Eternal

Player Rating7/8

"even better than Reeses' Cups®"
based on 2114 ratings since 12/31/2013
played 13,661 times (finished 289)

Story Difficulty8/8

"mosie through a minefield"

Play Length8/8

"Even light has to break at the rest stop"

Maturity Level7/8

"anything goes"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 18. If this were a movie, it would probably be R.

The last hope for a dying empire

Additional notes:

This story can be very long assuming you're not dying. Years pass and your surroundings will most likely change. You may very well live a life time in the story.

As with any of my writings, the story comes before the game. However while there isn't a complex inventory and all of that, you can technically "win" by getting one of the epilogues.

There are 13 epilogues total.

There are also several points in the story where there are links that lead to more background information on various people, places, things and events. While not completely necessary to understanding the story, they do give you more insight into it.

Player Comments

Wow. This was a fantastic story it was well written, engaging, and you really feel invested in the story. I know many people will complain about the lack of choices in it for a choose your own adventure story. But for what it was, it was incredible.
-- D'Ante on 7/23/2012 10:53:00 PM with a score of 0
Perhaps my favorite part of playing through this storygame was how the early ending had a real sense of being an ending. They weren't just "you died, the end". The writing was very well done, but there are a few grammatical errors here and there (almost unavoidable really, with the length of the work). The characters were both believeable and very much alive! Thank you for allowing us to take a walk through your eternal vision. Overall, a wonderful read and a masterful demonstration of what a storygame can be, remember this!
-- oldmankatan on 10/22/2011 11:20:22 AM with a score of 0
A very dark read, but it was amazing nonetheless. It was entertaining, the characters were engaging (especially Gruz) and the story was immersing. There were a few minor grammatical/spelling errors, and at times it felt a little linear, but it was nothing that detracted from my enjoyment of the story. Well done. (I got the Eternal Couple epilogue.)
-- October on 9/28/2011 11:10:41 PM with a score of 0
Immersing
-- nick on 4/24/2014 12:27:02 PM with a score of 0
Well I finally got around to commenting on this and just wow! This story is amazing! It's practically a novel, heck if this were a novel I'm sure it would be a best seller. I can't think of a single thing that I didn't like. Perfection!
-- Lex354 on 4/22/2014 12:25:51 AM with a score of 0
Great story. At the time I'm writing this, I am very close to exploring every possibility. Not just every epilogue, but every possible death. And there are a lot of those. My favorite thing is how you encounter the same people in different circumstances however you live your life in this game.
-- jeray2000 on 4/19/2014 11:56:21 PM with a score of 0
I conquered SPAAAAACE.
-- Drakoblare on 4/19/2014 6:12:39 PM with a score of 0
Wow. This was a fantastic story it was well written, engaging, and you really feel invested in the story. I know many people will complain about the lack of choices in it for a choose your own adventure story. But for what it was, it was incredible.
-- Nightsky on 4/19/2014 1:51:02 AM with a score of 0
Amazing story! Not a game though.
-- voyageur1979 on 4/18/2014 1:07:25 AM with a score of 0
It was a great story!
-- Pitchi on 4/15/2014 11:13:40 AM with a score of 0
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