Player Comments on American Outlaws: The James Gang

GUNFIGHTS is 7.
INJURED is 1.
KILLED is 1.
ROBBERIES is 9.
SCORE is 13500.

My score before I got the 100k bonus for surviving! This was a lot of fun, even if my view of most of the infamous outlaws from that period is that they were assholes murdering unarmed people who just lucked out when history decided to heavily romanticize them.

I'm sure I could've racked up a higher score, but I was roleplaying a bit and actively trying to avoid robberies and shootouts after the train crash. Seems like the original big score was the first bank robbery and they might as well have quit while they were ahead. (Hell, that original 8,500 share would've almost been enough to retire on in a time you could buy an acre of land for $5 and laborers made a dollar a day....)

Interesting how most of the others (other than Cole the action hero badass) seemed like pretty regular people while Jesse was a bit of a lunatic addicted to the thrill of it all, realistically I don't think think the others did themselves any favors hooking up with him. They didn't even get to go down in history, comparatively speaking--Jesse James is the only name most people know.

The incident with John shooting the pipe out of the man's mouth...that was real? Holy shit, I really do need to read up on these guys. Can you recommend some good resources for readers who want more details on the gang?

Anyway, I'm amazed you had time to write this in the middle of everything else with how busy you've been at work. You're putting us all to shame, man. :D

-- mizal on 7/21/2016 9:49:57 AM with a score of 113500
The idea of Edutainment is to both teach people and to entertain them, in a way that makes learning enjoyable. This game strikes a great balance between both. Not only does it teach the reader about a lot of interesting outlaws, it does it in a way that's both fun and exciting.

It has good usage of variables. I played around with it to see what would happen and I liked the approach. Spelling and grammar seemed clean. If there were any issues, it wasn't enough to distract me from the story.

The minor problem I had, which you yourself pointed out in the "Author's Perspective" section, is that getting a higher score requires you to kill more people. That's subjective though, especially since this is a game about being an outlaw. If you made a sequel, maybe offer two routes: a high positive score for killing, or a low negative score for taking a "peaceful" outlaw approach. That'd give two different goals to reach for.

Overall I was most impressed by your knowledge, research and devotion to representing all of the outlaws in a fair and engaging way. This could easily be fiction and be just as fun, which goes to show how well the source material was used. With all that said, this is now my favorite Edutainment game on the site.
-- IronPanther on 7/20/2016 11:35:44 PM with a score of 116800
it's a really neat game about the history behind it
-- briantimothy on 7/27/2020 4:04:20 AM with a score of 21100
This was a really cool game.
-- Kels on 6/17/2020 2:44:31 PM with a score of 127300
fun enough
-- jcash21 on 6/8/2020 2:24:38 PM with a score of 127100
Great story!
-- Hans on 5/28/2020 3:49:35 PM with a score of 129100
it the best one
-- yeet on 2/21/2020 2:36:31 PM with a score of 130000
This was fun as fuck. Idk how I won this on my first run but I guess it’s proof I should be an outlaw
-- Danger on 2/11/2020 9:57:20 AM with a score of 127800
I think it was a very historical story and very well made.
-- jeff on 2/7/2020 6:40:29 PM with a score of 123200
This storygame was loads of fun! It filled me with the thrill of whizzing bullets and money and glory for the taking. It made me reminisce of the company of my fellows who perished in battle. I also managed to kill, injure, and rob the most out of the whole gang : )
-- NocturnalCreature on 12/28/2019 5:40:01 AM with a score of 130200
Loved it
-- Johnny on 12/26/2019 3:19:49 AM with a score of 130100
kek
-- I. C. on 12/10/2019 6:51:12 AM with a score of 127200
Good

