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played 1,129 times (finished 98)
"walk in the park"
"A well spent lunch break"
"aren't you a little too old to be trick or treating"
Some material may be inappropriate for persons under age 13. If this were a movie, it would probably be PG-13.
You wake up hungry. It's time to go to the supermarket.
I have very mixed feelings about this.
The story itself had a lot of choices, but little detail. The branching was pretty good, but a storygame just doesn't feel like a storygame when you don't provide a lot of detail and plot development.
This storygame certainly had quite a bit of lolrandom humor, but I did smile a few times. Some of this was funny, but some parts were rather cringy.
The storygame isn't something i'd really want to read again. I mean, yeah, it's entertaining, but only for the first few clicks before it just becomes stale.
The characters had no development at all, and pretty much every single one seemed to be thrown in for plot convenience. We don't get any details on them, and they just have no personality.
I did like the writing style. I'd want to read more from this author if they were a little more careful with the lolrandom humor and provided more development for the setting, characters, and plot.
The situations were very illogical, and the "artwork" seemed pretty lazy. All in all, a good way to pass five minutes I suppose, but nothing too special.
on 7/25/2017 2:43:18 AM
This wasn't a bad storygame. The artwork was interesting. The story was random but sort of funny and entertaining. You did a pretty good job with branching paths, but there were some issues. It was short but it told a story.
There was a loop where you could go to the church, walk away, and go back to the church again. It didn't feel like that was intentional. The links that you weren't "allowed" to choose unless you chose a certain path could have been solved with variables. I agree with others in the comments that the page numbers and letters for choices were distracting and felt unnecessary.
on 10/13/2014 3:06:21 PM
So I really enjoyed this one. It was silly and I can appreciate some good silly nonsense. Not to mention the art is impeccable. I made it through every path of this game in under 10 min just so I could find all the pictures, like a scavenger hunt!
Two downsides: #1 There were a lot of wording and punctuation errors. Some editing would definitely serve this story well.
#2 The part where all the stories lead to the roof and each link tells you if you should pick it based on what choices you made before broke the illusion (I can't really think of any other way to put it) for me. But I get it and frankly I didn't mind that part because it allowed me know what I was looking for when I went back and played again 4 more times.
I think that dog/cat fight picture is going to be my new screensaver hope that's okay with you Razer105.
on 7/3/2018 1:16:18 AM
Not the best, not the worst. Exquisite sense of humor.
on 6/23/2018 10:48:25 AM
There were a few grammar mistakes and overall the story could have been better.
on 5/31/2018 11:59:11 AM
Just a so-so game. Too far-fetched to be real, to real to be fantasy. Fail. Sorry. :(
on 1/23/2017 5:39:50 PM
Loved it! So many different paths and choices to mess around with, oh and it was pretty funny.
on 7/31/2016 8:24:05 PM
Really short, but funny.
on 2/15/2016 12:54:36 PM
As far as length it could have a few more choices. But overall it is a fun game.
on 10/1/2015 12:57:49 PM
It's a bit random. Not a bad story, but not great either
-- Jordi P on 2/26/2015 12:16:58 PM
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