Agstand, The Novelist
Hi I'm Agstand, sometimes called Ag
In this story you play as Ben Higgins, a reclusive man who is forced to go out into the world after his sister disappears. Will you be able to find her?
You are Linda Niles, a popular 19 year old singer enjoying life until you get kidnapped during a meet and greet. Try to escape and maybe even try to find the truth behind your kidnapping.
When an old friend disappears, Ben Higgins must once again enter a dangerous underworld.
NOTE: It's recommended you read Siblings first.
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Risk My Attention (CYStia: Land of Freedom) on 6/1/2019 1:46:46 PM
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-- bitchbaby jr. on 5/17/2018 10:38:16 PM
kill me in a sexual manner
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Risk My Attention (CYStia: Land of Freedom) on 5/20/2019 9:02:13 PM
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It's a good story I just wish there was a couple more options for some of them and ending when you do something wrong.
-- Lily on 4/27/2019 11:53:47 AM with a score of 0
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Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 9/17/2017 9:49:15 AM
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Okay, so...aside from the fact that you never find out why the police are after you (they just are), almost every path leads to a bad end. Or if it doesn't lead there, it leads to a junction where EVERY path is bad. It doesn't matter whether you fight the security guard or not. Every path in the corresponding 6 links is bad.
The character's behaviour seemed a bit out of place as well. You've just managed to escape the rock concert, you immediately tell a stranger that the police are after you? Why would you do that? And it turns out that the stranger wants you to rob a bank for him? You just told him that the police are after you and he asks you to commit a real crime? It just doesn't make any sense.
There's a lot of decisions but most of them are on the same linear path. That's my biggest gripe, really. They pretended to lead somewhere, and they just ended up with you being captured. That definitely needs improvement.
-- Saika on 8/9/2017 5:08:44 AM
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2. I won!
-- Rebecca on 9/11/2015 9:27:41 PM
3. I won on my 300,000th try!
-- Jeff on 2/28/2017 8:45:56 AM
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4. Uhhh..... okay....
-- GamerX on 4/11/2017 1:36:11 PM with a score of 0
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Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 9/15/2017 7:19:59 AM
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This storygame was a fun little thing to click through, although the pages were bare and contained only 2-3 sentences each. I would play this on a sunny day when I had too much time on my hands (which is virtually every day). But there are several improvements to be made here.
First of all, try and make your content pop and seem like a real story. The kind of vibe that I got from this was a written-in-twenty-minutes-and-waited-the-time-out kind of thing. It would have been even more fun if you threw some...real plot into it. It was a little bland; kind of like eating pancakes without maple syrup or butter. Add that salt and flour, give it some substance.
Secondly, try and give characters more development than just giving them five seconds of screentime (booktime?). It would be leagues more interesting and more fun to read.
So, I think you could have added a lot more than you did, and put a bit more effort in than you did. Improvements, improvements, right?
-- At_Your_Throat on 8/16/2017 10:48:23 PM with a score of 0
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Frustrating moments in Video Games on 9/11/2017 11:17:49 AM
Anytime you have to go underwater and your characters act like they're in a jar of honey.
Frustrating moments in Video Games on 9/9/2017 5:36:24 PM
Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 8/25/2017 10:59:27 AM
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Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/30/2017 10:17:42 AM
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1. best game ever and number 1 was kool to
-- redpacman on 11/19/2008 4:33:45 PM with a score of 0 (Duplicate comment)
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3. Game should be moved to the horror section (currently in Sci-Fi adventure).
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New Contest Starting Soon on 6/28/2017 12:03:59 PM
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