-- Nuggs on 12/7/2019 6:56:18 PM with a score of 129600
noice
-- Kases on 11/28/2019 6:46:58 PM with a score of 125300
Wow this game was extremely good and kept me thinking of what I would have done if I lived this life. 10/10 in my opinion keep making great stories and I will read every single story you make. Thank you!
-- Ajay on 11/26/2019 10:12:18 AM with a score of 119300
It’s such a well written story, and draws you in. I just recently started playing all the gang games, and somehow everybody ends up dead, and I’m alive.
-- SheTookThem on 11/21/2019 8:10:05 AM with a score of 122700
Lots of fun
-- Daniel Fowlds on 11/5/2019 7:41:02 PM with a score of 130200
Fabulous game
-- god on 11/2/2019 12:09:09 PM with a score of 127600
GUNFIGHTS is 9.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 5.
ROBBERIES is 15.
SCORE is 26800 (before the bonus)

It was quite satisfying. Descriptions were brief enough to keep you focused, but not so much that they'd make you not care about the story and the characters. I chose to follow Jesse James a great deal of the way and only tried going to California before hitting the "back" button. I mean you're an outlaw and spending a couple of years as a farmer is wasting your potential.

Spelling is apparently fine, the writing style is not exhausting the reader, while maintaining the vital information in the story (and the informative-'educational' value) as I mentioned.

I'm looking forward to more of your stories!
-- Transcendent on 9/14/2019 3:36:06 PM with a score of 126800
Really cool little mini game, liked the flavour and shooting innocents in the face
-- Glokta on 7/31/2019 3:58:27 PM with a score of 118000
Well done
-- Neal on 7/17/2019 11:44:44 PM with a score of 127100
A Resonable End To A Carrer
-- Dan on 7/14/2019 4:52:11 PM with a score of 130200
Very good read, one of my favorites next to the Dillinger Gang. Amazing work.
-- JonathantheEthereal on 6/3/2019 6:15:52 PM with a score of 130000
That was a very fun read, well done
-- Agstand on 5/16/2019 4:39:24 PM with a score of 129800
Yo this shit's fire man 10/10 IGN!!
-- B-Dawg on 5/16/2019 1:21:52 PM with a score of 8500
great game overall
-- datwul on 5/9/2019 10:25:57 AM with a score of 126800
Amazing
-- No u on 4/30/2019 3:03:40 PM with a score of 124800
That was a pretty good story. I had a good time playing it, seeing someone else who sees the truth and not the romanticized West.
-- Altair on 4/23/2019 2:14:24 PM with a score of 129600
This is actually really cool. Normally, I wouldn’t read Edutainment, but a friend recommended Will11 and I happened to read this one. It is so cool!!! Thank you!
-- The_Broken_God on 4/16/2019 11:30:04 PM with a score of 30000
This game was just pure amazing the entire way. There are so many paths, and there was an excellent use of variables. I strongly recommend this story to anybody even remotely interested in history. 8/8
-- C6H8O6 on 4/9/2019 3:01:46 PM with a score of 129800
GUNFIGHTS is 13.
INJURED is 6.
KILLED is 10.
ROBBERIES is 18.
-- 06MWeigman on 4/3/2019 9:03:35 AM with a score of 127700
SCORE is 127700
-- 06MWeigman on 4/2/2019 8:50:38 AM with a score of 127700
Really enjoyed it. One of the best stories in its category.
-- James on 3/24/2019 2:58:48 AM with a score of 130200
OOOO BOYYY THIS GAME IS AWESOME!
-- Kuro on 3/8/2019 2:55:05 PM with a score of 127600
Great game, very enjoyable and not too long
-- Ethan on 2/26/2019 6:56:34 PM with a score of 127100
Good little story and excellent retelling of history. Made it to the end alive but had to spend 25 years in jail. Well crafted story and excellent retelling. I was apparently not a very good shot!
-- Robert Harrison on 2/26/2019 10:57:38 AM with a score of 117100
Very good, loved it all! Not very many western stories pop up here!
-- LCarnage on 2/21/2019 3:52:34 PM with a score of 115100
A fun trip through some of the old gunfighter stories I at least grew up with. Pretty accurate historically too. A light view on why people became robbers in post civil war America.
-- DerPrussen on 2/10/2019 9:44:02 PM with a score of 119300
Brilliant story. I was very interested to read how the author creates timelines for the different criminals and hopefully I'll be able to read more of his books in the future,
-- Marc on 1/12/2019 7:50:30 PM with a score of 113900
Yeeet haw
-- Mal on 1/11/2019 9:39:13 PM with a score of 129800
good story, with decisions you ponder on for some time after hastily making them
-- mamunkchins on 12/21/2018 8:45:11 AM with a score of 115700
It was a fantastic game, that kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Very well wrote, and a story that always has you thinking ahead towards survival.
-- Black King on 12/12/2018 10:48:20 AM with a score of 127800
GUNFIGHTS is 12.
INJURED is 5.
KILLED is 11.
ROBBERIES is 20.
SCORE is 129000.
Really fun game. Absolutely worth your time; there's a perfect balance of education and entertainment. Never felt bored once due to the fact that every decision felt vital to my character's survival. Overall, amazing game.
-- SmileForTheCamera on 11/14/2018 3:58:01 PM with a score of 129000
Boom, had lots of fun.

