Dead space

Player Rating3.57/8

"#384 overall, #34 for 2014"
based on 116 ratings since 06/09/2014
played 1,038 times (finished 138)

Story Difficulty3/8

"trek through the forest"

Play Length2/8

"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"

Maturity Level3/8

"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.

You are an explorer who has traveled to outer space. Your ship has all of a sudden stopped and you have been awoken by the computer before you have reached your destination. It is up to you space explorer to discover what has happen. Good luck!

Player Comments

Okay, this really did leave want for more. I finished this in about 5 minutes, and I'm not convinved it took you much longer than that to write. Seriously, if it's less than a thousand words and isn't either a short story (which I didn't get the feeling this is), or a poem (which I hope for your sake this wasn't an attempt at), then don't think about publishing until you've got at least another 5000 words under your belt.
However, this could be good! You've got pictures that actually did create atmosphere, even if it probably took you longer to find and upload them than write the story. I have to say I'm personally a sucker for a tale revolving around spaceships and all that stuff, but I was a little disappointing. Your writing was fairly good, though could do with some more compound sentences and explosive language to vamp it up (maybe that's just me having my own stylistic, convoluted taste though).
A deserved 4/8
-- AzBaz on 6/16/2017 5:24:28 PM
Please add more! I finished it in like 30 seconds! I just wanted to get the bad out of my way so on with the awards and happiness! I was actually working on a Dead Space game as well until I found this. I deleted my game and then read yours thinking that this site did not need another game like that. When I found that this was a small game I remade it and fixed my mistakes and even made it better so, add more or make a sequel. Thanks for helping me improve my story and keep working on these stories. I must go now, my people need me.
-- fullmetalfan890 on 11/4/2015 3:00:46 PM
Would be better if you used more sensory dialogue. It ended rather quickly. Still, the story was interesting while it lasted.
-- Frontierloc on 11/11/2017 2:31:17 PM
it's great!!
-- armyman254 on 3/2/2017 1:26:26 PM
I enjoyed the story. I look for shorter stories sometimes because I don't feel like muddling through long-winded descriptions and unnecessary storytelling. This story gave me exactly what I was looking for. I'm excited to see the next installment.
-- Victoria on 2/24/2017 8:22:29 PM
It's gud.
-- DomenicBooks on 2/24/2017 10:44:15 AM
Quite an easy game to play. Good and simple yet striking imagary. Maybe get it proof read at some point and also yes, it is a bit too short. Looking forward to part two!
-- Montagfire on 2/23/2017 12:57:24 PM
Too short.
-- Quorrah on 1/22/2017 4:04:37 PM
Meh it was ok but not much.
-- CeruleanFlare on 12/15/2016 2:11:24 PM
Well, what about the armory? Too short, but nice idea, and cool pictures.
-- crusader on 6/24/2016 5:44:18 PM
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