Homo Perfectus 7

a Sci-Fi by SindriV

Commended by BerkaZerka on 9/21/2019 8:53:58 AM

Player Rating6.87/8

"#26 overall, #6 for 2012"
based on 308 ratings since 09/09/2012
played 8,449 times (finished 285)

Story Difficulty4/8

"march in the swamp"

Play Length6/8

"It'll be a while, better grab a SnickersĀ®"

Maturity Level5/8

"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.

The title "Homo Perfectus" may not be very accurate for this story, as you do not play as a Homo Perfectus. Instead, you play as the vengeful former Imperfect Baryon, who fights against injustice, wherever he finds it, even if it includes the law.

This story is somewhat shorter than other Homo Perfectus stories, but still a vital part of the saga. 

Whether you can achieve the Super-heroic ending or not depends on choices you make in the very beginning, so if you can't seem to reach it, then it is possible that you simply made the wrong decisions.

Player Comments

not as good as 1
-- jdla3 on 11/15/2020 9:58:31 PM with a score of 0
good, good, nice beans and toasty endings
-- holylemonaple on 11/7/2020 12:35:28 PM with a score of 0
i. love. it.
-- Fermosa on 5/24/2020 3:01:09 AM with a score of 0
This was a great story, with a sort of twist at the end. I really enjoyed reading it. The character development was also very good, and I liked this how this story explained the cliffhangerish ending in the previous storygame. The only thing I would suggest is to perhaps add more choices. At times it felt a bit linear, but the choices do determine the ending. There were barely any grammatical errors - I just found a few minor ones like commas being in the wrong place. Also, I felt disappointed when it seems all the characters were being killed off, but the ending proved otherwise (I guess I'm just the sort of person who likes happy endings...) Overall, I really enjoy this series. It sort of resembles the Flash movies, with a team of enhanced people fighting enhanced villains.
-- Mystic_Warrior on 12/4/2019 12:59:22 AM with a score of 0
try again
-- humpfrey on 12/3/2019 7:39:23 PM with a score of 0
It was good
-- Nicolai on 6/11/2019 5:20:26 PM with a score of 0
Amazing! Some typos, but a great story
-- Random Man 7 on 12/19/2018 7:06:28 PM with a score of 0
-- khadijahzahra09 on 10/26/2018 9:54:11 AM with a score of 0
This really was awesome and not just because I got the Super-heroic ending which took me many tries. Eventually I figured it out and I am happy for it to end with both Eve and byorn alive. Great job
-- Francesca1986 on 10/19/2018 4:59:40 PM with a score of 0
SUPER HEROIC ENDING. I loved this one the most. Mostly because I am a fan of space and time travel. Best one in my opinion
-- nm13757 on 4/21/2018 2:19:46 PM with a score of 0
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