GUNFIGHTS is 10.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 7.
ROBBERIES is 18.
SCORE is 125700.
-- rcaneer on 11/7/2018 1:09:36 AM with a score of 125700
Really enjoyable
-- Jimmypop1986 on 10/21/2018 6:53:11 PM with a score of 17300
This game was so iconic. It was like controlling a Quentin Tarantino movie.
-- The Icons on 10/3/2018 2:11:51 PM with a score of 114700
This was fun. Loved it!
-- JD on 9/22/2018 1:13:12 AM with a score of 124800
Very informative, but also suspenseful and fun!
-- Meg on 9/19/2018 1:05:29 AM with a score of 128300
loved it plan on replaying it.
-- Jo on 9/6/2018 12:47:50 AM with a score of 117600
GUNFIGHTS is 10.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 10.
ROBBERIES is 19.
SCORE is 119700.

This game is pretty great! Definitely worth your time.
-- Some Guy on 7/9/2018 9:05:34 AM with a score of 119700
Great game
GUNFIGHTS is 14.
INJURED is 5.
KILLED is 13.
ROBBERIES is 21.
SCORE is 129600.
-- Will on 6/20/2018 6:54:58 PM with a score of 129600
GUNFIGHTS is 10.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 4.
ROBBERIES is 22.
SCORE is 130000.
-- AKT and TMH on 6/19/2018 7:09:24 PM with a score of 130000
Great Game! Always wondering if I should go on that next robbery and wondering where the best place to hide out is.

