Ineptitude 2: ELECTRIC BOOGALOO
"Too few ratings to be ranked"
played 282 times (finished 33)
"no possible way to lose"
"So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe"
"must be at least this tall to play"
Contains content that may not be suitable for persons under age 10. If this were a movie, it would probably be between G and PG.
Write or be SHAMED!!! *Any resemblance to real life persons, living or dead, is entirely coincidential.
I'll admit, I actually really liked this. It left me laugh out loud several times. It was especially relatable considering the recent contest CYS just held. You are good at writing humour. The grammar could've been improved a bit, and I would've liked to see more consistency with the line breaks. Overall, it was still quite enjoyable.
on 1/13/2020 1:22:36 AM with a score of 0
You adorable, dumbass son of a sick bastard, I was actually reading a CYS story a while back when my roomate began to imitate the very one in your story. Awesome!
Cute, fun, evasive. A+ on dodging any real responsibility.
on 12/18/2019 10:30:29 AM with a score of 0
Wow, that was quite the self-deprecating fluff piece. I like it. Good job, Cricket.
on 12/9/2019 3:12:20 PM with a score of 0
I just like everything Cricket does. The words could all be random pounding on the keyboard for all I care.
on 12/5/2019 10:21:49 AM with a score of 0
True story, bro
on 12/2/2019 2:56:20 PM with a score of 0
The perfect sequel to the perfect story. Great job Cricket.
on 12/2/2019 11:26:12 AM with a score of 0
I loved it. You really captured the CYS spirit.
on 12/2/2019 10:20:49 AM with a score of 0
As your older sister, I can only support your decisions to the best of my abilities and wholeheartedly. And with some shred of wholesomeness.
Cricket, please return home after whatever this is. Father is worried and mother is drinking again.
Yes, this is a roundabout way of saying that your story is umm, bad. I rated it generously only so you may gain some semblance of conscience or regret (hopefully both) and do what you know is right at the end of the day.
Yours always, Thara.
I've been renting your bed out to hobos while you were away, so you may want to burn the sheets.
Actually, you may want to burn the entire mattress.
on 12/2/2019 1:07:27 AM with a score of 0
lmao fucking noob get good
on 12/1/2019 4:21:50 PM with a score of 0
Great book, this should be a tough decision for the contest.
on 12/1/2019 1:31:46 PM with a score of 0
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