Crazy Kidnapper

Player Rating3.25/8

"Too few ratings to be ranked"
based on 18 ratings since 08/02/2019
played 175 times (finished 19)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length3/8

"A nice jog down the driveway"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

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You're a pre-teen home alone. Try to escape the crazy kidnapper who comes to your house. This is not a true story. This story is a little violent, and weirdly scary. If you scare easily by this kind of stuff, please don't read this. Hope you enjoy! :) 

Player Comments

Ha! This game is amazingly funny. Every page has a funny and upbeat vibe, and I really liked the comical, even though it isn't a funny, deaths. It could be longer though, so I gave it a 5.
-- HappyTaco on 8/12/2019 12:58:50 PM
This story needs a lot of work to it. While it really wasn't terrible grammatically, it tended to have a lot of unnecessary slang and silliness in it. It also seemed like a lot of the early game choices were kind of meaningless. I really think this story would have benefitted from some more polishing. But it certainly wasn't the worst story I've read. Keep at it.
-- TurnipBandit on 8/11/2019 11:44:14 PM
This is better than your previous story, but you didn't proofread, there is far too much use of slang and the humour isn't funny at all.
-- RealKuriosIasoun on 8/8/2019 9:40:46 PM
There's a few spelling errors here and there in this.

The story places you in a semi-plausible kidnapping situation. I played through twice, the second time I escaped the first time I died from breakfast. So there is a bit of silliness there.
-- DerPrussen on 8/6/2019 5:52:45 PM
It certainly isn't bad for a first storygame.

It's straightforward enough, a kidnapper/child murderer arrives and attempts to capture you. Not at all a realistic story and the overuse of slang and Zoomer slang is making me feel old, but it was an entertaining 6 minutes.
-- castorgreatpoetguy on 8/2/2019 11:07:49 AM
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