I didn't 'go for kills' and you mentioned that Jesse and gang killed a lot of random innocent people. If you wanted to, you could try to count killings differently depending on type. I suppose the argument is that even the justified killings are killings of innocent people.
-- Symphony on 6/7/2018 12:27:27 AM with a score of 129400
A bit of a long read but worth every word if you want a taste of history
-- Aegle on 5/5/2018 12:21:14 AM with a score of 130000
pretty interesting
-- Lowest on 4/15/2018 3:29:12 PM with a score of 115000
Man this game was sooo good!!
-- KLeGrand141 on 3/10/2018 12:18:32 PM with a score of 130000
Great read
-- Chase Albertson on 2/19/2018 12:59:38 PM with a score of 129500
SCORE is 113300
-- Xaon on 1/27/2018 1:38:48 AM with a score of 113300
Always A Thrilling Story To The End
-- T.J. McCloud on 1/17/2018 2:02:38 AM with a score of 130200
Great game made out like a bandit and became the hidden survivor
-- Collin on 1/15/2018 9:07:23 PM with a score of 129100
I Got Hidden Survivor Badge
-- JJ McQuade on 1/10/2018 10:55:50 PM with a score of 130200
Really enjoyed this story.
-- scarlettv on 12/20/2017 9:49:11 AM with a score of 128100
This is one of the best stories I've ever read, I'll definitely be ready and playing through any more you write. Keep up the absolutely amazing work. I, and I'm sure many others appreciate you taking so much time to write this with all of the possible choices, top notch grammar, and lengthy pages. Wow. Just wow. 11/10
-- Tyler on 11/30/2017 12:25:21 AM with a score of 127800
I like these type of stories, outlaws interest me
-- ficool2 on 11/17/2017 4:29:09 AM with a score of 129700
I really enjoyed this experience and I think this is what choose your own adventure stories should be all about. The setting was great and it was very clear that the author had a concise and well thought-out timeline based on the real life gang that you get to take part in. The characters were well described, and given the fact that a lot of members end up getting killed, arrested, or retire, sometimes character development is sort of overshadowed by the events in the story. I enjoyed the rob, hide, rob, hide structure of the story, but I think sometimes during the "hide" sections, their could be other subplots involved to make the story more interesting (and more creative ways of getting yourself killed). That being said, this was one of the better choose your adventure stories, I gave it a 7/8, and it was refreshing to not read another zombie story. I hope the author chooses to write a sequel as I enjoyed his style and would be interested in playing as a gang member in one of the other gangs that existed in the West.
-- AxeMurderer on 11/16/2017 3:51:31 PM with a score of 125000
A fun story that draws the reader in.
-- Russell C on 10/11/2017 12:03:45 PM with a score of 27800
That was a superb experience thanks for that wonderful simulation
-- Tk on 10/8/2017 3:36:11 PM with a score of 129600
129600
-- ien on 10/5/2017 1:50:08 PM with a score of 129600
Very fun combination of truth and fiction into a storygame. Interesting trying to make decisions based on the info given as what to do next
-- Film4kim on 10/2/2017 9:47:38 PM with a score of 125000
Amazing
-- xDERPYxCREEPERx on 9/22/2017 1:08:55 PM with a score of 125700
Excellent! Well worth the read
-- J on 9/9/2017 1:19:37 AM with a score of 130200
incredible thank you
-- denis17 on 8/16/2017 7:41:03 PM with a score of 130000
This is a good history lesson filled with good story telling. I am giving it a six out of nine on account of spelling and grammatical errors. I would also like to thank the author for taking the time to write this. Thank you!
-- Nate on 7/21/2017 12:39:20 AM with a score of 114700
Amazing game, I was actually sad when jesse died.
-- punk_wolf on 6/28/2017 2:49:07 PM with a score of 130300
Nice But less options
-- Gab122006 on 6/10/2017 3:58:03 AM with a score of 127200
I loved it
-- Gar on 4/28/2017 4:41:16 PM with a score of 127600
always the same.
-- nate on 3/30/2017 6:48:13 PM with a score of 121200
This a great game Will11. Hope to see some more storygames come out from you!
-- SpaceDust on 3/17/2017 3:44:14 PM with a score of 8500
great game, but a little linear
-- Dave on 3/17/2017 8:11:21 AM with a score of 129600
I didn't even know about this outlaw group, this was a fun game and something I would like to see more of in the future.
-- Shinobi on 2/17/2017 11:27:28 AM with a score of 118400
Just Great. Hope to see more.
-- Banten on 2/11/2017 10:18:25 AM with a score of 129600
Great game. Very fun
-- travis on 2/10/2017 10:26:26 PM with a score of 129700
I loved this game. I'm really sad though, because Jesse died, he was fantastic, but yeah, fantastic story!
-- Dj Senter on 2/4/2017 6:22:28 AM with a score of 129900
its really fun its easy fast but fun
-- superman_awesome_kid on 1/31/2017 1:09:48 PM with a score of 16900
GUNFIGHTS is 13.
INJURED is 5.
KILLED is 12.
ROBBERIES is 22.
SCORE is 130300.
-- venyanwarrior on 1/3/2017 5:53:27 PM with a score of 130300
This was a very,very good game and I had a wonderful experience,I truly felt like I was right there in the action.
-- Tom on 12/26/2016 7:54:23 PM with a score of 127800
Quite an enjoyable game! A more than adequate cure for bordom.
-- seib6466 on 12/23/2016 8:45:22 PM with a score of 127800
This was well written and fun to read. I'd encourage anyone interested in the period to give this one a try.
-- drcynic on 12/20/2016 12:26:51 AM with a score of 126000
This story is great!
-- happystory on 12/18/2016 9:43:37 PM with a score of 119700
Very fun.
-- SleeperHold27 on 12/14/2016 1:47:54 PM with a score of 125800
It was a awesome story I got to the secret ending
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/13/2016 6:05:05 PM with a score of 113900
Great story. Knowing history, I stuck by Frank James whenever I could.
-- kit on 12/12/2016 5:03:40 AM with a score of 129500
Pretty solid. I really like the attention to detail with the period. Very solid, and surprised I made it out alive on my first run through. Strongly suggest!!
-- Dorksmith1992 on 12/10/2016 12:00:27 AM with a score of 126600
Pretty good
-- K on 11/26/2016 5:11:38 PM with a score of 130000
Fun game! Surprised how long I lasted, lol
-- Kelli on 11/22/2016 6:28:15 PM with a score of 114500
Awesome, awesome, game. This was my favorite story game I have played yet.
-- Elijah on 11/15/2016 2:55:02 PM with a score of 120600
GUNFIGHTS is 7.
INJURED is 3.
KILLED is 5.
ROBBERIES is 15.
SCORE is 117000.
-- TestingJest on 11/7/2016 8:18:21 PM with a score of 117000
Straight up awesome.
-- Reaver17 on 11/7/2016 2:58:55 PM with a score of 118400
Just one suggestion - on the results table, make it so that MY personal results get added in.

