Agstand, The Dramatist

Member Since

9/27/2016

Last Activity

8/18/2017 11:32 AM

EXP Points

887

Post Count

126

Storygame Count

2

Duel Stats

0 wins / 0 losses

Order

Warden

Commendations

1

Hi I'm Agstand, sometimes called Ag

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Storygames

Siblings

In this story you play as Ben Higgins, a reclusive man who is forced to go out into the world after his sister disappears. Will you be able to find her?


Stockholm Syndrome

You are Linda Niles, a popular 19 year old singer enjoying life until you get kidnapped during a meet and greet. Try to escape and maybe even try to find the truth behind your kidnapping.


Consanguinity
unpublished

When an old friend disappears, Ben Higgins must once again enter a dangerous underworld.

NOTE: It's recommended you read Siblings first. 


They Came From Outer Space
unpublished

Aliens have arrived and they do not come in peace. Forget trying to figure out their plan, just focus on surviving.


Recent Posts

Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/30/2017 10:17:42 AM

Die Zombie! die! Pt II

Recommending  comments for deletion

1.   best game ever and number 1 was kool to

-- redpacman on 11/19/2008 4:33:45 PM with a score of 0 (Duplicate comment)

2.  613

-- on 2/25/2006 6:17:30 PM with a score of 0

3. Game should be moved to the horror section (currently in Sci-Fi adventure).

4. Add horror tag


New Contest Starting Soon on 6/28/2017 12:03:59 PM

Will the winner get your trophy AND the contest trophy?


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/25/2017 5:01:17 PM

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Desperate Heart

1.   bam badaboom bada bow

kakao

-- 2ndNeptune on 3/31/2016 10:29:13 PM with a score of 0

2.   yas

-- jujianah on 2/12/2015 11:30:52 AM with a score of 0

3.   :O

-- S on 12/12/2014 8:59:22 PM with a score of 0

4.  blahhhhhhhhh

-- nope on 11/24/2014 9:25:34 PM with a score of 0

5.   Y U NO GIVE HAPPY ENDING?

-- Il_Maestro on 9/7/2013 4:38:36 AM with a score of 0

6.    dis was sahh funneh lawl

-- heheheh on 10/17/2014 5:49:18 AM with a score of 0

7.  wow

-- jaidenbornt on 2/8/2012 2:08:04 PM with a score of 0

8.  can you put some sex in it

-- Karebare on 9/14/2014 1:02:39 PM with a score of 0

9.  needs more vivid, romantic, luscious and in depth sex scenes with demons... like anal... and how it smells

-- Demonlover69 on 11/11/2013 8:04:41 PM with a score of 0

10.  i finished it in under minute

-- hmck2004 on 7/10/2016 4:12:48 PM with a score of 0

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/16/2017 8:05:28 AM

I probably screwed something up, I'll try posting them again

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Ghosthunting-in-the-Little-Theatre

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Creature-2

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/16/2017 7:57:19 AM

Recommending comments for deletion

1. Creature 2

ts a ggame a littel to short good no less

-- brettthefox on 1/26/2013 11:25:49 PM with a score of 155

2.   Ghosthunting in the Little Theatre

Whattt???

-- cricketface on 5/4/2013 5:59:57 PM

 

 

 


Riddles on 6/13/2017 7:24:47 PM

ok I got it this time, a train


Riddles on 6/13/2017 3:51:41 PM

The clap


Riddles on 6/9/2017 1:31:10 PM

A cloud?


One sentence description on 6/9/2017 10:16:58 AM

Stockholm Syndrome- A person is kidnapped and is very cool about it because why not?

Siblings- A guy with no friends looks for missing sister and shoots some people in the process.


Draw My Attention (Age of Banning) on 6/8/2017 4:59:49 PM

1. Recommending a comment for deletion

While My Guitar Violently Weeps

Many, many issues with this storygame.

First of all, I saw about half a dozen spelling and grammar mistakes (such as "freinds," and not "friends."), which really takes away from the overall writing.

Then, there was a sudden font change. Why did you suddenly make a transition to comic sans on like, one of the last pages? It's an annoying font, and the transition has no purpose.

It was completely illogical at many points. Why did you put this in modern adventure? This fits into like, horror more than modern adventure.

Some of the characters were well developed, and I could feel emotion for them (which is rather impressive since the storygame was rather short and didn't have a lot of words in general), but other characters seemed to be just thrown in for the purpose of just having more characters.

The dialogue was also screwed up multiple times throughout this storygame.

Spend more time writing in general. This needed more plot development as well, and maybe a more fleshed out setting.

I'll say 3/8. You've got potential.

-- MinnieKing on 5/25/2017 11:32:56 PM

Reason: Duplicate comment

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WarGames

add war tag.