw and spending a couple of years as a farmer is wasting your potential.

Spelling is apparently fine, the writing style is not exhausting the reader, while maintaining the vital information in the story (and the informative-'educational' value) as I mentioned.

I'm looking forward to more of your stories!
-- Transcendent on 9/14/2019 3:36:06 PM with a score of 126800
Really cool little mini game, liked the flavour and shooting innocents in the face
-- Glokta on 7/31/2019 3:58:27 PM with a score of 118000
Well done
-- Neal on 7/17/2019 11:44:44 PM with a score of 127100
A Resonable End To A Carrer
-- Dan on 7/14/2019 4:52:11 PM with a score of 130200
Very good read, one of my favorites next to the Dillinger Gang. Amazing work.
-- JonathantheEthereal on 6/3/2019 6:15:52 PM with a score of 130000
That was a very fun read, well done
-- Agstand on 5/16/2019 4:39:24 PM with a score of 129800
Yo this shit's fire man 10/10 IGN!!
-- B-Dawg on 5/16/2019 1:21:52 PM with a score of 8500
great game overall
-- datwul on 5/9/2019 10:25:57 AM with a score of 126800
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