Agstand, The Dramatist

Member Since

9/27/2016

Last Activity

6/27/2017 6:12 PM

EXP Points

869

Post Count

124

Storygame Count

2

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0 wins / 0 losses

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1

Hi I'm Agstand, sometimes called Ag

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Storygames

Siblings

In this story you play as Ben Higgins, a reclusive man who is forced to go out into the world after his sister disappears. Will you be able to find her?


Stockholm Syndrome

You are Linda Niles, a popular 19 year old singer enjoying life until you get kidnapped during a meet and greet. Try to escape and maybe even try to find the truth behind your kidnapping.


Consanguinity
unpublished

When an old friend disappears, Ben Higgins must once again enter a dangerous underworld.

NOTE: It's recommended you read Siblings first. 


Recent Posts

Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/25/2017 5:01:17 PM

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Desperate Heart

1.   bam badaboom bada bow

kakao

-- 2ndNeptune on 3/31/2016 10:29:13 PM with a score of 0

2.   yas

-- jujianah on 2/12/2015 11:30:52 AM with a score of 0

3.   :O

-- S on 12/12/2014 8:59:22 PM with a score of 0

4.  blahhhhhhhhh

-- nope on 11/24/2014 9:25:34 PM with a score of 0

5.   Y U NO GIVE HAPPY ENDING?

-- Il_Maestro on 9/7/2013 4:38:36 AM with a score of 0

6.    dis was sahh funneh lawl

-- heheheh on 10/17/2014 5:49:18 AM with a score of 0

7.  wow

-- jaidenbornt on 2/8/2012 2:08:04 PM with a score of 0

8.  can you put some sex in it

-- Karebare on 9/14/2014 1:02:39 PM with a score of 0

9.  needs more vivid, romantic, luscious and in depth sex scenes with demons... like anal... and how it smells

-- Demonlover69 on 11/11/2013 8:04:41 PM with a score of 0

10.  i finished it in under minute

-- hmck2004 on 7/10/2016 4:12:48 PM with a score of 0

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/16/2017 8:05:28 AM

I probably screwed something up, I'll try posting them again

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Ghosthunting-in-the-Little-Theatre

http://chooseyourstory.com/story/Creature-2

 


Draw My Attention (Reign of the Mini-King) on 6/16/2017 7:57:19 AM

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1. Creature 2

ts a ggame a littel to short good no less

-- brettthefox on 1/26/2013 11:25:49 PM with a score of 155

2.   Ghosthunting in the Little Theatre

Whattt???

-- cricketface on 5/4/2013 5:59:57 PM

 

 

 


Riddles on 6/13/2017 7:24:47 PM

ok I got it this time, a train


Riddles on 6/13/2017 3:51:41 PM

The clap


Riddles on 6/9/2017 1:31:10 PM

A cloud?


One sentence description on 6/9/2017 10:16:58 AM

Stockholm Syndrome- A person is kidnapped and is very cool about it because why not?

Siblings- A guy with no friends looks for missing sister and shoots some people in the process.


Draw My Attention (Age of Banning) on 6/8/2017 4:59:49 PM

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While My Guitar Violently Weeps

Many, many issues with this storygame.

First of all, I saw about half a dozen spelling and grammar mistakes (such as "freinds," and not "friends."), which really takes away from the overall writing.

Then, there was a sudden font change. Why did you suddenly make a transition to comic sans on like, one of the last pages? It's an annoying font, and the transition has no purpose.

It was completely illogical at many points. Why did you put this in modern adventure? This fits into like, horror more than modern adventure.

Some of the characters were well developed, and I could feel emotion for them (which is rather impressive since the storygame was rather short and didn't have a lot of words in general), but other characters seemed to be just thrown in for the purpose of just having more characters.

The dialogue was also screwed up multiple times throughout this storygame.

Spend more time writing in general. This needed more plot development as well, and maybe a more fleshed out setting.

I'll say 3/8. You've got potential.

-- MinnieKing on 5/25/2017 11:32:56 PM

Reason: Duplicate comment

2. Add Tag

WarGames

add war tag.

 


Draw My Attention (New Age of Sage) on 3/4/2017 4:56:34 PM

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I'm not 100% sure if this meets the new standards for featured comments, I'll leave it up to you

Siblings

I see a trend over here...

You seem to be an aficionado for this specific writing style of yours. Start off with introducing the protagonist, some rather plain blocks of descriptive text, and slowly rise to a crescendo of literary excellence.

This style is well and good for me, but you might repulse some readers because they think the story is boring or something like that. Just saying.

Anyway, like your other story, there were still some spelling errors and whatnot. Please do think of a proofreader-for-hire in your next stories.

Negatives aside, it was nicely done. The story was moderately long, and the plot is okay, with enough choices to keep me and most others entertained. You got a lot of potential here, Ag.

Good job. Will drop all cents here. 6/8.

-- AgentX on 3/1/2017 4:55:39 PM

 


Draw My Attention (New Age of Sage) on 3/1/2017 4:54:35 PM

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Spoonboy Must die!

1. Beat it yay!

-- CeruleanFlare on 12/22/2016 3:17:40 PM

2. well...

-- 3f2d on 3/3/2012 1:35:14 AM

3. Rated!

-- Havacoman on 9/6/2005 9:58:44 PM