Other then that? Perfect.
-- Lone_Wolf on 11/2/2016 10:17:55 PM with a score of 128200
As I die beside Jesse James, I feel the need to play this again.

And again.

And again.

AND AGAIN.
-- Lone_Wolf on 11/2/2016 10:13:18 PM with a score of 28200
OMG MY SCORE WAS 191000!!!!!
-- venyanwarrior on 11/2/2016 6:02:40 PM with a score of 119100
GUNFIGHTS is 13.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 11.
ROBBERIES is 21.
SCORE is 129600.
That was pretty badass!
-- Norvus Orbus on 10/30/2016 11:51:42 PM with a score of 129600
What an amazing story! Will play over and over!!

GUNFIGHTS is 13.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 12.
ROBBERIES is 19.
SCORE is 127200.
-- Piney Diamondback on 10/28/2016 3:25:17 AM with a score of 127200
great
-- frank2 on 10/22/2016 1:17:00 AM with a score of 126900
Best choose your own yet.
-- Hayden on 10/21/2016 11:06:35 AM with a score of 114600
It was lit fam
-- mlgtoortle24 on 10/20/2016 4:48:29 PM with a score of 127800
Won in everything except for robberies, got 20 lol, survived in the end too
-- Andrest07 on 10/15/2016 9:39:21 AM with a score of 127600
this was very fun! a very thorough game that has substance.
-- emilykat44 on 10/9/2016 11:48:26 AM with a score of 127400
As you and Cole enter the Twentieth Century you reflect over the lives you have led.

GUNFIGHTS is 7.
INJURED is 1.
KILLED is 2.
ROBBERIES is 13.
SCORE is 23200.

