Agstand, The Dramatist

Member Since

9/27/2016

Last Activity

9/21/2017 8:54 PM

EXP Points

904

Post Count

131

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

0 wins / 0 losses

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Warden

Commendations

1

Hi I'm Agstand, sometimes called Ag

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Storygames

Siblings

In this story you play as Ben Higgins, a reclusive man who is forced to go out into the world after his sister disappears. Will you be able to find her?


Stockholm Syndrome

You are Linda Niles, a popular 19 year old singer enjoying life until you get kidnapped during a meet and greet. Try to escape and maybe even try to find the truth behind your kidnapping.


Consanguinity
unpublished

When an old friend disappears, Ben Higgins must once again enter a dangerous underworld.

NOTE: It's recommended you read Siblings first. 


Recollection
unpublished

You wake up in a field with you're memory gone. If that's not bad enough, there are also some people trying to kill you.

The somewhat of a sequel to Siblings. You don't need to play Siblings first but there are some references you'll miss if you don't.


They Came From Outer Space
unpublished

Aliens have arrived and they do not come in peace. Forget trying to figure out their plan, just focus on surviving.


Recent Posts

Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 9/17/2017 9:49:15 AM

A confused criminal!

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Okay, so...aside from the fact that you never find out why the police are after you (they just are), almost every path leads to a bad end. Or if it doesn't lead there, it leads to a junction where EVERY path is bad. It doesn't matter whether you fight the security guard or not. Every path in the corresponding 6 links is bad.

The character's behaviour seemed a bit out of place as well. You've just managed to escape the rock concert, you immediately tell a stranger that the police are after you? Why would you do that? And it turns out that the stranger wants you to rob a bank for him? You just told him that the police are after you and he asks you to commit a real crime? It just doesn't make any sense.

There's a lot of decisions but most of them are on the same linear path. That's my biggest gripe, really. They pretended to lead somewhere, and they just ended up with you being captured. That definitely needs improvement.

-- Saika on 8/9/2017 5:08:44 AM

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2. I won!

-- Rebecca on 9/11/2015 9:27:41 PM

3. I won on my 300,000th try!

-- Jeff on 2/28/2017 8:45:56 AM

 

A man to the slaughter

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4.   Uhhh..... okay....

-- GamerX on 4/11/2017 1:36:11 PM with a score of 0

5.  wow

-- bells23 on 5/30/2012 11:07:41 AM with a score of 0

 

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 9/15/2017 7:19:59 AM

Grounded!

1. Recommending a comment for featuring:

This storygame was a fun little thing to click through, although the pages were bare and contained only 2-3 sentences each. I would play this on a sunny day when I had too much time on my hands (which is virtually every day). But there are several improvements to be made here.

First of all, try and make your content pop and seem like a real story. The kind of vibe that I got from this was a written-in-twenty-minutes-and-waited-the-time-out kind of thing. It would have been even more fun if you threw some...real plot into it. It was a little bland; kind of like eating pancakes without maple syrup or butter. Add that salt and flour, give it some substance.

Secondly, try and give characters more development than just giving them five seconds of screentime (booktime?). It would be leagues more interesting and more fun to read.

So, I think you could have added a lot more than you did, and put a bit more effort in than you did. Improvements, improvements, right?

-- At_Your_Throat on 8/16/2017 10:48:23 PM with a score of 0

 

2.  Add Geared for children tag


Frustrating moments in Video Games on 9/11/2017 11:17:49 AM

Anytime you have to go underwater and your characters  act like they're in a jar of honey.


Frustrating moments in Video Games on 9/9/2017 5:36:24 PM

Escort missions.


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 8/25/2017 10:59:27 AM

It's Not Easy Being Me

add superhero tag

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/30/2017 10:17:42 AM

Die Zombie! die! Pt II

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1.   best game ever and number 1 was kool to

-- redpacman on 11/19/2008 4:33:45 PM with a score of 0 (Duplicate comment)

2.  613

-- on 2/25/2006 6:17:30 PM with a score of 0

3. Game should be moved to the horror section (currently in Sci-Fi adventure).

4. Add horror tag


New Contest Starting Soon on 6/28/2017 12:03:59 PM

Will the winner get your trophy AND the contest trophy?


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/25/2017 5:01:17 PM

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Desperate Heart

1.   bam badaboom bada bow

kakao

-- 2ndNeptune on 3/31/2016 10:29:13 PM with a score of 0

2.   yas

-- jujianah on 2/12/2015 11:30:52 AM with a score of 0

3.   :O

-- S on 12/12/2014 8:59:22 PM with a score of 0

4.  blahhhhhhhhh

-- nope on 11/24/2014 9:25:34 PM with a score of 0

5.   Y U NO GIVE HAPPY ENDING?

-- Il_Maestro on 9/7/2013 4:38:36 AM with a score of 0

6.    dis was sahh funneh lawl

-- heheheh on 10/17/2014 5:49:18 AM with a score of 0

7.  wow

-- jaidenbornt on 2/8/2012 2:08:04 PM with a score of 0

8.  can you put some sex in it

-- Karebare on 9/14/2014 1:02:39 PM with a score of 0

9.  needs more vivid, romantic, luscious and in depth sex scenes with demons... like anal... and how it smells

-- Demonlover69 on 11/11/2013 8:04:41 PM with a score of 0

10.  i finished it in under minute

-- hmck2004 on 7/10/2016 4:12:48 PM with a score of 0

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/16/2017 8:05:28 AM

I probably screwed something up, I'll try posting them again

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Ghosthunting-in-the-Little-Theatre

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Creature-2

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/16/2017 7:57:19 AM

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1. Creature 2

ts a ggame a littel to short good no less

-- brettthefox on 1/26/2013 11:25:49 PM with a score of 155

2.   Ghosthunting in the Little Theatre

Whattt???

-- cricketface on 5/4/2013 5:59:57 PM