Die Zombie! Die! Pt II

Funny but short, there should be more endings and routes

It was pretty good but the huge amount of items and the lack of detail made me less interested than I would have been.

Well, it’s a decently written game, although there are some points that I would like to address.

The plot is unique enough, you start out in a prison complex, and escape with a person. The zombies are decently described, but the branching is a little lacking. It almost seemed like a win or lose situation sometimes. There were also really forced deaths, such as the one where you get bitten by a poisonous snake after going to pee in the brush.

I would like to see more of the emotion and thoughts of the main character, and some description of most characters, not just “small” for Taylor and such.

One thing that really concerned me was the amount of items in the game. It does give it some interactiveness, but sometimes it messes with your links(ex. Shotgun, bus driver/guard). As others have mentioned, there could’ve been more description and hints in the car part, it would be nice to have the readers go on instead of being stuck at one point, as this would give more playtime and enjoyment if they found the following pages entertaining enough.

Another thing. Fonts. Most of the time, I like my words to be even, the same fonted, and black unless there is a special page, there are times that call for this. It leaves the impression(at least to me) that it is messy, and unstructured.

Because this is a zombie game, there has to be even more description for the zombies. Take an example from dead man walking: “The teen girl only has a large gash across her stomach, where you can see some of her insides…. you give it the hardest double overhand swing you can muster just as it lunges to grab you. The force of the blow instantly crushes its head down to its nasal cavity and showers you in an explosion of the contents.”

Of course I don’t mean to necessarily get too gory, but a good, well described zombie scene can really do some good for both the reader, and you.

All in all, a solid story, keep up the good effort!

nestle

lol

It's a pretty good game, but the car part was confusing. Btw, if anyone is stuck on the car part, you need to throw everything out the window. Then, you'll be able to pass that part. If you don't get an option that says you're out of ideas, then you probably forgot to pick up something before the car part and need to restart the game.

Yaaay after throwing everything out the window-i wow

That car part was so confusing.

It was a nice game a kind of challenging good job

A great game but I DID have lots of trouble at the [SPOILER]





Zombie horde part with the car