Also got the 100,000 K bonus for surviving. It was a great read and the choices were very good. I only wish there were a bit more variety in choices and better executions in the robberies/heists.
-- Jodo on 10/5/2016 11:11:12 PM with a score of 123200
awesome read
-- Antonio on 10/5/2016 7:05:08 PM with a score of 117800
This was my first time playing a game like this and I really enjoyed it. I've always loved the old west. This game was very interesting and I will likely play it over and over trying different options out.
-- Matt on 10/5/2016 7:54:21 AM with a score of 128000
Really fun game. Felt good that I made enough right choices to come out to a safe life my first time around. Seemed like even with imminent danger al around the right choices were findable.
-- Ian on 10/5/2016 4:07:38 AM with a score of 118600
This Was a very detailed and good book, and I liked the choice to sit out or join every robbery.
-- GigaKnight on 9/29/2016 9:21:41 AM with a score of 124700
Interesting history.
-- Just for Fun on 9/13/2016 5:35:04 PM with a score of 128200
The game is interesting and worth replaying. Only one or two spelling mistakes but otherwise, the game is now one of my top favorites. You obviously put a lot of work into this story and creating more like this will shoot you to the stop quickly. Great work!
-- Apollo118 on 9/10/2016 6:02:12 PM with a score of 24700
Amazing game though it the character I was playing as seem secluded
-- Suli on 9/5/2016 12:44:35 AM with a score of 129600
That...was...awesome...

Only one problem. There should be a way to become leader of the gang (even though the grey gang sounds terrible), and the story was pretty linear, but other than that, it was really cool. 7/8
-- CookieRage7 on 9/3/2016 6:03:33 PM with a score of 127600
it was fun
-- abcdefg on 9/2/2016 4:19:14 PM with a score of 14100
Fantastic story writing i thoroughly enjoyed it.
-- Jesmate on 9/1/2016 4:51:26 AM with a score of 129800
Huge fan of the Wild West and Jesse James. A delight to read!
-- johnkoehler on 8/27/2016 9:18:20 PM with a score of 15800
Great game. Very well written and somehow i managed to get the best ending.
-- Zane on 8/26/2016 3:23:36 PM with a score of 130200
GUNFIGHTS is 6.
INJURED is 3.
KILLED is 2.
ROBBERIES is 13.
SCORE is 116500.
-- Aman on 8/23/2016 7:01:00 PM with a score of 116500
Awesome Western game
-- poopmok on 8/20/2016 3:02:48 AM with a score of 129200
stared out confusing but it got really good and has a lot of historical accuracy's
-- Richard Stagge on 8/19/2016 1:53:49 PM with a score of 124600
Great game
-- Kjames98 on 8/13/2016 7:28:51 PM with a score of 127800
Awesome!
-- Annikat on 8/13/2016 5:02:50 PM with a score of 114300
Pretty good!
-- Dakota Hale on 8/12/2016 8:17:49 PM with a score of 129600
This game is great!!!
-- Alex Craig on 8/12/2016 8:01:24 PM with a score of 127800
Fun game I'll be playing this one again.
-- msrcl180 on 8/11/2016 8:26:16 PM with a score of 17200
This was really nice. Looking forward for more.
-- Sore on 8/10/2016 6:19:21 PM with a score of 130000
Niiiice!!
-- lejama88 on 8/10/2016 8:31:49 AM with a score of 130200
Great stuff. Really great job once again, Will!
-- Ogre11 on 8/8/2016 2:35:02 PM with a score of 124800
A beautiful storygame. I really enjoyed it.
-- MrMustachio on 8/3/2016 5:49:34 PM with a score of 29900
Awesome, I got the highest score in my first play-through, this story-game is awesome and I can't wait to see if there will be another installment set in a different era or focusing on a different gang.
-- Harian96 on 8/1/2016 10:18:19 PM with a score of 129600
Excellent writing coupled with an accurate portrayal of the causes that motivated the outlaws to the life of crime. Great Work!
-- Coledust on 7/31/2016 12:41:40 AM with a score of 127600
Absolutely loved it, great work!
-- James on 7/27/2016 7:25:21 AM with a score of 127600
GUNFIGHTS is 15.
INJURED is 6.
KILLED is 13.
ROBBERIES is 23.
SCORE is 130200.

