Dave: Big Dickin'it adventure!
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played 1,242 times (finished 128)
"trek through the forest"
"A nice jog down the driveway"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.
Dave goes to work, will it be another day at the office or something different
It wasn't terrible. It's one of those 'random' games. It's pretty funny at points and there are quite a few branches. That said, it really could have done with proofreading. There was a noticeable lack of capitalisation and punctuation, especially speech marks. A little bit more description and backstory wouldn't hurt, either. This has potential to be better.
on 10/11/2014 3:05:27 AM
This was mildly entertaining, but it was kind of a waste of my time. It felt sort of half-assed and unfinished. It reminds me of one other story I read long ago, but I can't remember what it was.
on 1/16/2018 12:06:10 PM
It's random and confusing. Seriously. And the grammatical errors and spellings errors made it even more confusing. You go from sitting in traffic to fighting a sith crab person, to being the king of a city in space. Honestly, it'd be a 2 or 1 out of 8 if it wasn't so hilarious. The total nonsensical nature makes it rather entertaining, although it still doesn't make any sense.
on 12/2/2017 8:52:27 PM
That was so random and barely comprehensible.
on 6/17/2017 7:03:12 PM
This was actually very entertaining. This is gonna be my guilty pleasure storygame from now on. 4/8
on 3/24/2016 2:45:20 AM
Save the princess get married and your boss is like "hey you coming in today or what?" Also, you win a spaceship and just ditch the batmobli, I don't think so.
on 5/12/2015 11:33:00 AM
What just happened? Kinda funny though
on 3/29/2015 5:55:52 PM
Bunna bunny bunna bunna hat jedi with ninja son XD
on 7/19/2014 12:14:24 AM
-- Stormy the magnificent on 7/2/2014 9:04:16 PM
Awesome, I have a Ninja son!
on 10/6/2013 1:50:40 AM
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