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played 4,930 times (finished 231)
"wandering through the desert"
"Not going to lose any sleep"
"choking hazard for children under 4"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 6. To compare to the movie rating system, this would be G.
You're young, smart, good looking and talented; you have what it takes to be a STAR. Of course, celebrity is not in everyone's destiny. Do you have what it takes to make it BIG TIME?
Well, after many unsuccessful attempts I gained a happy ending for myself. Not exactly big time, but I'm happy with the ending that I did end up receiving regardless. I found myself choosing love at the end :)
Anyway the writing was good, correlating well with the pictures that was provided for the reader, and this story wasn't simple, I liked that. There was actually a bit of difficulty in this storygame, accompanied with the dread of trying to achieve a rather grand goal alone.
Although this isn't a very long game, it's a well-written one that's good to spend some with. This is a storygame that I would have no issue with recommending.
My only issues were with the loops, they weren't really fun to experience, but fortunately the good writing remedies that problem somewhat.
This was a good effort and enjoyable storygame, bravo.
on 3/21/2017 12:37:30 AM
The whole game had an air of hopelessness while still reminding you that there is always hope if you believe. Some of the combinations of events seem absurd if you play correctly, and I didn't care for the deja vu feel, but for a first story...well, I find it hard to believe that this is a first. Good-no, great-no, fantastic job! Yes, quite laudable.
on 10/14/2008 3:09:31 AM
Well written, although the font was a little too small for my taste. My only other complaint was that even though I drove Cindy Lou home, she was still in Springfield when I got back- so I drove her home again, and then she was at the restaurant where I worked. That girl gets around.
on 10/2/2006 10:13:02 PM
Great story, lovely descriptions and it does captivate a reader. I'll try and use this in one of my lessons, if I may!
-- Joran on 5/15/2018 9:22:03 AM
"The movie is an unprecedented success! You are all the rage at film festivals throughout the world. Hollywood is abuzz with the news of a talented newcomer, that being you of course.
Like icing on the cake, you are presented with an Oscar for your role and become one of the most coveted stars in Tinseltown.
You look back to the day when you graduated from high school, and feel like it was part of another lifetime. You have overcome all hurdles and ended up making it, BIG TIME.
*P.S. Making it Big Time is not the only way to lead a fulfilling a life, see if you can figure out how things could have been different ;)"
LOL! talk about a big dream!
on 12/11/2017 10:32:44 PM
very good story
on 8/18/2017 3:59:52 PM
If you want to learn a way to make it big time, read this comment.
1. Go to hollywood
2. Take the flight with the layover
3. Explore the city
4.Get a Job
5. Learn about roll 2
6. Do the Indie film
on 5/7/2017 4:46:17 PM
Easy but short storyline.
-- Felix on 4/21/2017 8:31:50 PM
Yay I made big time.
on 12/18/2016 11:42:37 AM
I made it big time :D
on 6/30/2016 10:34:00 PM
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