I played as a homicidal, depraved maniac which is normally something that I don't do. I guess Bill Gray will now have to be considered among the "greatest" of the outlaws. Anyway, this was very entertaining and educational, so I guess I'll call it edutaining. :)
Great job, Will. I think that this is rightfully featured.
-- WouldntItBeNice on 7/26/2016 11:49:42 PM with a score of 130200
"Learning was never this fun", indeed. Great story, will! I'm waiting for Magellan :P
-- AstoundingStories on 7/25/2016 8:27:59 PM with a score of 117200
Awesome.........
-- Duche on 7/25/2016 5:13:27 PM with a score of 127600
One of the greatest
-- Temporary on 7/24/2016 4:28:00 PM with a score of 130000
Another great game, Will. To be fair, it seemed fairly rushed with a few typos, but other than that it was terrific. Very educational about a topic I know nothing about, it was quite fun with a cool score system, and it definitely adds a flush of life to the Edutainment system.
-- Steve24833 on 7/24/2016 2:07:14 PM with a score of 129900
Another great story.
-- iqqih on 7/23/2016 7:49:30 PM with a score of 129800
Great game dude, I like the amount of effort put into it. Keep writing. 7/8
-- Sharkworld78 on 7/23/2016 12:01:50 PM with a score of 23500
I thought it was a great educational and entertaining game. I would definitely read more of these if the author chose to write more.
-- Ezekiel Powell on 7/22/2016 11:48:38 PM with a score of 127600
Yeah that was a typo Trump, it was supposed to read "History has been kind to Jesse" though in the sense "Jesse, the name, has been kind to Jesse, the man" it also makes sense as half the reason Jesse James is still remembered is the alliteration of his name makes it fun to say and easy to remember :D
-- Will11 on 7/22/2016 10:41:11 PM with a score of 8500
Yay, got the hidden ending. Amazing story, very well written and entertaining.
-- Venezuela on 7/22/2016 6:20:31 PM with a score of 129800
Good story, learned a lot about the James-Younger gangs adventures.
-- BigRonn77 on 7/22/2016 3:41:04 PM with a score of 127500
Jesse has been kind to Jesse...
-- Trump2016 on 7/22/2016 1:48:33 PM with a score of 130000
Thank you everyone for your very kind feedback, I’m startled this game has been featured because personally I prefer some of the other things that I have written but I am glad that people enjoyed this, that makes the writing so much more worthwhile! Thank you again everyone who took the time to read my story and post comments and I will definitely write a few sequels to this in the next few months :D
-- Will11 on 7/22/2016 10:20:04 AM with a score of 130200
GUNFIGHTS is 15.
INJURED is 6.
KILLED is 12.
ROBBERIES is 22.
SCORE is 129800.
-- benholman448 on 7/21/2016 1:19:20 PM with a score of 129800
Fucking amazing, Will. Outstanding story and damn fine writing.
-- MasonJarGuzzi on 7/21/2016 12:08:10 PM with a score of 8500
Definitely an excellent story where not only do you learn about history, you live it. Just like the Donnor party, you get to be a part of that history while making decisions that make you feel like you're shaping history. Definitely earned an 8/8
-- benholman448 on 7/21/2016 12:01:40 PM with a score of 129800
good historical game and action packed too
-- The house master on 7/20/2016 8:56:48 PM with a score of 129500
I loved it
-- skugga on 7/20/2016 5:37:09 PM with a score of 130200
Great Game. I wonder how my score compares to others. I survived :D
-- Alex C on 7/20/2016 3:07:23 PM with a score of 127400
This was so much fun to play and read! Bravo on publishing yet another exciting adventure game! ^^ I think this certainly deserves high praise indeed.
-- TharaApples on 7/20/2016 10:34:50 AM with a score of 125700
GUNFIGHTS is 12.
INJURED is 4.
KILLED is 9.
ROBBERIES is 21.
SCORE is 129600.
Did I do good? :D

Anyways, another really, really good edutainment storygame from you ^-^
I liked my time as an outlaw!

Your writing really puts me into the story, and makes me worry about what my choice would result in.
-- Seto on 7/20/2016 10:17:38 AM with a score of 129600
7/8
-- Future on 7/20/2016 9:59:12 AM with a score of 129800
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