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"trek through the forest"
"A well spent lunch break"
"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
You play as a traveler in a fictional world. You're goal is to make it through the forest alive.
This story was severely lacking in the description department. The author gave absolutely no context for the story's events. What was my motivation? Who was I? I enjoyed the author's pictures and the actual writing mechanics were very simple, but not horrible.
While the lack of description was a crippling problem for this story, an even larger problem was the lack of branches. This was an incredibly linear story and that ruins a lot of the fun.
on 3/24/2014 7:50:58 PM with a score of 0
The pictures were fun and interesting. However, it was way too short and there's no proper ending. Before even thinking about branches in the story I think you might want to settle on a "main" ending before creating other side endings.
on 4/11/2017 9:03:55 AM with a score of 0
...too many ways to die-ie! 50/50 chance you'll die with every choice you make, not alot else to do with your choices...
on 3/27/2017 7:36:28 PM with a score of 0
The story itself, and the notion behind it was fine. I wish there was more description in the environments, and actual goals. Without that, or any backstory, you don't really feel a connection to the character, or a reason to keep them alive. Also, I couldn't find an actual ending. Maybe I just missed it, but all I found was a dead page. An actual ending would very much improve the game.
on 3/19/2017 5:55:55 PM with a score of 0
I like the story, but it was a little too short. There was some errors in the story. If I were the writer, I would describe how the wounds felt fighting the thief, how the reader would "feel" about sword fighting the thief.
on 12/8/2016 11:22:54 PM with a score of 0
It is WAY too short.
I have no background, and there is no successful ending. I even went back and tried everything, but if I run from the bandits, it doesn't have any links or anything.
Needs more choices, items and better endings.
Other than that, it was OK, I guess.
on 4/27/2016 2:44:28 PM with a score of 0
The game is incompleat and linar. Every action leads to a dead end link or end game.
on 11/2/2015 9:38:24 AM with a score of 0
I liked it at first, but then I got to a part where if I chased the bandit, I lost, and if I exited the town, the story randomly ends. It seems to have promise and quality, but it's just unfinished.
on 9/5/2015 11:06:54 PM with a score of 0
The game is too linear, and it doesn't really have a point.
on 1/25/2014 10:06:58 PM with a score of 0
Good for a first, liked the pictures but whenever you win you get no comments so you have have to lose in order to comment on this storygame.
on 1/5/2014 10:38:37 PM with a score of 0
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